Tha pressure is overwhelming as my mind is melting/
away, it is gone as i pray 2 god but it aint helping/
2 persist that my mind travels in2 tha mist/
do i even exist, so will it matter if i slit my wrist/
lifes a bitch that i tie down and rape/
found bloody or drowned but it couldnt excape/
cant take tha pain so i try 2 erase my brain/
no one can explain so its you i blame/
2 tha untrained eye, I am just anotha soul who is troubled/
but look deep and see bashed walls and bloody knuckles/
2 GOD i cry out/
why cant i just die now, angry and willing 2 gougue my eyes out/
erase my scars wit whyte out, do everything i can 2 change and be better/
but instead tha days are cloudy, no matter tha whether/
forever down and always depressed/
sins i confess so my soul can peacefully rest/
lifes a test, that i can never pass/
god is tha teacher and my world is my class/
everyone wears a mask, snakes are fake and unreal/
just when you think they know tha deal they hide and become conceal/
no one 2 turn 2, my mind they burn through/
attack my heart and soul and leave me out in tha cold/
just a friendly game of poker but 2 dumb 2 fold/
be bold, become your own man and make your dreams nice/
so whats life/


thought id end it short so sum may read

That was very fucking nice... if you've got a dope flow and voice, then this would be one great verse.

That was real tight. Real deep and heartfelt. Keep it up...

Yeah, it was deep as my girl

I was dopish came overround ill

"lifes a bitch that i tie down and rape"

^Made me laugh like a bastard

thnak you all it is greatly appreciated

dope shit,..deep imo
flow was dope man,..like the meta's you put into this...
very good,..nice multies, that i know of... love this line (s)

lifes a bitch that i tie down and rape/

cant take tha pain so i try 2 erase my brain/
no one can explain so its you i blame/

but instead tha days are cloudy, no matter tha whether/
forever down and always depressed/
sins i confess so my soul can peacefully rest/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
this lines i feel deeply, i kinda went through this one

i liked your rhymin schem alot, keep it up man,...
peace

LOL ok ... u so much better mc, pfffffffffffffffffft

well now.. thanks mentol
and i didnt understand your post fag thug

fuck u fagget