15 bar's min
30 max
must mention oppents name
no biting / recycling / dick riding
first to 3 is a winner
due jan. 8. 2003
no overdue's or your DQ'D
good luck

ok here goes :)

What yo name bitch MS MACK flip the light switch
turn you out in the dark punch yo lights out and give you ten stitches

Ill flip you and kick you, not keep you ditch you in a raggidy rubbish heap for the dogs to eat when they wake up from sleep get beat off a pitbull with a mouthfull of yo asscheek - dont be late battlin, we want beef now not next week.

U say my rhymes are generic as a lullaby, shut the fuck up ill beat you till you sleep. knock you unconscious, i dont make empty promises watch while i flip the script on yo ass, lyrics have no shortages.



bring the heat ms mack

When you look at me all you see is corruption to da nation
The way I'm droppin bombs you can just call me annihilation
Grippin' my microphone and yeah I spit it fluently
You thinkin 1's enough, tell you what, imagine 2 of me
I'm spittin' intense heat, El Tee don't wanna get near it
Consider this that ether setting flames to your spirit
My 1st tournament of the year, so I refuse to disappoint
Even if U were a clumbsy crackhead U couldn't drop a hot joint
U claim to be the man but I demand that U show proof
My flow got U quivering so hard that I shook your balls loose
How U gon' have a crazy flow, when U ain't got no nuts
I'm a thoroughbred, El Tee, your just a mutt
I got skills sharp enough to leave ya body in sections
I don't exist, so I'll slide off from tha scene with no detection



....Since my opponent kept it short & sweet, I did the same.....one

ok ok


so you got me that time but you wont get a chance to rhyme again with the same flex and rythm, ill warp your whole mind again

Ill mix up yo sensations ms mack dont wanna test dis
youll make me open a whole new dimension in order to express
my true talents as a tourney emcee
you wish you could be as talented as me im emcee eltee and this is my domain
anyone wanna try and dominate lets take it onto stage
get me caught in a flarin rage turn the page see my white ass pullin a mooney right in yo fat fucking ugly face.

Im about to rap this rap up before i start to slap you up, ill reach through the screen and fuck your whole computer up, ill rip off yo head and take a piss down your neck, ill leave you on the floor gaspin for one last fucking breath



next round will be hot, trust.

El Tee, I don't think your 2nd rhyme will count. If I'm not mistaken, we are supposed to chill until people get a chance to vote

god....*shakes head* Well whos votin so wee can get it over with..

ok, no Eltee ur 2nd verse does not count every1 vote on the first.... and the voting goes to me, and people all in the tournament- an u must explain ur votes-

use THIS Criteria!


MULTIS:
STYLE:
HITS:
PUNCHES:
VOCAB:
PERSONALS:
VOTE:


and if u do not know what thye are then ask don't jus go by others votes....label each criteria an explain minimal explanation will count

heres the deal you both suck id rip both of u

That criteria assumes that all areas of emceeing are equal in a battle, and I don't think it does. It takes away the subjective part of "damn, that verse ripped shit". I think all that stuff into account, you know I vote intelligently, I'd just rather it not be a numbers thing.

MsMack has much more solid bar structure, as Emcee is probably alot better spittin and not on the keyboard.

No disses or punches stood out, but at least Ms.Mack attempted to be witty.

vote= Ms Mack

ms mack had a pretty good verse, not many dissed but flow was good and it stayed on track

one thing though

''I don't exist, so I'll slide off from tha scene with no detection''

^^ how does i dont exist attack your opponent, that makes you look worse if anything, kinda confused but overall decent spit

for emcee, you didnt have many punches either and your flow was way off, it was hard catching a rhyme in there too, hard to follow

i vote ms mack

sorry ppl, never knew about the 2nd hit thing, looks like mine was a bad start :(

Ms.Mack win Via KO and moves onto the 2nd round props to both of yah...

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