20 bar limit

rhyme about whatever

and suck my dick

umm not my best, worte it in like 20 mins....

Emceedoser, just another empty poser, with no skill,
Eternal is so ill, my punchlines will shatter his whole grill,
my flows spill, in flurrys like an avelanche,
you dont have a chance, to beat me because im not your avergage man,
i got savage plans, to burst those, cursed flows,
bitch im crucifying you i dont give a fuck if its your first post,
lets define ill, is it to sign deals, or is it your rhymes skill,
either way ima fuck up anyone who walks in to this mine field,
when you battle me its more the just war,
combust yours, when i walk in the place you hug floors,
i dont really wanna murder you now, lets make it closer,
this bitch doser is more of a "bagger" then a grocer,
shit no one wants to suck your dick, you fuckin prick,
enough with this, crush you hits, when i bust your lip,
when you battle me, its garenteed, that i'll skatter three,
rappers around you and drownd you in the seattle sea,
his "doser" cant even "tare down" microphones,
this loser is scared now when im hyped in flows,
baller or hater? shit, you dont even desurve a class,
call me the waiter because i just served your ass,

eh holla

excuses! excuses!! not your best?
suck my dick you bytin ass toy!



no need to pose your lady drops her clothes
as soon as i whisper that im emceedose.
king of all on-line battles my cage can't be rattled
suit ya up on a saddle.
knock you off when your on
think your better? must be a con
im the mafia don.
lets take a look at my past cause your
gettin did up quick mismatched and outclassed
no one try to speak up or back sas
you'll taste the fury of my back hand.
damn! labeled as a paranoid skitzo with homicidal tendency
untouchable emcee with insanity in my bloodstream.
thug with me?! think not! you couldn't hang!
your rookier than a rent-a-cop joinin a street gang.
this shit don't even matter cuz your jaw has just been shattered
try to fuck with me in a emcee battle
little kidz go run and tattle that eternal just been murdered
by a skitzo emcee. fuck the law i'll run further


holla back with somethin that exceeds your talents
hopefully it's "your best"

fuck that, i just wasted u, ummmm uppin for votes


i dont need to waste time on u

fuck it then!

if your a bitch nigga then your a bitch nigga no one to blame!


envious or frieghtened of my wrath???


you decide.


and another thing...













... you did serve me up like a waiter ( mad props )

you didn't even spit on my dick first. great deep throat action!!!



fuck off!!!

uhh start voting

This battle was to far one sided

Eternal, The Flow was dope, an the lyricism was nice

Vocab an wordplay was pretty decent too


EmceeDoser, Flow was good, but lyricism overall was weak.
Had some nice vocab though.

Both coulda used more punches though.



Vote ~ Eternal

Hmm...

Eternal - On and off awesomeness, especially the end, which was totally rad, the whole serving ass bit.

Emcee - Purty good, but i sometimes got lost in the flow when certain rhymes became longer than the others, for example the whole
"this shit don't even matter cuz your jaw has just been shattered
try to fuck with me in a emcee battle"
piece, which was pretty nice, but might sound out of rhythm if added to a beat.

Close one, but i think im going in the direction of Eternally Sick

VOTE - ETERNAL

Eternal had better disses, multis and structure

vote: Eternal

uh tko? or is there some 5 vote shit or somthin...

eh

uppin

oh geez.. served like a waiter, nice finish

eternal
1

yeah eternal nice finish good one later
~Kelli

:eek: DDDDDDAAAAAAAAYYYYYYUUUUUMMMMMM!

It really doesn't matter what I say at this point.
But all I have to ask is, emcee, how was your meal?


Don't forget 2 leave a tip. ;)

your tip is, stay in school

lol go eternal!