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haydude
12-03-2002, 06:17 PM
no rules, let ur whole fuckin fan club vote...

exodus is just a fancy word for comin out, ur gay dude/
what the fuck u gonna tell ur boys when u get beat by haydude/
im just a kid, but ima take a shot and kill u by rappin/
i know kids shoulnt play with guns-thats how accidents happen/
like me beatin u, but i dont care if its accidentally/
coincidentally, i happened to be pointin the gun at u intentionally/
u got talent, no doubt sir and i got respect for my elders/
but it aint "the older, the better," cuz rappins a game for all-aged-players/
theres room for jdragon, me and even a little boy named tyke/
who's jealous?-u...com'on, ur old ass can join the crew-psych/
my real names mike, but im not here to pick a fight with a bully/
i just hope u get raped slowly and die like scully-understand me fully?/
ill never stop pullin on u like a pullie-not even if u beg/
ill cut off ur legs, cuz u never felt defeat-u in half, but still all fag/
ur a veteran though-right?, ur used to livin with casualties/
but after tonight, ur spits only be in a section titled "the oldies"/
again, i dont mean to be rude-take the mic, i've been a hog/
but this battles like a rocky movie-its a victory for the underdog/

peace

Tyke
12-03-2002, 06:18 PM
lol, what a dumb bitch

Exodus
12-03-2002, 06:39 PM
lmao

whatever kid, first off i'm 17, i didn't know that made me ancient
gimme 20 minutes to key something up

Exodus
12-03-2002, 06:57 PM
yo anybody remember that show HeyDude on Nickelodeon "It's a little wild and a little strange/ when you make your home right on the range/" lol



The curse is free, so it's a certainty my words make you burst in three,
Cos my verse will purposely place you're body in the furthest emergency,
Where the nurses be attending urgently to ya burns in the third degree,
Asking, "Why on earth did this herb MC have to take things personally?"
So you're the first person to be, labelled as completely rubbish and useless,
Whilst you're still covered with bruises lying in rap musics recovery unit,
Wishing you wern't born, screaming out..."My fucking mother was stupid!"
This brother is ruthless carving six holes through this stuttering nuisance,
Whilst taping up his mouthpiece to avoid listening to any other excuses,
I'll just govern the booth kid, the truth is a testament of my excellence,
Cos there's no damn way i'll lose to someone with a homosexual preference,
And this text is just the reference, but you're still wack as fuck allegedly,
So an MC of you're pedigree doesn't even belong in the same thread as me,
So just let it be, cos unforgettably you're style went out with the seventies,
Incredibly, ya family are born losers so accept the loss as just hereditary,
Yes ..my scripts are heavenly, containing sick phrases that specifically,
Prove that you're officially, still amongst the internet's worst netcee's in history,
So any hope of you dissing me, will be about as effective as you're consistency!
I'm everything you wish banto be, it's over, so somebody kill this queer, right?
Cos I'll bring Bambi into the thread and have him hanging on for 'dear life'!

Tyke
12-03-2002, 07:38 PM
lol

ok I'm going to be thourough so not to be accused of dick ryding..

Haydude

"exodus is just a fancy word for comin out, ur gay dude/
what the fuck u gonna tell ur boys when u get beat by haydude/

weak opening, simple rhyme, and uncreative

im just a kid, but ima take a shot and kill u by rappin/
i know kids shoulnt play with guns-thats how accidents happen/

umm not a diss at all, and kind of filler..

like me beatin u, but i dont care if its accidentally/
coincidentally, i happened to be pointin the gun at u intentionally/

good, multis and a decent punch
u got talent, no doubt sir and i got respect for my elders/
but it aint "the older, the better," cuz rappins a game for all-aged-players/

elers and players don't rhyme, baseless diss, and you gave him props
theres room for jdragon, me and even a little boy named tyke/
who's jealous?-u...com'on, ur old ass can join the crew-psych/

I'm older than exodus dumbshit.. and you took the time to diss me, whe your supposed to be dissing him. And this rhyme didn't make a lot of sense either..

my real names mike, but im not here to pick a fight with a bully/
i just hope u get raped slowly and die like scully-understand me fully?/

scully doesn't work as a multi, "my rel names mike"<- gay and this was uncreative

ill never stop pullin on u like a pullie-not even if u beg/
ill cut off ur legs, cuz u never felt defeat-u in half, but still all fag/

beg and fag don't rhyme, and if they did it's a very simple rhyme.. And what are you pullin on????lol

ur a veteran though-right?, ur used to livin with casualties/
but after tonight, ur spits only be in a section titled "the oldies"/

umm decent diss, but the rhyme isn't multi sylalbic(sp??) since you only rhhymed "eez"

again, i dont mean to be rude-take the mic, i've been a hog/
but this battles like a rocky movie-its a victory for the underdog/

umm the rhyme was poor, but a good ending..

5/10

Exodus...

Awseome fucking useage of multis dude, really the best I've seen.. Good disses that were relevant. Only thing was the flow was a lil off do to your multis.
But you really fucking killed.. 8.5/10

VOTE=Exodus

btw that show was one of my faves when I was a kid

"watch out for those man eatin jack rabbits, and killer cacti"- that show was actually shot about 60 miles from where I live..

Crazee
12-04-2002, 02:17 AM
:/ @ Exodus's habit of spittin' verses that remind me of my shit

vote=Exodus

Exodus
12-04-2002, 03:51 PM
Originally posted by haydude
no rules, let ur whole fuckin fan club vote...


i wish they would hurry up

haydude
12-04-2002, 07:51 PM
let me clear shit up for tyke:
the openin is good-it was suppose to be simple and direct...

the next two lines set up the 2 after-they make sense together
and i gave him props cuz he is a good mc-i was sayin somethin...

thought ex was older cuz he always calls me kid
and i wasnt dissin u guy-im pretty sure i didnt-
look for the multis in that line, they're nice...
and elders and players almost rhyme-thats a good line...

my real name is "mike" haydu-line wasnt so uncreative-multi

thought the 2nd last line was only aight too-kinda funny
the endin was sweet i though-u only liked it a bit?
just wanted to clear that up, but i respect ur vote n e ways...
lets analyze ex though,
Originally posted by Exodus
yo anybody remember that show HeyDude on Nickelodeon "It's a little wild and a little strange/ when you make your home right on the range/" lol

-line was already used and it was gay then-just worse here...

The curse is free, so it's a certainty my words make you burst in three,
Cos my verse will purposely place you're body in the furthest emergency,
-pretty sweet-liked this for an opener, but not so punchful

Where the nurses be attending urgently to ya burns in the third degree,
Asking, "Why on earth did this herb MC have to take things personally?"

-i liked this line-thought it was relatable and funny-good diss
nice multis, but rhyme was also not syllably(sp) good...

So you're the first person to be, labelled as completely rubbish and useless,
Whilst you're still covered with bruises lying in rap musics recovery unit,

-funny, but definately no rhyme-call his too tyke...

Wishing you wern't born, screaming out..."My fucking mother was stupid!"
This brother is ruthless carving six holes through this stuttering nuisance,
Whilst taping up his mouthpiece to avoid listening to any other excuses,

-i think u forgot a line for the rhyme, cuz it skips, didnt think the punch was so good here either...

I'll just govern the booth kid, the truth is a testament of my excellence,
Cos there's no damn way i'll lose to someone with a homosexual preference,

-good punch, nice rhyme, but awkward...works though

And this text is just the reference, but you're still wack as fuck allegedly,
So an MC of you're pedigree doesn't even belong in the same thread as me,

-multi seemed force, but still good...the punch is fucked
doesnt make sense together, but gets shit across...sorta

So just let it be, cos unforgettably you're style went out with the seventies,
Incredibly, ya family are born losers so accept the loss as just hereditary,

-great punch, nice multis, but rhyme was off, but didnt matter here, two disses got across and worked...

Yes ..my scripts are heavenly, containing sick phrases that specifically,
Prove that you're officially, still amongst the internet's worst netcee's in history,

-again, the multis are sick-should of went with the heavenly idea
but the rhyme is aight and the punch is nice...

So any hope of you dissing me, will be about as effective as you're consistency!
I'm everything you wish banto be, it's over, so somebody kill this queer, right?
Cos I'll bring Bambi into the thread and have him hanging on for 'dear life'!

-liked the "dear life" thing, but this was garbage-no rhyme,
which made shit fall apart-wasnt really funny either...bad endin
but still a sick battle spit...

Exodus
12-05-2002, 04:31 AM
call it how you see it kid

Tyke
12-05-2002, 10:44 AM
Dude, the hey dude thing wasn't even a part of the rhyme.. Ex used tons of multis, and they were creative rhymes. He was skillful, you weren't. I think it's dumb that you posted that anyway...

haydude
12-05-2002, 07:02 PM
i thought i was pretty fair in my evaluation of ex's spit,
i gave u props-it was a sick spit...

whatever tyke, i never said he wasnt skillful-i said he was...
but i didnt think mine was so bad, but u seem to think u
can do better and since u dont like me battlin ex,
u wanna battle me?

Tyke
12-06-2002, 12:49 PM
I already battled you and ex, and won..

Exodus
12-06-2002, 02:04 PM
it was still a moral victory for me :cool:

Tyke
12-06-2002, 02:08 PM
I won the battle, you won the war...........

haydude
12-06-2002, 04:08 PM
so, u cant battle someone more than once?
whatever...its up to u tyke...
but eventually, and prob soon
were gonna battle again...hehehe


peace

Crazee
12-07-2002, 12:50 AM
me and ex are on similar quality, I'll whip your ass if you want

V i L E
12-10-2002, 01:18 AM
Exodus wont this battle.... I don't feel like reading the other 50 billion replies.