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haydude
01-09-2003, 06:00 AM
like u said, thirty bars, 1 line = 1 bar

i aint as wack as soldier-u aint a black ass, but i still sold yeah/
u as white as a light mack cover, with no lack of containment-i will hold yeah/
i kill-told yeah i aint playin with a fourleaf clover, i got skill not luck/
u still suck-always displayin his four-teeth-hover at will for a buck/
u'll stay undefeated til u get stuck-then ur odds of winnin is a loose cannon probability/
pull away heated, u still couldnt leave hot like 90210's goose, shannon dougherty/
u're a man on poverty, waitin for his rap career to get started/
u wanna spit publicly, but u're so ugly-u and ur crap mirror departed/
i rap whole hearted-even hoes think ur spittin's weak as can be/
u tap like a mole farted and there goes ur winnin streak-hand the trophy to me/
ur pitiful existence is diminished to the remnants of ur name on a plaque/
ur little resistance is finished-u need a break, instead i call game on and attack/
this guy was beggin to be beaten, like a 95 year old virgin dick/
i'll bang his leg-in til da-feet, ill show no mercy like a cold german prick/
time to battle, so perge quick-we all know ur rhymes are a bad clone/
even if u modified their behavior, u wouldnt have good lines of ur own/
he's home alone-no one's callin him on the phone/
he couldnt buy a friend if he gave the bank a loan/
so even if u rage againts the machine-u'll remain voiceless and should post less/
even if u stage a gain for ur team-u'll claim u were choiceless cuz ur voteless/

yo guy, i gotta go, so theres twenty lines...all i could do

peace and good luck

haydude
01-09-2003, 02:20 PM
i'm not quite done yet, but ur obviously overcooked-u got no raw beef/
if u smoked pot, u wouldnt-be-the-high-light-on-the-net, not even on ma kief/
when i beef, its jaw and teeth-i can chew u up each time with a crunch/
every line's-a-punch, like i was servin u a knuckle-sandwich-rhyme for lunch/
ur infront and behind a bunch of men, so if one bends over, u can get lucky twice over/
in case my last twenty didnt sink in, heres another 10, sayin red-rover, im callin ur ass over/
but im all over ur maneuver-u couldnt escape if u were mc giver/(sp)
this spits just a cypher, that murdered u and now i'm a 4-lifer/
my shit gets better with age like michelle phipher and heather locklear/
i wouldnt invest in u, unless for some reason i had stock-in-queer/

theres thirty...peace

Exodus
01-09-2003, 03:24 PM
Haydude's face is more than just odd, no-one’s supporting this fraud
His frame’s a distorted façade, while I’m worshipped like porcelain Gods/
This battle’s a ‘board game’, and I never lose a battle
The matchup is Ex vs haydude…and I swear I’ll ‘chute the latter’/
Clever wordplay like that is always absent from haydude's writtens
You’re the product of controlled breeding from an ogre and Scottie Pippen/
Ugly mutherfucker, just pass-the-trigger so I can blast-you-quicker
Your thinking cap would be a tight squeeze on an action figure/
I’d help you repair your dated style if I had patience
Gun talk? You can’t even ‘pump shells’ at the gas station/
Nickelodeon name? how menacing, you’re the cause of the internet’s combustion
I’m a gun-toting orchestra, playing an instrument of destruction/
Enough about your name, now the calendar suggests your fate
Cuz tonight, I’m gonna take you on an expiration date/
Wear something nice, a grappling hook will make your limbs fly
The eye of your lyrical storm has trouble moving wind chimes/
And you’re terribly overrated, and rather wack when you grab mics
I asked him to play me a note, haydude whipped out his bagpipe/
I see you’ve taken the wack route, I’ll make you pass out
haydude rhyming’s a bad idea like an opera singer living in a glass house/
You’ll crash and you’ll burn, the static’s confirmed
Me beating you is the greatest anti-climatic return/
I’ll rapidly turn the page, no-one would give him a thumbs up
haydude wanted a judgement call, I said he’s wack then hung up/
I know you want an anthem, but don’t get all excited
Sadly, “I’m every woman” has already been copyrighted/
Get out of the game, and drink from the fountains of pain
Better yet, end your ‘Refusal To Take A Shower’ campaign/
Bruise and bend spines, my errant style will scare this child
Who dared my style, and 'wound up dead' like he was Darryl Kile/

Tyke
01-09-2003, 04:36 PM
Damn Ex, this was the titest battle verse I've ever seen you write!! Celver ass punches ie; "Clever wordplay like that is always absent from haydude's writtens
You’re the product of controlled breeding from an ogre and Scottie Pippen/", and "I’d help you repair your dated style if I had patience
Gun talk? You can’t even ‘pump shells’ at the gas station/" an abundance of multis, really a mind blowing verse bro..


hAYDUDE, your improving, but no where near Ex's level of emceeing.. Alot of your lines are pointless and make no sense ie; "u'll stay undefeated til u get stuck-then ur odds of winnin is a loose cannon probability/
pull away heated, u still couldnt leave hot like 90210's goose, shannon dougherty/" that line didn't realy rhyme either.. "this guy was beggin to be beaten, like a 95 year old virgin dick/
i'll bang his leg-in til da-feet, ill show no mercy like a cold german prick/" started off really well, but the 2nd line was all filler and was irrevelant..

VOTE- EXO MUTHERFUCKIN DUS

Exodus
01-10-2003, 03:36 AM
good tah see ya again Tyke

Ghetto Ninja
01-10-2003, 03:59 AM
Damn ex that was off tha hook man, fer sure tight battle on both ya parts...

Ex, i'm not gun sit here an go into detail but ya verse, wit blah.. blah.. blah.. lol

but hay dude ur impoving alot but like tyke said ur not on ex's level... but keep on elevating...

Vote- Exodus!



an yo ex mahn its all good bout tha tag tourny thing it enver went down but it still may now get ya ass active on H-F!

~1ne

haydude
01-10-2003, 08:46 PM
look, i didnt expect to win this battle,
just tryin to elevate all the time...
i apreciate the the feed back,
but can u guys b more specific sometimes
tyke, tell me what lines sound like fillers
and what doenst work, if u dont mind...
same to u focus and n e other voters,
give some good helpful tips or somethin-its the only way ill learn,
hehehe...

uppin

Shame
01-13-2003, 01:22 PM
Haydude you and me are at the same place needin to learn how to keep this mc shit tight and learn how to fuckin write! The rhymes still need work but we will be at the top if we start to get to work on this! Well peace ppl!

Tyke
01-13-2003, 01:37 PM
Originally posted by haydude
tyke, tell me what lines sound like fillers
I quoted the line I was talking about

haydude
01-13-2003, 05:24 PM
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Originally posted by haydude
tyke, tell me what lines sound like fillers


Originally posted by Tyke
I quoted the line I was talking about

so that was the only one? i know, u dont really have the time,
but if ex wouldnt mind givin some feedback after i agree
to battle him when no one else would...ex, if u wouldnt mind
just givin some feedback on the battle, say what u think
offer some advice, coo?

also, can u guys go vote on my battle with shame:
haydude vs. shame


uppin

Exodus
01-14-2003, 02:06 AM
Originally posted by haydude

but if ex wouldnt mind givin some feedback after i agree
to battle him when no one else would...ex, if u wouldnt mind
just givin some feedback on the battle,


aiight, you suck and will never be nice

haydude
01-14-2003, 02:16 AM
whatever man...

Ghetto Ninja
01-15-2003, 07:03 PM
upp'n fer votes... 2-0 Exodus

Ms Mack
01-16-2003, 01:22 PM
I really don't see any need to go into much detail here. I vote for Exodus, I agree with Tyke (although, I'm less hyper than he is about the flow). Ex has skills, no doubt. Haydude, I don't think your verse/verses were as bad as some of the other voters thought it was but hey, everyone has their own opinion. Regardless, Ex wins this battle by a landslide

Exodus
01-17-2003, 03:08 PM
I AM THE ILLEST EVER!!!



or something