I'm a pacifist; trying to be a Brit hip hop activist
And prove I've got the knack for this rapping shit
As I spit you can watch the track get ripped
Don't pressure me; I'M the one to choose who I'm collabing with
Who's all that and a bag of chips?
Who's hype and throws you off your game when you view Titan?
Screw hyphens; I don't want to insult these kids
Being patronising, acting like they don't know what a multi is
Or mic presence; I wipe peasants off the face of the earth
Claiming they're worth more than nothing
So you got a way with these words?
I saw you stuffing your flow with useless punches, mate I could serve you with the laziest verse
"Remember me? Req like the Mary Rose"
Eyes mean, a scary nose; rhyme schemes and varied flows
And you barely know what "rhyme" means- take a peek
We're going to inherit the earth, so obey the meek
Or you'll get the meek rapping, meaning me crapping in your face
You're bitter; got my name in your mouth and you're gagging at the taste
Got me pleased enough to write
I'm as unbelievable as Pun saying "I couldn't eat another bite!"
The most dope flows from the lips of a white nerd?
You've seen nothing; this is the tip of the iceberg
I'll live to see props and drop wisdom to scorn fools
But giving me pots won't stop me pissing in your pool

I've replied to some before without posting so don't delete lol.

Creative flow, mad rhyme scheme, and clever shit. That's the req I know.

first time i really read n e of ur shit
the flow was a little off for me at the beginin,
but i picked it up and liked it...good rhymes,
nice funny hits, nice personals, clever multis...

peace

Thanks Ninja. I'm assuming the req you know is better than the one you're unfamiliar with lol. But are you implying I've been wack recently?:mad:
haydude- my flow's like that a lot of the time, only I get it really and even then it's just a general guessing-where-the-words-go thing lol. Cheers for looking, man.

Originally posted by -NinjaMic-
Creative flow, mad rhyme scheme, and clever shit. That's the req I know.

âgree'd nice ta see ugettin back up in there an to par kid...

*~I'm as unbelievable as Pun saying "I couldn't eat another bite!"~* liked that line...other quoteables but keep it up.. an keep on muh fuckin elevating again!

~1ne

Originally posted by T1 Req
Thanks Ninja. I'm assuming the req you know is better than the one you're unfamiliar with lol. But are you implying I've been wack recently?:mad:


cant speak for him, but i kinda took that to mean you havent really been posting in here often, not like you used to do back in the day on EB. nice to see this thread.

that was fucking smooth, i enjoy reading your rhymes.
Gives us some more, luv.

that was really tight....nice work...

"Remember me? Req like the Mary Rose"
Eyes mean, a scary nose; rhyme schemes and varied flows

I liked that bit. :cool:

That was in quotes because I was biting a line from "Let Em Live" lol.
"Remember me? Chino like the prison"

Thanks all:D
I'd post here more, but either I've got writer's block or I've lost the ability to make songs lmao. I've had 5 in the process of being written for a month now :\

No. You just seemed really on point on this one.

Tom Green is a scary man.
"WHY DON'T YOU HAVE ANYTHING TO DRINK?? CHOOSE ONE MAKING YOU BETTER FEELING!!!"

This is nice kid
good use of metas and punches
peep my new audio song Boss Balla feat K-Roc & Aundria Hicks

http://www.eminemweb.com/board/showthread.php?s=&threadid=4043

Thanks ver' much, El Diablo:)
I'll check your thread later...just off out now.

yea shit was dope, make an audio of this:D

def a good drop


UPPIN

that was dope...PM me dog, we should collab son.

very hot indeedy do

Heh I'll save the collabo excitment till I've posted an audio...not sure if you remember them from EB but I'm little different really.
Thanks for the responses, guys. Much appreciated:D

This poetry isn't just going to appreciate itself, you know.

Sure it will. Just write a bragadacio verse from this verses perspective.