This is off another board i post on, its acollab wit 2 heads in my crew on there, its a pretty long read but its an ill drop! feed back wanted-- ~1ne [made it a smaller font so its not HUGE.. ;)]


Sinking Into Sweet Uncertainty

Focus Talkin…--- I’m so sick of Bitches an hoez…. They can jump off or get fliped off, that’s simple… Stay the fuck out our way sluts- Ain't No Stoppin This...

FocuS Busts In Like A Knife Piercin Thru Ya Sternum…

Thoughts provoked by Cold~Blood, emotion wit more Prophetikal~Wisdom than a Bold~Thug/
If i had ma Heart-Broken by a hoe n held a 'Frozen-Snail’ that'd b one-way i'm Feel'n a Cold~Slug//
I'm jus completely sick an tired Of~Ya~Bitches more than Tyson's competitors WERE sick Of~Tha~Stitches/
The sight of death on ya face, Heals ma pain like 'Morphine', But my anguish makes me Slug~Ya~Bitches//
Come on MA, Don't act like this is all My-Fault, Thas like sayin Jews deserved what fuckin Hitler~Did/
Regardless of who ya are; Sex, Race Er Species; I'm worse than Lennox I wont Hit-Ya, I'll Split~Ur~Wig//
So i do drugs like i'm teenager stuck in 'TRAFFIC', Does that makes me an undefined Un-Equal~Soul?/
I'm speakin straight to ya bitch, wit Verbal-Tactics stronger than Herbal-Acid like i'm jus An~Evil~Soul//
Open Ya~Eyes, Rea~lize this "FocuS'n" out as if it's BLOOD pour'n from Curt's nose, Cuz Ya told Real~Liez/
Look inta my Pupils, I'm a Heal~Lives by Endin-Your's n pull'n out ya Vocal-Chord; Now look in these Real~Eyes//
I see thru hoez like I’ve got invisible Eye~Lids, wit 20-20 ‘Vision’ caused by ‘Inscisions’ straight in my Eye~Ris/ (IRIS)
If ya switch tha letters in MOTHER-IN-LAW ya get WOMAN-HITLER, that’s enuff reason to leave em Life~Less//
Tha next bitch gettin ‘HIT’ wit ‘PUNCHES’ directly into her Trechea (sp?) an if she begs still I’m not Takin~Her/
Already on her knees an I’m not Makin~Her, Still not R; I Sip-on-coke-an-rum, But I’m not Hittin-It n Break’n~her//
Hoes play Mind~Games so I’ll play My~Games I’ll pull Their-BRAIN out the MEM-BRANE, an try ta Find~Flames/
MAYBE then they’ll have Hot-Ideas, If they still Some-Way Com-Plain, I’m a Cram-Their-Thoughts n Bind~Brains//

FOCUS – HOOK
Time blows by like tha bitter wind on a Cold~Night
I think it's time bitches know an fuckin' get Told~Right//
Fuck ever bein helpless and Sinking Into Sweet Uncertainty
I'm a soldier with nuthin but TIME an no one's Hurtin~Me//
This D.I.O.S, Focus n PP mixture stayin like Day Ending~Night
Our Truth's Bending~Right; Fuck bitches, an God Pending~Light//

Physicalphysis Breaks In, Like A Dick Thru The Cervix Causin Bleedin…

what r da differences-between chicken-wit-weave or slutly bitches-wit-green wit a ricidlous-fiend//~
yo these bitches-is mean, they r inches-from-seein..a fist-wit-a-ring..have they tits-hittin-they-spleen//~
Hoes is bootleg..some fools-said they man just died..poof-dead??...nigga who givin u-head??//~
love? if u in it? u-dead...don’t b stupid..most b afta ya loot-kid, u just recruited 4 a female 2 do-shyt//~
get-mad-at-me-please,check out adam-and-eve, we would all be-laughin-and-pleased just she didn’t sat-on his-knees//~
releashed-clapp-n-repeat, now we all punished, cause of dat dumb-bitch wanted something 2 plummet her stomach//~
i’m heated like someone roastin-me, the one that means dat most-2-me, i don’t want close-2-me, dats not how it suppose-2-be//~
hopefully, she over-me...even tho my flow consoled her ovaries, knowin-me, i’ll deny i even know-da-b//~
heart and soul-will-freeze, icy-veins...now whenever i-see-dames, i-remain, fight-these-thangs//~
bitch slappin bitches so vicious, dat in da instant my wrist-hit, u couldn’t recognize da mistress,..i’m pissed-kid//~
Lies-Deceit-Betrayal, dat has-to-be-females, thats-da-key-details of how those bastards-beat-thee-male//

FOCUS- HOOK
Time blows by like tha bitter wind on a Cold~Night
I think it's time bitches know an fuckin' get Told~Right//
Fuck ever bein helpless and Sinking Into Sweet Uncertainty
I'm a soldier with nuthin but TIME an no one's Hurtin~Me//
This D.I.O.S, Focus n PP mixture stayin like Day Ending~Night
Our Truth's Bending~Right; Fuck bitches, an God Pending~Light//

D.I.O.S. Steps In Hard, Like 3 Day Old Jizz On Tha Face Of Tha Dead…

Thru tha Greatest depressions~
pulling-tha-wessons got me thru important-lessons...
depending on tha girlies id pull on tha different mental-weapons...
weapons of mind body and soul im only paying toll to mah-stressings...
not-messin i was ready to be put in tha wooden vest heaven-restin..
testin-mah-capabilities hey-baby-e u-see where u got-me no more da playboy im more into~affection...
erections-for-another-bitch i slipped-dipped and now im-sick-wit.. tha relationships-illness and i try to surpress~them ~
*correction* i let-them-stem out from they roots jus so i can test n get time-to-spend...

::then::
Its not even one female its about a handfull....arrest them!!

they stole-mah-heart im-fallin-apart dont get-me-to-start~
jus a flint-spark will let me free with these 'remarks'~
mental-scars harder to buy like car-parts~
sub-par-car equals luv from tha ghetto-stars...put-up-ya-gaurd!!~
Shes-Far no luck retrieving while she recieveing 5 insects reasons left at-tha-bar~
Featherd-and-tar'd shud be punishment for leaving-me-in-harm~
*Lard* feeling-like-shit like stealing-ur-pics left me alone like a baby 2 a crack mom and im-da-retard~
See~charm cuz-i-dont i-spoke to-those girlies who id rather seen~drown in a sea~town then see~bars// (go to jail)

FOCUS-HOOK ~2x
Time blows by like tha bitter wind on a Cold~Night
I think it's time bitches know an fuckin' get Told~Right//
Fuck ever bein helpless and Sinking Into Sweet Uncertainty
I'm a soldier with nuthin but TIME an no one's Hurtin~Me//
This D.I.O.S, Focus n PP mixture stayin like Day Ending~Night
Our Truth's Bending~Right; Fuck bitches, an God Pending~Light//

oh this is major hot, first off, your verse was ill as shit, i mean analogies like crazy in there and i like the long bars, great flow

did you write the second verse cuz it seems familiar to your style, anyway that once was ill too and the third had awesome multi's and real nice flow, god dammit that was an awesome verse, the whole thing was real good,

major props to this drops, peace

no AAM i didn't write the 2nd verse.. read it thats their name.. :p

but str8 up nice lookin..... upp'n fer more...

~1ne

sorry i didnt comment last night i didnt have time but damn reading it today this is hot as shit

Thoughts provoked by Cold~Blood, emotion wit more Prophetikal~Wisdom than a Bold~Thug/
If i had ma Heart-Broken by a hoe n held a 'Frozen-Snail’ that'd b one-way i'm Feel'n a Cold~Slug//
^^^^ill opener

what r da differences-between chicken-wit-weave or slutly bitches-wit-green wit a ricidlous-fiend//~
yo these bitches-is mean, they r inches-from-seein..a fist-wit-a-ring..have they tits-hittin-they-spleen//~
Hoes is bootleg..some fools-said they man just died..poof-dead??...nigga who givin u-head??//~
love? if u in it? u-dead...don’t b stupid..most b afta ya loot-kid, u just recruited 4 a female 2 do-shyt//~
^^^dunno who this dude is but hes got some ill multies in there

other verses were tight as well this drops pretty much off the scale

str8 fer tha luv kash... upp'n this piece

.. upp'n this piece... i'm sick of heads sleepin' when this piece is ownin an runs circles around pretty much every other text piece on here right now...