View Full Version : Stress Relief - Josh Martin


Josh
07-10-2002, 04:32 AM
My first time ever makin sumthan like this my 2nd time EVER rhyming
http://d-eliteworld.com/fullversionstress.mp3
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Josh
07-10-2002, 10:17 PM
FeedBack Please

Terrance11
07-10-2002, 10:41 PM
Josh, I think your lyrics express your attempt of coming out of the closet.

Good luck :D

Josh
07-10-2002, 10:57 PM
Well even though ur comment was fucking retarded
Thanks for the Feedback

Amity
07-10-2002, 11:26 PM
That Was Fucked up

"Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed"

Oh So Creative

u Said It Like 15 times

in a row
"Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed"
"Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed"
"Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed"
"Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed"
"Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed"
"Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed"
"Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed"
"Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed"
"Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed"
"Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed"
"Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed"
"Cut The BitCh Make Her Bleed"
Then You ThrewIn A Little
Kick The Bitch

Man If This Is how You Relieve Stress I Suggjest You Put On Some Red And Walk In To A Crip Neighborhood

michelle
07-11-2002, 12:47 AM
So Terrence, I was wondering if you were planning on posting anything other than critical, negative bullshit here? Let me know so I can plan on skipping your posts if you're going to be a dick all the time, ok? :)

You already know what I think Josh, I told you on AIM.

Josh
07-11-2002, 03:55 PM
2 Things Dumbass its called a Chorus
and thats not all i say

Cut da bitch make'er bleed//
slice da bitch make'er pleade//
kick da bitch make'er scream//
scream for da knife that'll take'er life//
And if u want to diss someone letes hear u make a track and see if u can make something more creative:D

ShadyButterfly
07-11-2002, 04:53 PM
Originally posted by Josh
2 Things Dumbass its called a Chorus
and thats not all i say

Cut da bitch make'er bleed//
slice da bitch make'er pleade//
kick da bitch make'er scream//
scream for da knife that'll take'er life//
And if u want to diss someone letes hear u make a track and see if u can make something more creative:D

lol... sounds like KIM to me...

Denz
07-11-2002, 05:40 PM
Nice Jdawg diss.

Every thought of being rapper? lol

Peace

Josh
07-11-2002, 05:47 PM
lol Jdawg's a bitch hate that fag i wrote more shit , if he piss's me off i may just drop a 2 minute freestyle or something just bout him lol idunno he aint got me that mad yet

Spike
07-11-2002, 06:02 PM
when you say "jdawg" do you mean masked sykoh because some peeps call him that?

Anyways I didnt hate the track nor did I like it alot. Its a bit dull for me. too much of what sounds like talking as opposed to rapping but atleast your trying to make stuff.

Josh
07-11-2002, 11:00 PM
Idk Jdawg guy that runs KingRoyce.Com
Aka Jdwarf lol cause he like 4 foot tall

Kev
07-14-2002, 01:42 PM
*downloading/*

Josh
08-04-2002, 02:52 AM
Damn what connection u on Kev? lol been downloadin a while
check http://joshmartin.cjb.net

hellbound
08-04-2002, 06:45 AM
a bit quiet


but its allrightz

Josh
08-04-2002, 03:29 PM
Thank ya much sir

T1 Req
08-04-2002, 04:18 PM
An inspired touch was posting it here, not in the MC forum. And I'm told you're good at making message boards?

Well, uh...the beat's dope.
Your first verse was stilted for some reason with like 4 line segments separated by blank instrumental, and the verses in general compared to the chorus were way too short. It's hard to comment on the lyrics seeing as it was mixed so quietly I doubt even you could have heard it properly, but the flow was at best on beat and delivery was montonous to the point where I wonder if you were even feeling the subject when you recorded it. I couldn't even tell if you were rapping at certain points or just talking in a way which just happened to sort of fit the beat.
Also, are you English or American? You sound both...

Josh
08-04-2002, 04:22 PM
AMerican
Thanks for feedback that was first real track i did like 2nd time rhming but what I did was recycled rhymes i wrote ages ago and threw them together its about sum kid that started shit wit me talkin bout my old girl and shit. And basically im venting at him at first then it goes into me telling him i dont care to cut da bitch ect hence the chorus. The story line is weak the lyrics are weak the recording was weak. Ive gotten better lol i post sum audio 1day
but yet again thanks for feedback