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10 bars min
15 bar ma><
due on thursady
1 bar equal to 2 lines
no biting, recycling, dickryding
no late shows..
goodluck
pz

aiyo this shit is no joke cuz aint shit funny/
bout me leaving u wrapped in more band aids than a mummy/
this cocky bastard thinks hes the best in the world/
i say hes more of a bitch than tits on the chest of a girl/
your like a hungry fish, always biting lines/
i cant lose this like im batman fighting crime/
your the oppostie of rappin, its more like "nippar"/ (nip par)
my punches hit hard and leave you exposed like hoes in a strip bar/
you couldnt be a champion eatiny lyrical wheaties/
your rhymes couldnt be "sweet" if they had diabetes/
if u call me an ass than at least i know why your kissing me/
your punches dont hurt, cuz there just flat out missin me/
i remebered last time we battled i tko'd u one two three/
you take this shit all serious, but its all in fun for me/
you should take N-O off your name, cuz your nuthing but a joke/
you prob sprot the trench naked like you got sumthing in the coat/
sorry nojoke, but this torunament is sudden death/
ill completell wipe u out, till not even your blood is left/
you better not step, run, cuz here come mylast and next punch/
have fun votin in the fianl round cuz your outta this till next month/

dont ever post a rhyme in other's battles let alone in a tournment match

Now why’s this guy rapping about his medical problems,
My troubles I get the revolver to solve‘m,/
But enough about me lets talk about this bitch,
Rotten misfit the 5th hits bitches with quick spits,/
Clowns I lay’em down cause they think I stay jokin,
Leave’m dead in the motherfuckin street brains smokin,/
I stay locin’ your flow’s inferior I’m way better,
De-header I’ll leave a nigga under the weather,/
My modes intimidating hot even disintegrating,
Your mom hates blowing me daily but loves the paying,( $3.13 )/
Your style has been tampered with, I’m in demand again,
You say words that no thug uses- what are you Cannabis,/
You scampering, scared of this, want a pair of pant to piss,look I'm done playin games with you bitch can you answer this?,/
Do you really want beef,
your moms broke and hungry,
for some fucking lunch meat,
“May I have some nut please.”,- ( thats kash's mom talking )/
Now haters plunge to the floor, for I run in your fort,
I got a rocket launcher you brought a gun to this war,/
It’s my ball game on my court, I live for this sport,/
Soldiers drop the floor wheezing, my 4 -4 heating,
Give me a reason to leave Kash on the floor bleeding,
Praying to the deacon to let ya bitch ass keeps breathing,/
Ya’ll seeing demons... naw that's just my and my team,
We smash on you bustas with platinum I. Beams,/
I’ll make ya eyes bleed, shit dripping like vyseen,
I’m hard like steal chips you soft like ice cream,/
You clam you could bruise, wound, gun down, and batter me,
stop blabberin,
just remember to pray for your life before you start battlin./

This was definately a toughy, but very entertaining...

Kash11 - You're a very funny guy. The one line that struck out to me was the "diabetes" line. LMAO

NoJoke - It took a while for you say something that really struck out for me. But one thing that took me was "May I Have Some Nut Please..." I wish there was more comedy like that.

Vote - Kash11. Your text was the lyrical version of "It's not the size of the boat, but the motion in the ocean."

hmmmmmm close.

Flow - Kash
Multis - Pretty close but ill say nojoke
Vocab - Nojoke by a little
Punches - Kash

KASH
liked the wheaties line, made me smile.
the last diss was nice
prolly one of your best verses


NOJOKE
Good multis, flow was a little off in places, but still a good drop
lol @ 'May i have some nut please?'
nice spit keep it up

Vote - Kash coz he had better punches and its a battle

Kash:
your like a hungry fish, always biting lines/
^^ nice

your the oppostie of rappin, its more like "nippar"/ (nip par)
^^ mmm.... hehe

your rhymes couldnt be "sweet" if they had diabetes/
^^ lol

if u call me an ass than at least i know why your kissing me/
^^ dope

you should take N-O off your name, cuz your nuthing but a joke/
^^ nice

ill completell wipe u out, till not even your blood is left/
^^ allright yeah

have fun votin in the fianl round cuz your outta this till next month/
^^ good finisher

Nice flow and good content Kash man.... reading No Jokes now

NoJoke:
Leave’m dead in the motherfuckin street brains smokin,/
^^ ok - went well with tha previous line

Your mom hates blowing me daily but loves the paying,( $3.13 )/
^^ meh - not sure about "i have sex with ya mum" lines

You say words that no thug uses- what are you Cannabis,/
^^ good line definitely

Do you really want beef,
your moms broke and hungry,
for some fucking lunch meat,
“May I have some nut please.”,- ( thats kash's mom talking )/
^^ lol but still mum lines are lame

Now haters plunge to the floor, for I run in your fort,
I got a rocket launcher you brought a gun to this war,/
^^ allright

Ya’ll seeing demons... naw that's just my and my team,
We smash on you bustas with platinum I. Beams,/
^^ ok i spose

I’ll make ya eyes bleed, shit dripping like vyseen,
I’m hard like steal chips you soft like ice cream,/
^^ dopest line in ya verse for me

Still a good flow but i don't reckon tha content was quite up to Kash.

So i'm a vote for Kash11. Props ta both.

PZ>