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Cain
02-06-2003, 05:21 PM
Turned on me
Bringing me down
See you bleed
As the knife in hand hacks away
Bringing back the hands of life
Beat 'till they bring death
Addiction of death subsided by meth

Hysteria rushes through the streets
Which Witch they hunt seems to be everyone they meet
Persecuted for what I am
With the .45 I become the son of Sam
Summer of fears
All there is are tears
Homocidal madman is roaming free
Death in the streets for all to see

Bloodline cut off sprays death of the family
I'm standing here alone writing your obituary
Fading fast in life
All I have; all I want; All I'm after is the knife

Clawing at my bloody hands
Constricting the sealing bands
Nothing left to fear but the Hell to come soon
Brought by God's hatred
Brought by the way you died
It's about time you fried

Standing in the hall
Waiting for myself to finish you
Blood dripping from the wall
Gunshots spraying lead too
Death in hand
I set out to conquer the land
Sealing the fate of many
With the death of few

Ayane
02-06-2003, 05:32 PM
wow, i really liked it...it'z kewl :D...

this waz really deep and so full of imagery, altho i prolly thought of stuff you didn't mean lol...like...

Homocidal madman is roaming free
Death in the streets for all to see

^^i pictured that nike comercial with tha guy streaking lol...

Bloodline cut off sprays death of the family
I'm standing here alone writing your obituary

^^i really liked this part, it waz touching an ma favourite linez for some reason, i onno i jus liked it lot'z

Clawing at my bloody hands
Constricting the sealing bands

Standing in the hall
Waiting for myself to finish you
Blood dripping from the wall

^^those had good imagery aswell..

overall it waz done nicely :)...keep it up :D...~oNe~......

Cain
02-06-2003, 05:35 PM
thanks.

Cain
02-08-2003, 12:16 AM
uppin'
REPLY DAMN YOU.

LeviHaskell
02-08-2003, 03:19 PM
don like i said before on another one of ur posts.... Ruff Times are the Best Times to Bust Rhymes.... know what i mean? peeps like it.. i enjoy reading about it.. keep it going..
~lates

Cain
02-10-2003, 12:21 AM
ill. Thanks.

Cain
02-10-2003, 12:24 AM
Oh yeah and for those of you want to know why this is so pissed off lyrically is because someone in my school who knew I was part Jewish came in with the haircut of skinhead neo-nazi and told me and just me that he meant to get his haircut like that. That is a pretty bad thing to tell someone who is Jewish let alone a Jew with a violent temper