Rulez

~5-8 Bars (2 lines=1 Bar)
~No Recycling, Countering Others Verses
~No D/R, Hate, Crew Votes.. (Will Not Count)
~First To 5 Votes Wins
~3 - 0 Is A KO

Sound Good Kid? i'll post in ma shit after ya check in.....

~1ne

sounds good, ill post before or after, doesnt matter to me. good luck bro..

aight...

So here we go, call this a battle but you aint puttin up da fight,
Bitch I proclaimed War but ya still shootin me wit knifes!/
The 'punches' Im bout to 'hit' you wit are like Diarea, I cant hold em in',
So Ill let every bit of this 'shit flow', and see your ass at the golden end/
Ill have be in the light where I was born holdin down the victory,
youll be hangin from an acorn tree by ya 'nutz', smellin like smoked hickory./
Now listen to me and watch as we 'zoom out' of 'Focus',
this guy uses magic words to win, emphasis on 'hocus pocus'./
It doesnt matter if hes ever gonna slay the jragon,
Im packin 'heat' so I 'burn' his ass up like a 'flaming napkin'./
Ill take him outta the game quickly, jus' call me Isiah Thomas,
like when he took out Reggie for dissin the Houston Comets./
Ill be 'poppin Herbal Extacy' like it was made from 'pringles',
but extacy explodes ya heart, so ill be 'happy' stayin straight n' single./
Ill finish this thug-wannabe/Wannabe-MC with a passion for battles,
He'll be layin fetile while I crack his neck like it was a bottle of snapple./
Go ahead and do it, say the same shit said by all yall fucks,
"Ima slay da jragon!". Yeah? Come at me, cuz you jus' ran outta luck!//

Aight there ya go focus.. sorry its over the limit but its only by 1 bar, i felt i had to get it in for my whole flow to work lol. all yall vote aight? L8.

im ready to vote

wheres focus?

LOL god damn is that fuckin hocus pocus shit gonna b played anymore thats ALL i ever Hear! w/e....

u dropped one over no beef.... unl;ess i get ripped.. ;) j/k

you tryin to 'beat' me is worse than a "paraplegic" beatin him self~off
its damn near impossible; like b. gates losin his money cuz of microsoft//
like come on son; u couldn't get fuckin laid if you were a roofing shingle
simply i'm "runnin" ya "back" so far thar I should b known as "Mike Pringle"//
u couldn't win this "new age game" if i gave u tha "winning~numbers"
u bout to get "laid to rest"; Like tha "Milf~Hunter" does to all tha "Sinning~Mothers"//
this is really piss'n me off; Realize, you wouldn't be able to "Burn~Me" if i was a "Maple-Tree"
Ma Sense's Hightened Like Only Tha "Blind~Can~Be" Not "Blurry" like if u was waterless on "XTC"//
"Rabbit~Run" I'm Just "Havin~Fun" But Still ma "Punches" N' "Hits" like "Grab~n'~run"
not playin with "twigs n berries" 'swing' real "straight" like a gang fight there "Stab~N~Gun"//
Ma Shits "hittin" u like "vin diesel" into a "train" its undeniable "Fast and Furious"
I'm so "sick" i'm like "Anthrax", u tha human anatomy; i've infected ya an there's no "curin~this"//
i continue on, an "sting u like a Bee" I'm In Ma Prime I'm "Catius Clay"; Muh Fuckin "Mohaumed Ali"
"your not invincible"; "ur now 'paralyzed' in 1 spot" like your fuckin "superman"- "christopher reeve"//
i didn't know any ones "fire" could b "ignited" an "doused out" so insanely quick
you took Nine bars i went Eight... it's planely simple-- I'm Out Now; Kid Suck My dick.....//


(M. Pringle-Runnin Back/WR In Da CFL)
(MILF Hunter- online porno- he fucks MILFS-Mom I'd Like to Fuck -> MILF)
(XTC-Ecstasy, Can Sumetimes Distort Vision & can seem blurry- especially with out liquids- such as h2o)
(Playin wit Twigs N Berries(TNB- Balls N Dick) straight against it... just sez it all)
(Mauhaumed ali Orignional Name B4 Changin Multiple times Was Catius(sp?) Clay)
(Christopher Reeves the oringinal super who was invinceble is now in a wheel chair- paralyzed)


done... no beef kid....


~1ne~

updated, as i press submit instead of peview.....

UPP'N 4 Votes

focus took this no doubt...
i didnt think u had that kind of vocabulary in u
some shit was a little too much, but whatever...
some shit was just off the hook

kidjragon, it wasnt bad, but some things were too obvious
some shit didnt rhyme either and the flow was a little off...

vote = focus

peace

UPP'N

1-0 ME :D!!

kidj came nice, but just underestimated Focus. The punchlines were just really extravagant...


P.S. Word to the played name rhymes... if I hear one more person rhyme mic with dyke, talk about some karate shit, and mention the ninja turtles I'm gonna change my name to Nas.

so is that a vote er what ninja? i think so.. i'm jus high an lost... LOL

Dam Kid.. I was hoping and just hoping.....dam Kid......Focus kick your ass.

damn focus.. like ninja said, i underestimated you lol. good job..

lol no worries as i guess u see why i haven't been battlgin here fer awhile been other places....

UPP'N Fer Votes Here! Don't Sleep!

1-0 for ME!

UPP'N on dis... don't sleep!!!

*noticed i was 3 jus after dis... lol*

your 3-0....

Well, focus had some good shit, but the punches were a lil too complex, either on content or flow...and his flow was a lil off..

kid, you doin a lot better, I'm glad to see you're really tryen too improve. Illrhymed, and soldier, and eminsgirl4life could take a lesson from you.. Your rhymes, and vocab were too basic compared to Focus, but I thought your flow topped his... T

his was a pretty close battle to me in diff respects.. Honestly, Focus hit a lil harder then kid, but based on an improvement levil, and on the basic impression each rhyme gave me, I'm handing this vote too.....

Kidjragon!!

there we fuckin go.. wanted sum1 to notice an give sum recognition wit tha battle dun wit... kid....

Kid man nice battle we'll hit that collab up like soon... once all 3 of us get in at it..

thanks tyke, lol. I appreciate it, and Focus, great job. Well hit up that collab sometime soon. Anyway, Ima go cuz I got some shit to do. l8

focus
nice punches... (too complex but nice non-the less :D)
flow is good
rhyming is okay
but you came hard and i liked that

kid
you had some good punchlines in ya...
but it's that hocus pocus shit that piss me off.. that's been played too much if you know what i mean
flow is a lil choppy but getting better

vote- FOCUS

wordplay/meta focus
punches focus
multies focus
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