Hes kinda a beginer but he knows what hes doin. anyway here it is.

You know I get high, I have too, to get by
Im in my own world on a cloud in the sky
wonderin why/ inschool is an option
when I grab a machetti, wilsons neck im choppin
and you know I aint stoppin till his head is a hole
Im underground like a mole, and Im outa controll
here I go, on a roll, explodin school busses
Jews, muslims,christians, what the fuck is the difference
we all want money,drugs,and bitches
anybody that doesnt rubs me suspicious
I dont trust none of ya'll I dont trust religion, I dont trust the police or justice system, murders one way to releave stress bottled within them, why religion? sin bash a pidgen in
Im boligerant, have you dumpin the herion sering
when you hear this, I open your eyes and your mind to the lies they be given us
Napalm blast is mainly cammo, ammo with the car bomb
I dont exist, close the garage and leave the car on fade-away, suicide in a painless way
why does nobody answer when I sit down to pray
today be the day I finally lose it
I'll sell you the crack, if you aint gonna abuse it
nothin comes close to the rap that I write
cuz the shit not like the rock a friend drops in a pipe
only go out at night, a child of darkness
Just because I kill doesnt mean Im heartless, but regardless, we dont see eye to eye
Its time to fry, so tell your family goodbye
If you could rewind your life, would you dodge my knife?
or let it sink into your flesh, I slash and stab you in spit....

Alright that was long as fuck! I told him to come here and you ppl would show him how to break up his lines and shit. He will be Lil Dizzy. Dont know were he got the name from but oh well.
Give me some feedback on his shit and Ill tell him.

Peace!

thats decent drop, content was good, vocab was little simple but thats not too important, thought the flow was aight and rhymes were good, cant wait to see more of him peace

He cracks this shit off the top of his head in a min flat its crazy as hell.

I'll get him to come on here sometime so he can do some flowin.

Peace Man!

aight cool , check out my new shit,peace

hey yo punk. if your friend can really bust those rhymes with a decent flow as quick as u say he can thats tyte.. give him some credit and tell us his name. or get him on here anyways keep it up
~lates

Yeah he spits quick as hell. He calls himself Lil Dizzy. Another person but is below Dizzys level is Pskitzo. Hes gettin taught how to flow decently by Dizzy.
Im tryin to get his ass on here.
Well Peace

I really like this one... tight flow, awesome rhyme choice and placement despite not having a complex scheme... lots of pensive statements... it has a novices blunt honesty through artistic license, but an execution that seems experienced.

Originally posted by Punk
Hes kinda a beginer but he knows what hes doin. anyway here it is.

You know I get high, I have too, to get by
Im in my own world on a cloud in the sky
wonderin why/ inschool is an option
when I grab a machetti, wilsons neck im choppin
and you know I aint stoppin till his head is a hole
Im underground like a mole, and Im outa controll
here I go, on a roll, explodin school busses
Jews, muslims,christians, what the fuck is the difference
we all want money,drugs,and bitches
anybody that doesnt rubs me suspicious
I dont trust none of ya'll I dont trust religion, I dont trust the police or justice system, murders one way to releave stress bottled within them, why religion? sin bash a pidgen in
Im boligerant, have you dumpin the herion sering
when you hear this, I open your eyes and your mind to the lies they be given us
Napalm blast is mainly cammo, ammo with the car bomb
I dont exist, close the garage and leave the car on fade-away, suicide in a painless way
why does nobody answer when I sit down to pray
today be the day I finally lose it
I'll sell you the crack, if you aint gonna abuse it
nothin comes close to the rap that I write
cuz the shit not like the rock a friend drops in a pipe
only go out at night, a child of darkness
Just because I kill doesnt mean Im heartless, but regardless, we dont see eye to eye
Its time to fry, so tell your family goodbye
If you could rewind your life, would you dodge my knife?
or let it sink into your flesh, I slash and stab you in spit....

Alright that was long as fuck! I told him to come here and you ppl would show him how to break up his lines and shit. He will be Lil Dizzy. Dont know were he got the name from but oh well.
Give me some feedback on his shit and Ill tell him.

Peace!
Well, here i am, i wrote that when i got kicked out of gym class, lol. Thanks for the critisism guys, i need that shit to keep me motivated. I'll probably be posting here more often, but only in this Bust A Rap section, because eminems not realy my thing, but i keep an open mind. Although punk didnt get some of the shit right up there, he didnt fuck up too bad :D Im getting some shit together, probably solo, but ill hit yall with the audio as soon as i cop myself a microphone. The name Lil Dizzy came from this one time when my friends and i were getting fucked up at this one park. We were all pretty blazed and very drunk. We all started coming up with names for eachother for a laugh. I said "Call me Lil Dizzy" When they said why, i said "If you drank three of these damned 40s youd be a lil dizzy too!" and a good laugh was shared by all....well, peace....

Lol diz! Damn man I didnt even know thats how you got your name.
oh well. Im waitin for your ass to show up tonight maybe we can have a lil battle in rhymin' Peace!