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PZ>

you do realise...if this was a subliminal diss at us..then this means war.

post lyrics please..

Originally posted by []v[]CD
you do realise...if this was a subliminal diss at us..then this means war.

lol. no D - this was written about a month ago and recorded about a week ago. Before we fell out on tha rap front.

Besides - i respect ya skills and although we don't rap together anymore i'd still say ya my friend outta rap (as far as i'm concerned)

And i will Tykey.... just let me type them up!!!!

Uppin....

Oh, and D, could you actually leave feedback for me man? Its just i wanna get better.

PZ>

There you all go - sorry Tyke. (*hangs head in shame*)

Yo, its me again, thats right i'm back//
Motherfuckers i'm back-shit, destroying this rap-shit//
Stomping down rap-cliques, just look in my eye//
I got fire in my eyes ta tha day i die and i//
Still put fire in ma rhymes. Is it me or has everything i see//
Gone to pot since t.v. told you emcees//
are not okay? not today! i'm giving up, not today! not in anyway!!//
'Cos here i am, bold as brass//
With not spirits in ma hand//
I don't expect you to understand me and then just hand-me//
Ya half assed politic warnings like you care about each-family//
I'm angry and you can't stand-me//
Standing here another fucking second, can you, can we//
please stop this shit? so, fuck this, fuck you//
Too much shit, too much to lose, yo//

(chorus) x2
Strike tha band up, ev-ery-bod-y, put ya hands up//
Just catch yaself in tha beat and keep tha heat coming//
We running? You want something? Blow guns//
bitch i give up fa no-one//

'Cos they see tha sticker, black and white, move quicker//
Down tha queue, we lose, 'cos you faggots do choose//
Swearing means we got no skill to use, you fools want proof?//
Deduce we losers, drug addicts and boozers//
And nothing more than substance abusers//
When we work hard at this shit, fuck! We skilled music producers//
Thats us, we cuss, but fuck, damn its enough//
Surely to prove to you through backs broke and bruised//
That you, can't do better than this, but you're always prepared to diss//
Rifts caused in societies foundations like rips//
Means you don't trust emcees? Me? You trusted me last week!//
Now you don't? Come on, jeez! You guys weak!//
Sheesh, now its bleak, tha outlook, 'cos i'm out-look//
I'm tired now, 'cos all tha people wanna do is fight now, and its like now//
Ta be big you gotta accept tha role model mantle//
When you just wanna spit, and its like, "shit!"//

(chorus) x2

'Cos fear grabs hold of you in a rap situation//
Its all about reputation and proper respect//
Why can't i just spit and not feel ashamed of it?//
I'm insane so quick, help me, fuck it, i'll rip you little duckers so quick//
You'll wish you listened before, when i said i'd blow-up//
In six minutes i'll head to go out tha door//
Whats more, its war on anybody who doesn't feel me//
I'm real-see? Fucking hell! We kill-three, we spill-three//
Pints of blood, oh shit, damn bitch//
I'm dropping this now, nobody will be topping this now//
For fucks sake! Why my songs gotta have a point anyway?//
What it if i wanna just rip you fags for fun just today?//
I'm wrong? Do my songs incite violence? No!//
Then shoot a cop-son, get a gun, squeeze and pop-one//
Like a lyrical terrorist, a lryical medalist//
Don't believe in this shit but just say for the effect bitch//
'Cos i'm evil-and-shit, rip ya penis-ta-shit//
Fuck you up so bad you visit venus and trip//
Up, spit up, blood, fuck, enough, i'm done, times up//
I'm stopping you straight-out, dropping-you-son fuck!!//

(chorus) x3

There you go my little princess. Just a rant....

PZ>

I thought this was some of your best writtens Blivvy, didn't seem a diss to me.. It was kind of directionles, but in audoio I'm sueit would be hot, If I ever get a chance I'l d/l it..

"Whats more, its war on anybody who doesn't feel me//
I'm real-see? Fucking hell! We kill-three, we spill-three//
Pints of blood, oh shit, damn bitch//"- reminded me of some of my freestlyes, I bet it flows well.. Keep it up and don't drop out of this shit.. What happened with Fallen Angel?

Originally posted by Tyke
What happened with Fallen Angel?

Good question. Well, it all kinda disbanded. Which was a shame since i won't get a chance ta rap with MCD, Shifty or Vokal anymore which is a bugger.

But nevermind eh?

And thanks for tha feedback - i liked it and i (unbiasedly) suggest you do download it. lol.

Thanks Tykey..... Uppin'

PZ>

u have hot lyrics to begin wit and ya flow was on point. overall a hot drop am waiting to see what u drop next . peace

Thanks Jenial.

PZ>

I can't get it to play:(
I don't have time to read the lyrics but I'll get back at you soon.

Originally posted by T1 Req
I can't get it to play:(
I don't have time to read the lyrics but I'll get back at you soon.

thanks Reqy - i look forward ta ya reply...

PZ>

damn this shit was hot!...
beat is dope as fuck!!..

you rode it very well man
i liked your delivery an flow
hook was ill..
lryics are fire..

overall ill shit ob

Originally posted by MENTOL
damn this shit was hot!...
beat is dope as fuck!!..

you rode it very well man
i liked your delivery an flow
hook was ill..
lryics are fire..

overall ill shit ob

thanks dawg :D :D

PZ>

man the lyrics and flow are well cool! Chorus is cool aswell but i dont know what to say but theres just this little thing about it what i cant describe which leaves it lacking (only slightly!). Good drop, first time ive heard you rap. Nice one mate.

7/10

beat was alright, needed harder drums, voice need to be alittle louder too

lyrics were dope, flow fell off somtimes... but if got picked up soon after

hook wasnt the best ive heard but it worked

over all id give this track a 6/10

this showed potential so ull definatly elivate

uppin

This was tight! You went real well with the beat... This my favorite of the stuff I've heard from you so far...

Originally posted by Shady Makaveli
This was tight! You went real well with the beat... This my favorite of the stuff I've heard from you so far...

Thanks Shady Mak. Its nice ta see some feedback from tha people i respect on tha board

Uppin' if needs be

PZ>

Your flow's pretty damn solid. Delivery's cool, you've got some energy- not MOP level yelling, but energy nonetheless lol.
All I'd say is try and avoid repeating words like "not today! i'm giving up, not today" etc.
"Not today- I'm not giving up while I've got something hot to say" or whatever...lol @ me giving you alternative lines all the time, sorry man.
Good stuff. We need to get a proper colab going.

Originally posted by T1 Req
lol @ me giving you alternative lines all the time, sorry man.
Good stuff. We need to get a proper colab going.

lol - without you i'd be nothing but a whiteboy/daxon with a pronounced limp. :D

Thanks for tha feedback one and all - dropping "Betrayal" (my one and only reply to MCD) on about wednesday if i can finish writing it today

Yeah - we need to, Req. I'll hit you up as always in AIM when i can and no doubt in between Discworld and Blackadder talks, tha collab issue will come up :)

Also i'll ask Mentol and Shady Mak about tha proposed Apocalypse type affair when i "see" 'em.

PZ>

Uppin'

PZ>

tightness

Yo, its me again, thats right i'm back//
Motherfuckers i'm back-shit, destroying this rap-shit//
Stomping down rap-cliques, just look in my eye//
I got fire in my eyes ta tha day i die and i//
Still put fire in ma rhymes. Is it me or has everything i see//
Gone to pot since t.v. told you emcees//
^^^ thats a dope opener

(chorus) x2
Strike tha band up, ev-ery-bod-y, put ya hands up//
Just catch yaself in tha beat and keep tha heat coming//
We running? You want something? Blow guns//
bitch i give up fa no-one//
tight chorus usually you dont see multies in a chorus


Deduce we losers, drug addicts and boozers//
And nothing more than substance abusers//
When we work hard at this shit, fuck! We skilled music producers//
^^^ lol the last line was funny and the 2 before it i liked as well

dope drop thanx for posting lyrics otherwise i wouldnt be able to give feedback

Originally posted by kash11
dope drop thanx for posting lyrics otherwise i wouldnt be able to give feedback

No prob man, thanks for tha feedback :)