Standing alone
Ahead of you all
Brought downwith no place to call home
Caring less
Bleeding more
Fucked over 'cause I'm fate's whore

Marching on through the cold dead streets
Fear in homes and angry faces I meet
Just persecution of the weakened defense
Preaching tolerance while teaching intolerance
In defiance
False Alliance
Another false promise from Hell

I pierce my throat and hands because of you
Yet even though you torture me; you wonder why I despise you
I'll end what you know and see
I may cease to be
False prophet of the angel of death
Preacher of the life as I deal in contempt
Your failure's my gain
Your pain puts me in a state that's happily insane

Blood rains
As my time in blood reigns
Letter from the leaders
Written on pages of the bible in liters (Of blood)
Got nothing left
No hope or life to contest

Now at my dying hour you ask for forgiveness
Will I forgive or just leave pestilence
It's the beginning of the end days
Your life won't even stay
Forgiveness in pity
Destruction of cities
Burning piles of bodies fill the sky with black smoke
As what's left of hope chokes

I like it

"Preaching tolerance while teaching intolerance"

lol

Good work. Your song structure has gotten dope.

Seams more like poetry... I'm guessing that it is... Do we even have a poetry thread?.... Fuck it, this was nice mayne.

appreciate it. Any other opinions?