im hitting and kicking that 8 ball corner pocket
shooting his lyrics at me like a peice of shit rocket
give me a shot gun i don't need bullet's i just want a gun to cock it
you know your momma's titty i socked it
and punched a hole
in the cylacone
now im getting trampled by the football team
hanging on the goal post in the end zone
smoking the crome to releave some steam
im not mean im nice
chewing on dryed ice to dpit in your face
im tired of the taste of pepper mace
cuz your murder was the case
i told you to make haste to the words i kick spit and make
dissing on you is a peice of cake
int's not like my lifes at stake
but don't get glad get mad
don't get mad get pist
like i killed you and your whole family dosn't egzist
slit my wrist bitch you wish
now who's left to give your bitch ass a goodnight kiss

pretty simple shit wasnt many multis but it was aight, few good lines and aight rhymes,peace

Flow was solid and there were some nice rhyme schemes around the middle. Nothing mind-boggling though. Keep it up, and I'd say stay away from the violent subject matter. if it's the sort of thing you feel writing then cool, just don't feel you have to.