Okay - i like it but you won't lol And as i said, this is nearly certainly tha only reply i'll make ta any disses from MCD. And i kept some shit back

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/oblivionmusicmusic.htm

As it said, tha lyrics are better than tha delivery tho' it prolly sounds better in lo-fi lol

Drop links for returned feedback

Thanks! Oh, and any people that can't hear audio, you can go tha page and rate tha lyrics on there please!!!
Thanks peeps - and be honest!!!

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Anyone doesn't understand a line 'cos its more off-board relationship, say and i'll tell ya what it means.

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pretty ill shit...some of the words seemed to fall off the beat to much(they didnt flow with it)...but everything else was tight...

Originally posted by gangstalita
pretty ill shit...some of the words seemed to fall off the beat to much(they didnt flow with it)...but everything else was tight...

thanks - i know it was a little dodgy sometimes but i liked it too :)

I'll return tha favour for you when a see a thread up of yours

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Some of it was iffy, but some real hot shit man! Why the hell are you lil squirrels arguing over a nut for?

?????just a question not beef but was that aimed at me tyke......ok,thanks obliv...

yo nice shit obliv, that was hot, i like the hook alot, the flow was real nice and the lyrics were real tight, your flow throughout the whole diss was pretty good, nice rap

Originally posted by Tyke
SWhy the hell are you lil squirrels arguing over a nut for?

lol - well..... it goes like this

We did a mixtape and then my comp died JUST before i could get all tha songs, and i managed to save and produce 4. then mcd asked for them, and i said i think we should do more than 4 'cos 4's a waste of a cd and another 3 say and its an EP. He got pissed and thats what half led to tha slacker diss "I'm Gonna Make It" (as well as me cancelling him coming to record at my house 'cos i was sick one weekend). So then he asks again and i'm pissed at tha slackers diss 'cos i don't reckon its justified, and i say (basically): "why should i? how do i know you're not using me and then you're gonna diss me again when i give them to you?". so then he said it'd be beef. He dissed me with tha other in this forum ("Fuck Obwivion Records" i think its called which is funny 'cos theres only me in Oblivion Records lol) and i dissed him back.

I didn't and still don't wanna beef with him - partly 'cos i've known him for 7 years and we been through quite a lot together and also 'cos i still wanna work with Vokal and Shifty and if we're beefing, it'd put pressure on them to "choose a side" or be careful.

But hey - i'm not gonna back down when he disses me when provoked with basically nothing.

But thanks for tha feedback - some bits were iffy (which is a shame 'cos i criticised bens diss for similar iffyness lol and now i'm gonna get it in tha neck) i know but i still liked it!!
Gangstalita, nah - he was wondering - as all ^^^ that explains - why me and D are beefing all of a sudden.
And thanks All About me - much appreciated.

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Well I hope you kids can try and work shit out, this doesn't sound like it's important enough to stop being mates.

Originally posted by Tyke
Well I hope you kids can try and work shit out, this doesn't sound like it's important enough to stop being mates.

My thoughts exactly dawg - i want this ended now but he doesn't seem willing. Maybe he'll come round and we'll sought something out. 'Cos worse than me being pissed off is me being upset at tha thought of this is all blowing up.

But yeah - and i just noticed tha writing on ya avatar... didn't i once call you that? :D

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i thought this was pretty ill... i liked the beat
hook is dope.. lyrics are hot.. felt as you came hard

your voice and delivery are a little errr...not that good and you seemed to be spitting too slow like you had to force yourself into time or something.....
on the lyrics side of things though this was sick, a lot of good personal lines i felt and not to much filler.

"Telling that girl in Laken Heath what you upset-about//" ?? whats that all about??

good track....if you spent more time on getting the delivery and flow down i think it'd be sick

you do realise that this may be tha last diss from you but.... when ben hears it the beefs just gonna get more and more personal and it's just gonna get worse and ya'll gonna start shooting up parish or some shit!!!:D nah really though i haven't heard it yet but by the souns of the qoutes about amber he's gonna be steamin' :mad: i ain't takin' sides cuz i'm gonna start producin' music cuz my lyrics are poor and i think my voice is gay :o

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Originally posted by emcee1
your voice and delivery are a little errr...not that good and you seemed to be spitting too slow like you had to force yourself into time or something.....good track....if you spent more time on getting the delivery and flow down i think it'd be sick

thanks dawg - yeah, i kinda rushed through this.

Vokale - yeah, i know. Kinda wished i hadn't posted it now!! lol but he just pissed me off 'cos hes sometimes a hypocrite and i been down lately so.... I'm looking forward to tha next one too 'cos i reckon he went easy on me in tha first and if we both get shit off our chests we can maybe patch it up.

Heres hoping.


Thanks mentol - :D

Uppin'

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Damn this was personal... Sad to see you two fighting...

Anyways it does seem rushed like you said... Like it coulda used couple more takes to iron out... Like the intro... Wasn't feeling the chorus... It didn't seem to fit well with the beat... Overall pretty good though...

Originally posted by Shady Makaveli
Damn this was personal... Sad to see you two fighting...

Anyways it does seem rushed like you said... Like it coulda used couple more takes to iron out... Like the intro... Wasn't feeling the chorus... It didn't seem to fit well with the beat... Overall pretty good though...

^^ you slag it off and then you say pretty good? lol :(

I know - but apparently one more diss from MCD and this might get resolved.

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Well I meant I like the intro.... And lyrically it's tight just delivery issues mostly...

Fucking link. Soundclick is so slow.

Originally posted by V i L E
Fucking link. Soundclick is so slow.

yea soundclick is turing gay

Soundclick has BEEN hmoosexual for a really long time;

Well I meant I like the intro.... And lyrically it's tight just delivery issues mostly...
^^ i know man, i was only joshing with ya

Soundclick has BEEN hmoosexual for a really long time;
^^ yeah, i know, you gotta love it :)

Uppin'

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