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haydude
01-11-2003, 05:18 AM
k, here's how its gone be...20 bar spit each
blind verses, ill spit, then u
this is a rematch for u, so if u lose this time
u gotta change ur name to punk...g'luck guy

peace

haydude
01-11-2003, 06:18 PM
aiyo, yo, yo...
i'll be careful with ur record, cuz i'd hate to break ur losing streak/
u'll need a plumbing expert, cuz my shit will create an oozing leak/
ur confusing and weak - i'm clear and strong/
this champ even gets scared from the "fear factor song"/
i should clone u, so u could see how easy it is to beat u/
i own u, cuz ur my bitch and thats how i'ma treat u/
ull cook and ill eat the food while u clean the house/
he's shook, cuz he actually enjoys being minnie-mouse/
u dont say much, like a good bitch, cuz ur spits an instrumental song/
an archaeologist dig couldnt find a real lyric in ur music-fake shit dont belong/
ill smoke u from a bong, just to see how ull burn/
i should stop now, cuz u'll prob lose worse on ur turn/
ur verse couldnt learn, not even if i taught it all day and all night/
u look familiar, like we already faught-so ill kill ur clone in a brawl tonight/
consider this ur rematch or ur second straight loss/
my wins gauranteed like subway's jared's weight loss/
this aint a coin toss, unless-tails u lose and heads i win/
either way u'll get hurt watchin cuz when i fight, males bruise and heads spin/
confused again? well let me straighten u out/
ive flattened u out, so this time stay down for the count/

peace

haydude
01-13-2003, 03:48 AM
u bitched at me for takin a while,
where the fuck u at? post son...lets get this over wit

peace

Shame
01-13-2003, 01:03 PM
Alright all I need is fifteen!

You know you cant take me out, what you doin callin me out
It will only take bout, our second battle, make your cage rattle, feed ya to the fuckin hicks cattle, you still wanna battle?
Alright I will give ya one night, you fuckin know my shit is tight
I wont ditch on this, I will call ya a bitch!
I wanna hear your shit, fuck your gurls clit, have some fun in that pit
I'm throwin out these rhymes, listenin to your whines, you walkin into the land mines, walkin up on my turf, soundin like a smurf
You wont last, step into the past, see whats makin you crash, pay me some cash, maybe I'll stop this bash, naw fuck that, I made that, lets see ya get outa that
guess what to late, you took the bait, stepped on the plate
[bam!] see your parts flyin, you started out dien, I'm not gonna be crien, time to leave you with this crease, so all I gotta say is PEACE!

Shame
01-13-2003, 01:06 PM
See if you beat me with your rhymes!

haydude
01-13-2003, 05:20 PM
rooks still stuck in uneven bars, hehehe
nice 15 lines...uppin for votes

peace

Tyke
01-13-2003, 05:42 PM
shame, you sucked very, very bad.... Haydude wasn't that great, but a few decent punches caught my eye... "consider this ur rematch or ur second straight loss/
my wins gauranteed like subway's jared's weight loss/" was fairly dope... Shame you don't know what you're doing, and your making yourseld to look like an idiot.

vote=Haydude

haydude
01-13-2003, 05:48 PM
Originally posted by Tyke
shame, you sucked very, very bad.... Haydude wasn't that great, but a few decent punches caught my eye... "consider this ur rematch or ur second straight loss/
my wins gauranteed like subway's jared's weight loss/" was fairly dope... Shame you don't know what you're doing, and your making yourseld to look like an idiot.

vote=Haydude

its about time tyke was on my side, hehehe
c'mon guy, u didnt like n other punches? thought it was
a tight spit...very clever, no? whatever...


uppin...

Shame
01-15-2003, 01:00 PM
Want to see who won wit these verses we been throwin!

haydude
01-15-2003, 06:08 PM
1-0

uppin...

lyrikal prodigy
01-15-2003, 06:53 PM
can't even believe this kid tried to make ME look bad.....garbage man....haydude...(nods head).....get better if you wanna battle

Ghetto Ninja
01-15-2003, 07:00 PM
I really don't think is really needed to b overall voted on an line by line shit.... IMO, both were pretty weak.... but straight up, jus keep elevating.. upp'n fer sum votes

haydude
01-16-2003, 05:16 AM
but my spits got multis, clever wordplay, good rhymes...
some lines were weak, but most punches were aight i thought?
and if u guys r gonna comment on the battle,
how about votin on it, instead of just sayin we both suck...

uppin...

lyrikal prodigy
01-16-2003, 12:07 PM
multi's, clever wordplay, and good verse????


Kid you had 4 multi's, not once did I see something clever, and alot of lines where whack....

u'll need a plumbing expert, cuz my shit will create an oozing leak/.....wtf?????

this champ even gets scared from the "fear factor song"/....how does that song even go?????

i own u, cuz ur my bitch and thats how i'ma treat u/.....man I heard that about 10,000 times

ull cook and ill eat the food while u clean the house/
he's shook, cuz he actually enjoys being minnie-mouse/....whack as fuck....

u dont say much, like a good bitch, cuz ur spits an instrumental song/
an archaeologist dig couldnt find a real lyric in ur music-fake shit dont belong/..........the fuck is that suppose to mean????

I don't even need to copy the rest of that verse...all this speaks for itself

Shame
01-16-2003, 01:00 PM
DAmn you people always seem to be dissin people cuz they jus learnin! I thought his shit was ok and mine was tight though.
Not as good as I seen some of you ppl do though.
Laterz!

kinks
01-16-2003, 03:10 PM
Hey Dude, I liked: "i'll be careful with ur record, cuz i'd hate to break ur losing streak"
but the line next down to it, with oozing leak...that was whack. Sure, it rhymed, but alot of the stuff there were just fillers. Some good vocab, just keep workin on it, and you'll improve alot.
Shame, from my view, I think you'd do better if you worked on your vocab, multis, and word play. Your lines are pretty choppy, but a bit of practice, and you'll get the hang of it. That's how I used to write the very first few verses I wrote. I've gotten tips and hints from people, and I'm learnin.
keep uppin' and workin on it.
My vote'll go for Hey Dude, cause this time, he had the better verse.peace.

Mr. Meyahgee
01-16-2003, 03:26 PM
both wernt that great at all...
but i hae no rom t speak cuz i'm not decent...

any ways...

shame...

you weak..
no good punchlines
nothing that involes thought

heydude

some multies
decent punches
okay rhyming

vote heydude

Shame
01-16-2003, 03:33 PM
Diss my shit sayin its fuckin weak? I go one on one with you ppl face to fuckin face and we'll see who the fuck wins bet ya I would cuz this shit would be to damn simple! Fuckin computer bitches! I dont sit and write my rhymes I fuckin say it and see how it turns out! So fuck you ppl! Haydude no offence man but I not gonna turn my fuckin name into punk thats just a bad ass diss to me! Peace!

Mr. Meyahgee
01-16-2003, 03:41 PM
i'll be carefull if i were you.... or i'll put you in SHAME...

the only time you see a punchlines IS when you get hit in he face

iight so shut the fuck up an take it like a man!

lyrikal prodigy
01-16-2003, 04:21 PM
ok shame I am setting a battle for me and you up right now...ok, since you think you can beat everyone in here......you just need to elevate thats it.....but I'll battle you ok........

Shame
01-17-2003, 01:00 PM
I havent seen any of your shit so I dont have much of an advantage.

Peace

Tyke
01-17-2003, 01:12 PM
Originally posted by Shame
Diss my shit sayin its fuckin weak? I go one on one with you ppl face to fuckin face and we'll see who the fuck wins bet ya I would cuz this shit would be to damn simple! Fuckin computer bitches! I dont sit and write my rhymes I fuckin say it and see how it turns out! So fuck you ppl! Haydude no offence man but I not gonna turn my fuckin name into punk thats just a bad ass diss to me! Peace!

Then get off the computer and go murder some people instead of getting made fun of by peeps who know how to write.

Shame
01-17-2003, 01:16 PM
STFU tyke damn man! I think I should take your advice and kill someone dont fuckin know who though! DAmn should it be you?

Peace bitch!

Tyke
01-17-2003, 01:23 PM
Read my critique of your rhyme dick.

m_n_m_n_m_n_m
01-17-2003, 05:45 PM
whats' this kindergarten? Get some new rhymes. Your shits over played. I've heard it many times. If I had the time on my schedule, I'd battle both you to the ground. 6 feet under you'll see who's livin now. But I'd keep you alive just to watch you squirm and cry. Learn to rhyme you pussys.

haydude
01-17-2003, 07:42 PM
this shits fucked and done...
shame, i win again 3-0, u lose,
so if u wanna post or stay on this board,
u gotta change ur name, hmmmmmmmn,
how about punk? yup, sounds good to me...
now change it guy
and someone close this-too much bullshit freepostin...

thanks to the voters...

peace

Tyke
01-17-2003, 07:50 PM
Originally posted by haydude
[B]and someone close this-too much bullshit freepostin...
[B]What?

haydude
01-17-2003, 07:57 PM
Originally posted by Tyke
What?

close this thread and make shame change his name to punk...

why u always tryin to beef for no reason?
this aint ur place, tool...

Ghetto Ninja
01-18-2003, 04:38 AM
k yo, Shame man i will contact Denz.... an change ur name to Punk-and u will not b posting until ur name has officially changed over to Punk and Denz has confirmed it has been done so-
if this ain't abliged by-- i'm a close all threads u start in tha entire emcee area....

seem to b a dick but w/e i wan keep this clean, n organized u cant b postin till ya change up ya name....

~1ne

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