Josh
07-10-2002, 04:32 AM
My first time ever makin sumthan like this my 2nd time EVER rhyming
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View Full Version : Stress Relief - Josh Martin Josh 07-10-2002, 04:32 AM My first time ever makin sumthan like this my 2nd time EVER rhyming http://d-eliteworld.com/fullversionstress.mp3 Leave Feedback Good or Bad Josh 07-10-2002, 10:17 PM FeedBack Please Terrance11 07-10-2002, 10:41 PM Josh, I think your lyrics express your attempt of coming out of the closet. Good luck :D Josh 07-10-2002, 10:57 PM Well even though ur comment was fucking retarded Thanks for the Feedback Amity 07-10-2002, 11:26 PM That Was Fucked up "Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed" Oh So Creative u Said It Like 15 times in a row "Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed" "Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed" "Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed" "Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed" "Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed" "Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed" "Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed" "Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed" "Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed" "Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed" "Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed" "Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed" Then You ThrewIn A Little Kick The Bitch Man If This Is how You Relieve Stress I Suggjest You Put On Some Red And Walk In To A Crip Neighborhood michelle 07-11-2002, 12:47 AM So Terrence, I was wondering if you were planning on posting anything other than critical, negative bullshit here? Let me know so I can plan on skipping your posts if you're going to be a dick all the time, ok? :) You already know what I think Josh, I told you on AIM. Josh 07-11-2002, 03:55 PM 2 Things Dumbass its called a Chorus and thats not all i say Cut da bitch make'er bleed// slice da bitch make'er pleade// kick da bitch make'er scream// scream for da knife that'll take'er life// And if u want to diss someone letes hear u make a track and see if u can make something more creative:D ShadyButterfly 07-11-2002, 04:53 PM Originally posted by Josh 2 Things Dumbass its called a Chorus and thats not all i say Cut da bitch make'er bleed// slice da bitch make'er pleade// kick da bitch make'er scream// scream for da knife that'll take'er life// And if u want to diss someone letes hear u make a track and see if u can make something more creative:D lol... sounds like KIM to me... Denz 07-11-2002, 05:40 PM Nice Jdawg diss. Every thought of being rapper? lol Peace Josh 07-11-2002, 05:47 PM lol Jdawg's a bitch hate that fag i wrote more shit , if he piss's me off i may just drop a 2 minute freestyle or something just bout him lol idunno he aint got me that mad yet Spike 07-11-2002, 06:02 PM when you say "jdawg" do you mean masked sykoh because some peeps call him that? Anyways I didnt hate the track nor did I like it alot. Its a bit dull for me. too much of what sounds like talking as opposed to rapping but atleast your trying to make stuff. Josh 07-11-2002, 11:00 PM Idk Jdawg guy that runs KingRoyce.Com Aka Jdwarf lol cause he like 4 foot tall Kev 07-14-2002, 01:42 PM *downloading/* Josh 08-04-2002, 02:52 AM Damn what connection u on Kev? lol been downloadin a while check http://joshmartin.cjb.net hellbound 08-04-2002, 06:45 AM a bit quiet but its allrightz Josh 08-04-2002, 03:29 PM Thank ya much sir T1 Req 08-04-2002, 04:18 PM An inspired touch was posting it here, not in the MC forum. And I'm told you're good at making message boards? Well, uh...the beat's dope. Your first verse was stilted for some reason with like 4 line segments separated by blank instrumental, and the verses in general compared to the chorus were way too short. It's hard to comment on the lyrics seeing as it was mixed so quietly I doubt even you could have heard it properly, but the flow was at best on beat and delivery was montonous to the point where I wonder if you were even feeling the subject when you recorded it. I couldn't even tell if you were rapping at certain points or just talking in a way which just happened to sort of fit the beat. Also, are you English or American? You sound both... Josh 08-04-2002, 04:22 PM AMerican Thanks for feedback that was first real track i did like 2nd time rhming but what I did was recycled rhymes i wrote ages ago and threw them together its about sum kid that started shit wit me talkin bout my old girl and shit. And basically im venting at him at first then it goes into me telling him i dont care to cut da bitch ect hence the chorus. The story line is weak the lyrics are weak the recording was weak. Ive gotten better lol i post sum audio 1day but yet again thanks for feedback |