ok this is much better.....now let me try this again..
new rules(15 bars-3-0 ko) here it goes...

its finally my time to shine through,so what you gonna do/
when i step on dis stage, everyone feels my rage/
my rage against ms. mack,whos more fucked up then Laura Bush on crack/
i aint afraid to stand out,even though you may think dis rap is planned out/
i am as real as it gets,so people place yo bets/
im bout to pop dis bitch,cuz you be irritatin me mo then a computer glitch/
your rap is so fuckin pathetic,you be stuck on anestetic/
ive got more potential then you,oversteppin out of da clear blue/
i dont belive dis shit, you dont even know what it means to spit/
i was born to rap,cuz i leave people always wantin to clap/
as fo you im a little stumped,as confused as a eleven year old whos been humped/
cant eva follow your story, is it me or do ya need to be more gorey/
ya rap is all fake,so yall have to go back eatin that sympathy cake/
it looks like im gonna blow this place,n walk away leavin ya feel like you in space/
my rap is as tough as it comes, you get so stunned you start suckin ya thumbs/
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now im done....your up,lol!!!send ya rhyme, when ya have time...
peace,
kate

My style is effervescent, BITCH feel my flow
I'm ahead of my time....unique..like Vincent Van Gogh
I'm not a painter but my flow is a work of art
My lyrics continue to methodically rip MC's apart
Like the Golden Child....I'm that chosen one
I'll stomp you like a Spaniard in the annual Bull Run
Eminem's girl for life...Yeah right!!! get a clue
Em would bend you over then stuff you like chicken cordon bleu
Your a groupie, just another fucking flea on his jock
He'd work you right to left like a combination lock
The next morn, he'd serve you food probably something quick
He'd bring you a breakfast tray holding a large bowl of trix (trick)
Em would thank you but please chicken, don't be mislead
He just has a soft heart for HOES that give good head
You've been dicked and dusted...out rapped and disgusted
I'm on rhyme patrol and you've just been busted
Arrested and assualted for that weak shit you spit
This is only your 1st battle and you already need to quit
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take it easy there ms. mack/
dont want ya to be havin a heart attack/
ya rhymes seem to do nothin but get worse/
you like a borin emcee wit a curse/
your rap is really good at first/
then get so bad ya develop an urgent thurst/
ya hurry to pair up some rhymes/
n end up repeatin shit a thousand times/
ya struggle to win a battle/
like a buffalo thrown from a herd of cattle/
ya soon think ya on top/
but really are just a big flop/
you say im a hoe who gives good head/
at least i aint a washed up rapper lyin in her death bed/
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heres somethin i just quickly put together.....gotta get back to work....
peace,
kate

ms mack.. she had more punches and has the hot hand right now.

vote- ms mack

good idea on it emgirl, but needs work.

em's girl got completly destroyed by tha macktress, which is expected.. Emss girl's rhymes are still thoughtless, boring, and drab...

I hate rookies..I just wanna grab them by their throat
Calm the fuck down and give people a chance to vote
This is a test of wills....a battle between me and you
There will never be a winner if you respond to everything I do
Shut the fuck up, take a seat, kick back and relax
Mc's vote only on the first threads posted by Kate & Ms. Mack

lmao^^ she dope!

Vote=Ms.Mack.....eminemsgirl or whatever your name is, keep practicing cause you cant even compete wit ms.mack..

This shit goes to Ms.Mack.
Not bad for a ho
:o

vote=ms. mack
definatley ripped eminemsgirl nicely
eminemsgirl, too basic and weak
get comparisons and analogies that no one has thought of...

ms. mack, wanna battle?

peace

5-0.......nice battle Kate....thankx to all of you who took the time to vote

nice battle ms. mack....i just got a chance to read it all and it looks like you beat me fair and square...lol!!!,looks like i got to practice alot more...lol!!!im just laughin at myself so ignore me...
peace,
kate