Kick my ass once i'll kick ur ass twice,
Rip ur adam's apple out and feed it to ur mice,
I cuss because I can,
Hit u over the head with a frying pan,
Feed u spam.
U think i'm less of a man because I said f*** 50 times in one song,
Well it was the only word I understood,
what do u expect if u grew up in the hood,
havin' mud,
Thrown in my face by people who think I rap good.
Well I doo specially when I'm on the loo.
oops! did I say too much,
S*** no u could hear me diss ur dad,
It wouldn't make u mad.
You would just keep on listening,
Pretending i'm dissin',
Him over there,
U know the one with the hair.
"Oh Yeah"
I hear "get the f*** away",
100 times a day,
But not when their looking down the barrel of my A.K.

It had a face paced tempo, which was good but it lacked with lyricism.

Not bad..

not feelin it..
try usin worplay or sum humor

aight i do this on text ppl..

when i peep ur shit i play a beat and try to rap ur shit,

but it dont flow that well,

raps cant be good without flow to it, it would get off beat and it wuld be bad...


work on multiis or wordplay^

the feeling to it was def felt tho

keep droppin em

uppin