where do i start yo im stuck for words/
ima scream till my lungs burst and im fuckin heard/
sick of a normal life, i need to be bright in the spotlight/
just one god damn oppurtunity, how can this man advance/
but maybe its like a fat dude with a hot chick, aint got a chance/
im tryin to make it, gotta try to figure out a way/
till im getting paid mad g's like six figures every day/
but its like im tom cruise, cuz this is mission impossbile/
with both fists i gotta duel, i know this is improbable/
but until my last breath i wont let myself be a faliure/
aint gunna end up like bunny rabbit in a trailer/
i got myself convinced, now only millions left/
its like a spit to only thousands, but a billion slept/
every time i start goin forward i end up back in the same mess/
my lameness will leave me nameless and obviusly fameless/
its a shame, so many peeple "dream" but only a few wake up/
take up their destiny, every day face jobs and make up/
maybe someday, nah its probably not even worth wishing for/
the world my lake of oppurtunity, but i dunno what im fishing for/
shit is more than just a word, its a definition of life/
its hollywood versus the streets, and im flat out missing the fight/
with dynamite im strapping my bod, i aint gunna get paid if rappins a job/
fact is ill sob one day, fuck it ill pray, anything can happen with god/

nice deep drop, thougth the starting was good, the middle then fadded off a bit with the flow but the end was real good and put a nice finish to this spit. vocab and rhyme patterns wasnt spectacular but effective and there were so hot lines in this piece, nice work man,peace

quite nice and deep.I liked it...

Nice piece of work Kash.....You've always been one of my favs. I told U that I was too busy to battle right now but I owe U a re-match. Our last battle was EXTREMELY close. Let's do it...can we turn our verses in by 10p.m. tonight???

Tight topic and the flow was really good. I think is the best I've seen from you...

every time i start goin forward i end up back in the same mess/
my lameness will leave me nameless and obviusly fameless/


For some reason I really like this part.

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dope drop. deep.... nice flow and tha vocab was good as always

Kept on topic well..... real deep.... i too liked tha part Shady Mak quoted.....

Its dope. nice to see more from you

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ms mac- yea by ten tonite is fine if for some reason either of u cant post a verse just post tommorow

thanx everyone for feedback