2 new joints here.... http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/shadymakavelimusic.htm

Throw Away thing - man... i swear ya voice is gonna wreck my headphones lol Wasn't really feeling tha hook sorry :( I thought ya flow was good in this.... and tha beat is sick.... quality is a little rough but i can still make out what you say....

Woulda done collab but “Oblivion’s”-stuck/
^^ OI!?!?! is that a diss? lol... well, can we change tha beat again (sorry to be a pain).... i'll pm you maybe about a "Josh" or "Stunt" diss?

“Shady Maks voice is too deep. The sound is new-to-me/
Don’t be mad someday you’ll hit puberty/
And other’s complain about the “UK accent”/
When they sound froo-froo like they belong in a beauty-pagent/
^^ dope and i think thats at Josh tha last bit

In-these-rap, 50-caps blasted instantly-at//
Opposers, soldiers in-these-traps//
^^ nicety nice

Overall.... i liked it. I think you flowed with tha beat tha best i've ever seen from you and tha beat suits ya voice (which some don't feel but i do). A long track but i sat through it all and enjoyed it. A dope drop - and i see Pac in tha end with basically tha chorus from "Go To Sleep" - being uncertain i'll just assume Eminem borrowed it lol
Whats froo-froo tho? lol Yeah - this track was bloomin' good crikey guvnor....

Don't Blame Tha Rhyme...

Familiar beat... funny that(!) nice flow but not as good as tha throw away track IMO.... EXCELLENT subject... that idea is dope...

Probably nothing but drugs-and-jiberish-/
Thugs-and-”Hit ya bitch” shootin’ slugs and “get ya shit”/
^^ dope

And for all your work your slept-on and jeered/
“Your voice is too low” “I don’t like this here”/
^^ yeah... nice

Again not sure on tha chorus.... when you said "What" and "soldier life" scared tha shit out of me hehehehe
you puttting all of ya effort into it and its hype....

I like this..... i see you moved on past me quick.... although it sounds like ya having sex in tha chorus lol "Ugh" "yes" hehe :)

Nice outro.... all dope..... a lot to quote which i didn't 'cos i'm clearly an idiot

Good drops - looking forward to yet MORE work from my favourite little Don-muffin

PZ>

really ill shit...i agree wit obliv.
the hook wasnt that great..

other than that it was tight....oh and your voice sounded really bad(not beef) it was probably just my speakers...

REMEMBER ME???hehe
IM BACK...

i liked ya flow but tha voice was kinda ruff and i have good headphones. it might be tha u too close to tha mic.I like dont the blame tha rhyme better though the quality was worse than throw away track 2, ya flow was better but u mad close to tha mic i think. It also sounded like u hurried through the hook. Overall good drop though.

Originally posted by eminemsgirl4lfe
REMEMBER ME???

Oh god... i was trying not too

PZ>

yo is there any where to get the lyrics otherwise i cant give feedback cuz my comp is ghetto and all that and freezes when downloading audios

I tried to reply to this earlier but my computer was bein a bitch nigga

“Shady Maks voice is too deep. The sound is new-to-me/
Don’t be mad someday you’ll hit puberty/
And other’s complain about the “UK accent”/
When they sound froo-froo like they belong in a beauty-pagent/

This part cracked me up lol. I liked a lot of different parts of both songs but that was my favorite. Ricky does have a deep ass voice haha...but people hatin are just jealous ;)

lol @ the 'ugh' 'yes'

:D ....Thanks for feedback...Uppin'

Originally posted by Shady Makaveli
Oh yeah I forgot to put before "drop links" lol

Oh, now you mention it then.....

http://www.eminemweb.com/board/showthread.php?s=&threadid=5395

Since i already gave feedback and votes in tha tourny are few and far between

PZ> man

PZ>

^^ Done

Uppin'... Come on peep damn you! lol