let me see the greatfulness that seeks inside of this planet
another gun shot through the night and all this shit inherits
some more demerits, this trick has got me feeling it deep in my skin
im tired of diminishing of it this is what keeps me tied from within
another sinful day and blissful night what can you do
scream and shout as im about to make it right for all of you
what is it that demands regret for all that leeks out in a sec
tired of seeing bodys hanging from there necks screaming for respect
lashing out from the best till there aint nothing left in the nest
aint a soul remaining another man straining to take the test
every birth on earth brings training and racing to a new height
as the curse grows girth you pleading the demon for yet another fight
cuz the shits got worse its not getting better through the night
what is there left to do this man aint ready to see the light
got so much in him, the strength gets rougher without repent
where its at the point where he’s at the brink of his life, its all spent
out of focus, of out reality, just the loss of another man’s animosity
strong hold of will aint no time left to kill, he’s at the brink of adversity
the shrill and thrill of his life show the ups and downs of a fight
as he’s about to get grilled from existence let his courage seek through the night

this was interesting. Not bad. Might I make a suggestion though?
Be sure to word your sentences just a tad bit better:

"let me see the greatfulness that seeks inside of this planet"

how does greatfulness seek inside of something? A better way of rewording it would be:

"let me see the greatfulness that rests within this planet"

"im tired of diminishing of it this is what keeps me tied from within"

The "diminishing of it" part sounds a lil off, i don't know what you're trying to say but "diminishing FROM it" sounds a lil better. Not bad, I think you should expand this a lil bit because like I said it's interesting.

yeah i was iffy about the diminishing line but thanks for feed , and i like the rests instead of seek better in the first line too, peace