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Exodus
12-06-2002, 02:20 AM
30 bars
5 votes
and uhhh... all that other shit

V i L E
12-06-2002, 11:40 AM
Um, I'm in the school library, and that nudie pic is not helping me at all. But yeah, Imma prolly drop something tonight or tomorrow.

V i L E
12-08-2002, 04:13 PM
Diss to Exodus
Let's make it 32 Bars, so we'd have an even number of rhymes. All bar limits should be divisible by 4.

In order to destroy Ex and his people, I got my trigger finger next to my heater
My rap status is Triple-X like Vendeasle; you “fucking with death” like unprotected sex with the reaper //
Let’s get to rippin’ in a furious rage, you’ll stay undiscovered like a cure for AIDS
You’re hot, but not today; you gon’ vanish without a trace like Doctor A //
For simpletons I get my Timberlands and leave the logos on their face, so eat this you prick
You got a Michael Jackson grip; real quick to slip; I leave red stains on your shoes and “remix your kicks” //
You spit hotness but you need to check your breath, I’d suggest you meet a dentist and invest in Crest
I’ll execute you Exodus, beat you to a shitty mess, till you couldn’t tell right from left after your second guess //
Sticking to text? I see the bitch in you; you suck dick, spit, and chew
I’m giving proof man I spit the truth, like the first time you used a dildo, you chipped a tooth //
It ain’t that you wack my nicca, it’s just that you just rap too simple
In a battle, you should be packing pistols; cuz you wouldn’t be “dope” if Whitney Houston scratched and sniffed you //
Like Kobe with no Shaq moves, I distract you and make you crack ankles
Your rhymes are old-school, someone should revamp you; wanna be a Gangsta, but you can’t steal free samples //
You couldn’t be a “sweet/suite” emcee if you only wrote in hotels; yeah, you flow pretty well
But I’m here to throw bows, rip your clothes and your hair, leave you bare and exposed like Michelle //

32 Bars… Dondada.

Exodus
12-08-2002, 05:20 PM
aiight 32 is straight
I've been waitn a long time to face you
g'luck, your gonna need it


I’m using weapons in sessions as the method to damage bars
& then wrecking Vile so bad that his flesh’ll look camouflaged/
Exposing he can’t come hard, cuz he’ll, get chopped & severed
I’ll stop his heartbeat to show that his blood can’t flow acapella/
Because I be dropping better, while your barely as good as Soldier
Vile will just respond to this via John Edward from Crossing Over/
Exposing he’s lost his voters…his best decrees are the worst
plus voters will only think Vile is ill cause he mentiond me in his verse/
Essentially leaving him hurt, although he’s just faking w/ boasts
claiming that he’ll take me out, when he has trouble taking a joke/
Cause it’s blatant in posts, you’ve analyzed me, yet it’s asinine
for you to say you studied, when your lines are twice my size/
You battle rhymes? I'll roast ya scripts & show this battle's hopeless-ness
Reach my level? homo, you'd need a cheat code just to post with this/
So notice this, cuz if the world’s a stage, I guess ya role’s the bitch
just call me fate, in that ya life’s in my hands, though I’m choking it/
My style is known to slit, till voting’s passed, and still ya life is spared
since I’m an apathetic sociopath…I’d kill you if I cared…!/
This kid is scared, none can understand, how Viles's fronting the man
explaining to his boys, "Bitch-slapped? Nah…I headbutted his hand!"/

*Exodus switches stances*

Place ya bets on Vile? Youre winning chance is way far
Dudes only put money on you when you dance at gay bars/
Enhance ya radar queer cuz im known to bury authors
While your known to bring more guys home than Larry Walker/
I get up in ya dome have ya sayin "OH SNAP" while im crunchin ya bones
Just by signing up ya beat yourself like punchin a clone/
The type to start beef and get punked on the phone
The type to stay home fridays getting crunked on ya own/
This rookie gunman cant handle a round from my nine
I got you swinging at the birds and stars surroundin ya mind/
I'll strangle you wit ya own suspenders, till you get the picture Urkel
I'll get dizzy and you won't bitch.... cause only the winners circle/

V i L E
12-08-2002, 06:58 PM
Alrighty then. First to five, yatta yatta. No dickriding and blah.

And by the way, that image in your sig... Got me kicked outta the school library. Thanks a lot. ;)

VOTES

Mr. Meyahgee
12-08-2002, 09:14 PM
ILL
vile
flow is nice
dope disses
nice werdplay


"Let’s get to rippin’ in a furious rage, you’ll stay undiscovered like a cure for AIDS"

"wouldn’t be “dope” if Whitney Houston scratched and sniffed you //"

that was gangsta :cool:

nice shit

exodus
flow is dope
ill disses
good wordplay
nice overall

"I get up in ya dome have ya sayin "OH SNAP" while im crunchin ya bones"

"I'll strangle you wit ya own suspenders, till you get the picture Urkel
I'll get dizzy and you won't bitch.... cause only the winners circle/"

nice closer..

all in all... tough to choose but felt that exodus second verse was alot better,.. and won it for me
vote Exodus

Ghetto Ninja
12-09-2002, 05:20 AM
ViLe

flow 6/10
disses/punches 7/10
werdplay 8/10
overall enjoyment 8/10

nice drop..

29/40
liked ya shit keep it up kid- jus wasn't feelin sum of tha punches.. an couldn't really catch tha flow.. bars were a lil too long IMO

Exodus
flow 8/10
disses/punches 7/10
werdplay 8/10
overall enjoyment 8/10

31/40
nice drop, sumnice disses in there sum tight personals etc... caught tha flow nicely, and liked htat style switch...

tight battle, props to both of ya...

Eternal
12-09-2002, 07:29 AM
damn this was a close battle,

vile ripped it at the beginning, but when i read ex's i thought it was overall ebtter

vote~Ex

V i L E
12-10-2002, 01:02 AM
Damn, I must be losin' it. Fuck it.

Exodus
12-10-2002, 01:47 PM
elevate

Ghetto Ninja
12-10-2002, 01:57 PM
str8... keep it up tho..no doubt hot battle!

-NinjaMic-
12-10-2002, 07:27 PM
This is tough to vote on... I'm more entertained by ViLE's lyrics, and the dialogue is really creative in how it stays playful and natural, but kicks alot of syllable work... but the flow seemed off in places. Exodus came with some mean shit, the structure was more stiff and predictable, easier to follow... kinda phased in and out of talking to the reader to talking to the opponent late into the verse, which made it seem less potent and direct, but still lotsa food lines.

ViLE
You got a Michael Jackson grip; real quick to slip; I leave red stains on your shoes and “remix your kicks” //

I see the bitch in you; you suck dick, spit, and chew

I spit the truth, like the first time you used a dildo, you chipped a tooth //

cuz you wouldn’t be “dope” if Whitney Houston scratched and sniffed you //

Your rhymes are old-school, someone should revamp you; wanna be a Gangsta, but you can’t steal free samples //

yeah, you flow pretty well
But I’m here to throw bows, rip your clothes and your hair, leave you bare and exposed like Michelle // (the flow was wacked on that one, but I liked the diss, had the same vibe as the Doc A line)

Exodus
wrecking Vile so bad that his flesh’ll look camouflaged/

till voting’s passed, and still ya life is spared
since I’m an apathetic sociopath…I’d kill you if I cared…!/ (<---when I cut out that first transition rhyme, the flow made this line ill as figgidy fuck... either way I like it)

Dudes only put money on you when you dance at gay bars

have ya sayin "OH SNAP" while im crunchin ya bones

The type to start beef and get punked on the phone
The type to stay home fridays getting crunked on ya own/
This rookie gunman cant handle a round from my nine
I got you swinging at the birds and stars surroundin ya mind/
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Had about the same amount of standout lines overall, but Ex's few hit harder I think.

Vote = Exodus

You're not losin' it ViLE. You just forgot how to make your text verses look "pretty".

V i L E
12-10-2002, 11:00 PM
Originally posted by -NinjaMic-

You're not losin' it ViLE. You just forgot how to make your text verses look "pretty".

**Runs to the stores to pick up Lyric Cleaning Kit**

I'll be ready next time.

haydude
12-11-2002, 08:25 PM
this was some sick shit/
props to u hardcore motha fuckas/
battles r crazy entertainin-tight spits/

peace

V i L E
12-12-2002, 03:44 AM
Haydude, you're pathetic...

Ghetto Ninja
12-12-2002, 11:13 AM
thread closed tight ass battle to both of yah...