now i got me a feeling this will be damn good/
im bout to spit a bunch of lines all bout my manhood/
like every man should, im cocky to say the least/
make bitches say "holy" shit so much i should spray a priest/
plus its so hot ill grab a cold bitch and sun her/
its like a storm, hence why they call me the thunder from down under/
i call slut and make there mouth dry after the suck my walnuts/
big dick yea, huge cock uh huh, and big balls yup/
make any prickless pussy coward burn/
get more clit than kidrock plus howard stern/
get in any hunnies tummy and fuckin melt that shit/
id hide my dick, but there aint a belt that fits/
always gettin hard shit, bust a load on the carpet/
using as a measuring tool cuz its as big as a yardstick/
and plus know my thing plays the string right like a guitar pick/
when i gets me head, it flows like the niagra/
i bet mines bigger than any of yours overdosing on viagra/
make girls say damn yo, from brazil to orlando/
make em shit in their pants like they goin comando/
hunt your moms pussy till im tired and cant hump more/
speaking of your mom, tell her i left the check on the front porch/


keystyle written in 10 mins hope u think its funny

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Nice spit i thought.

its like a storm, hence why they call me the thunder from down under/
i call slut and make there mouth dry after the suck my walnuts/
big dick yea, huge cock uh huh, and big balls yup/
^^ funny bits there, especially tha last line. really worked for me

get more clit than kidrock plus howard stern/
^^ lol

using as a measuring tool cuz its as big as a yardstick
^^ don't boast and shame us small dicked fools

make girls say damn yo, from brazil to orlando/
make em shit in their pants like they goin comando
^^ fucking hell tha lay out of that lines phat!! Would sound awesome in audio

speaking of your mom, tell her i left the check on the front porch
^^ lol a final insult

Overall i thought this was dope and hilarious.... very funny. I know this saying gets overused a lot, but it would sound sick in audio. You do audio right, Kash? I get confused.

Anyway.. sick. Don't know what Ninja meant or didn't mean but i liked it. A damn good drop.

PZ>

Return feedback?
http://www.eminemweb.com/board/showthread.php?s=&threadid=5138

Text or audio feedback please man if you can. Hands? lol

PZ>

thanx for feedback its appreciated and no i dont audio yet and i currently can not download any audios becuz my computers all fucked up and winamp and kazza dont work so i cant give feedback on audios cuz i cant hear em but i should be ettin a new comp soon and ima buy a microphone and everything and start doin audio battles hopefully

thanx for feedback uppin

Originally posted by ObLiViOn
Nice spit i thought.

its like a storm, hence why they call me the thunder from down under/
i call slut and make there mouth dry after the suck my walnuts/
big dick yea, huge cock uh huh, and big balls yup/
^^ funny bits there, especially tha last line. really worked for me

get more clit than kidrock plus howard stern/
^^ lol

using as a measuring tool cuz its as big as a yardstick
^^ don't boast and shame us small dicked fools

make girls say damn yo, from brazil to orlando/
make em shit in their pants like they goin comando
^^ fucking hell tha lay out of that lines phat!! Would sound awesome in audio

speaking of your mom, tell her i left the check on the front porch
^^ lol a final insult

Overall i thought this was dope and hilarious.... very funny. I know this saying gets overused a lot, but it would sound sick in audio. You do audio right, Kash? I get confused.

Anyway.. sick. Don't know what Ninja meant or didn't mean but i liked it. A damn good drop.

PZ>


Text or audio feedback please man if you can. Hands? lol

PZ>

basically same as ob said..
also wha i said on aim

*mentol tkes control*

fair warning i will diss the fuck outt of you if you (newbies or vets)
post rhymes in other peoples topics..
as you could see... i just deleted this dudes whole 2 hours that he spent rhyme... even to say the least it was wack..

wouldnt have been tooo whack, if this was a battle. dont free post ur shit here, if u wanna battle set it up in the lounge dont just come in posting it on other ppls threads.

kash nice spit, cbf commenting in too much detail but it was pretty nice for 10 mins. basically wats already been sed ^^^
good work

peace

Originally posted by I'm_Pissed
wouldnt have been tooo whack, if this was a battle. dont free post ur shit here, if u wanna battle set it up in the lounge dont just come in posting it on other ppls threads.

kash nice spit, cbf commenting in too much detail but it was pretty nice for 10 mins. basically wats already been sed ^^^
good work

peace
:confused: why do you post here? that is retarded. The point of a message board is to have fun, and in a section called bust a rap, i figured it was ok to bust a rap. This whole "new thread for every new rap" shit is going to cause mad bandwidth problems. (maybe not, i dont picture many real emcees posting here) And i dont post in the lounge because i dont have anything to say about eminem, or 50, or d12 or any of that shit. Lighten up a little bit man, shit, have some fucking fun, dont whyne like a two year old, retaliate back...the rules on this board are way fucked....but im a newbie, so what do I know :rolleyes:

Originally posted by Lil_Dizzy

In a section called bust a rap, i figured it was ok to bust a rap.
^^ its called bus a rhyme ninkinpoop

but im a newbie, so what do I know
by definition, very little

PZ>

Let's say Eminem was playing a concert, and before anyone could applaud, Ja Rule came on stage and started rapping his shit. If you were Eminem would you be happy? If you're not posting a critique of the oreiginal rhyme, don't post a hole.

yes tyke good job cuz IF/When i see people doin it n e more i'll delete their lil rhymes an change it around to what i feel an that is honesty, kids not reading rules an understanding things is really stupid bottom line if u dont know how dont come here or to other boards...

simple is as simple does!

Originally posted by Lil_Dizzy
*mentol tkes control*

fair warning i will diss the fuck outt of you if you (newbies or vets)
post rhymes in other peoples topics..
as you could see... i just deleted this dudes whole 2 hours that he spent rhyme... even to say the least it was wack..


2 hours :rolleyes: more like 15 minutes beacause im a slow typer..but whatever you say man, your board, your rules. i can respect that...wait no i cant, no need to be a dick about it man..how about a warning or something to that extent (one that doesnt involve deleating my work)

Originally posted by Lil_Dizzy

2 hours :rolleyes: more like 15 minutes beacause im a slow typer..but whatever you say man, your board, your rules. i can respect that...wait no i cant, no need to be a dick about it man..how about a warning or something to that extent (one that doesnt involve deleating my work)

well if you didnt post your work in some one else thread it wouldnt gotten deleted now would it?..

LOL... Reminds me of that Pun song, "Get Off My Dick."

Originally posted by Lil_Dizzy
:confused: Why do you post here?

Well i originally came in to read kashes shit and i was gunna comment on it but trying to make your shit flow in my head exhausted me you little fag

I thought this shit was alright. The part about gettin more than Kid Rock and Howard Stern combined was tight, plus it was hilarious. There's something about dick rhymes that I just don't like. It's kinda corny to me. I guess that's just cause I ain't gotta speak for my dick, it speaks for itself.

Originally posted by I'm_Pissed


Well i originally came in to read kashes shit and i was gunna comment on it but trying to make your shit flow in my head exhausted me you little fag
:D i love you guys....