View Full Version : hold up...

01-06-2003, 02:45 AM
this isnt fair, i left my comp in university
and ive been off and away from school all this time
i tried using other peeps comps, but it didnt work...
i would never back down from this punk
tyke man...that was fuckin wack,
but for all u doubters, i wrote a verse a while ago
so...lets get the battle over

shame vs. haydude

same rules and everythin...

shame:You seem to know your shit so thanx for the help...
Alright seen' this bitch isnt gonna start here I go!

1st round, only one round, haydude you jus fuckin suck, run you over with a semi-truck,your gonna need your luck, I got you stuck, everyone here knows you cant rap, you only got one lap, you best make it a good trap, cuz you wont beat me in this, this is my diss, actin' like you can take your rhymes, man I will roll you like these fat ass dimes, I jus commited so many crimes, seen you cryin', you should be fuckin dien', my shit is tight, I know I am right, I own, your blown, when your on your knees, cuz your my bitch, unless you can pull yourself from this ditch, You still my bitch!


it's a shame i have to waste my time with this punk/
like taking out the trash, i'm disposing of his rhyme like it's junk/
the boy's sunk, cuz he raps like he swims/
even if he had two yaps - i've got traps for twins/
it would be a sin to leave this lame unpunished/
thanks to me, his game's finished with his name banished/
he needs some wish-ed, cus he wanted to lose/
well, i'ma make his dreams come true and put-out his fuse/
i shut-out his abuse like i'm the best goalie in the league/
curiosity killed the cat-i stopped that, but this bitch died from intrigue/
now, i dont mean to hate, but he dont like pussy-he can only masterbate/
his fate killed him-he may be the king, but its check mate/

mine followed all of focus's rules
and this battle should be voted on...


01-06-2003, 01:00 PM
I give ya some props but your shit still gotta quit!
You dont got me in fuckin check mate man I still beat you but lets jus see some votes!


01-06-2003, 05:58 PM
i didnt take long at all...i wrote this in mid december
but i got to university in london and i live in thornhill
i was off school and wasnt drivin 3 hours just to beat ur ass...
i tried to pm peeps, but it wouldnt let me log on...
school just started jan 6...i was back up jan 5
and i posted jan 5...thats all i could do...
battle is still on with the same rules...

uppin for votes...


01-06-2003, 06:00 PM
focus seemed to be all over this battle before...
what do u think focus? u gotta vote


Ms Mack
01-06-2003, 06:59 PM
Shame: It didn't seem like U put much effort into your rhyme. Were U rushing? A lot of your raps were extremely basic.

Haydude: "the boy's sunk, cuz he raps like he swims/
even if he had two yaps - i've got traps for twins"
Nice line. My vote is for Haydude. He put more effort into his rap.

Ghetto Ninja
01-07-2003, 08:40 PM
i dunno if i really need to vote on this battle i was waiting on it...

but since is out not gunn sit here quote fer quote ez s this... bottom line is...shame seemed to cum weak... haydude had sum aight sht but i've seen better but flow usually wins it fer me... an in this hyadude came nice...

vote haydude...

props to shame tho - nice battle uppin

01-07-2003, 10:27 PM
yea haydude won it

all in all not a bad battle but haydude was slightly better in flow vocab and punches

shame i see potential in u and haydude i know ur better so im lookin to see better from both of u guys on ur next battles

01-08-2003, 03:58 AM
thats 3-0, so either its a KO
and uve already lost, so u gotta change ur name
or we can wait for 2 more votes and then u change...?

01-08-2003, 01:26 PM
I know I can still beat you man so I want a rematch! I mean fuck I know that shit I posted was weak! I got more shit I can take out on your ass man.

yeah yeah you got your props!

Ghetto Ninja
01-08-2003, 05:17 PM
aiyo...those rules stuck as they were Shameucan havea rematch wit haydude s'up ta him...but u still gotta change ya name to punk and haydude... u better go admit that those werds don't rhyme to sex as well fer not showin u may have won, but i'm stressin that aswell... ;)

01-08-2003, 08:38 PM
heres the deal, since last battle i guess kinda got fucked
im willin to redo the whole thing and battle again...
i'll admit right now that those words dont rhyme, but
c'mon, alot of peeps rhyme shit that dont fit, but whatever
we can battle agian, but if shame loses he gotta change
his name to punk...coo?

i think thats pretty fair...


01-10-2003, 01:13 PM
Yeah thanx man I was jus a lil pissed off cuz you hadnt showed for a while... ALright you wanna go on here or another post?Hey ppunk is the worst fuckin diss you can give to me! But fuck it I still get to keep mine unless I lose again!


01-10-2003, 08:52 PM
ill set it up in mine fields, just give me some time
i got alot of work and shit i gotta take care of
but ill set it up and then drop...

ull c it...then ull drop


01-12-2003, 05:27 PM
yo shame, where u at? i got it all set up:
haydude vs. shame, the rules r at the top
i already posted my spit and now u takin ur sweet ass time...
fuckin go der and post ur shit, so we c who wins...


01-15-2003, 01:14 PM
I dont know who won... You got some good rhymes but we both need to learn a few things yet I fuckin can see that!

Peace out!

*smokes a blunt passin it to whoever wants it*