Filly
06-12-2008, 07:26 AM
i know it's too long....but feedback plz?!
its called "friendship" =
Friendship, what does this word mean?
Friendship, thanks for all the time that you’v been
Friendship, you got no idea how much I hate it,
Friendship, its jus nothing but a bullshi.t!
Do you have? Do you have? Any idea!!
Do you know? Do you know, what happened?
Jus leave, take your footprints with you
Leave! take your memories too
Leave I don’t want to see you
Leave! jus leave, jus leave!!
The word life is short but yet it is full of mystery
As the days go on, can’t go back it still remains in page of history
You find many things going on no meanings, it is so funny
Worse is that people these days spend most of time thinking of money
It is never the way human wants it to be
It is never letting you be as you want free
Sometimes you win sometimes you lose
It may get you get a bit confuse
Many things go on and make you wonder a lot
Some stuff get to you like a killing gun shot
Those days the rule the power is for the strong
You might sometimes wonder where do you belong
Nothing seems to work under the name of the law
But keep always in mind that what goes around come back around
So beware because when it come back it would happen with no sound
Life became so wicked everyone think of their own
Who you knew yesterday will today be to you unknown!
Life plays mean. nothing, no work is now clean
But it wont effect on me, coz im the queen
My words are the only things left for me now
To take revenge from all that once hurt me I took a vow
And for ya’ll info, I don’t need anything from anyone anyhow
I regret for trustin the people I trusted one day
Right now I don’t want them anymore to stay
I jus feel like goin far really far away
Let me tell you that Im free to diss you the way I want to
I don’t have to go on saying what you made me go thru
Even though I keep on repaetin everytime,
You don’t seem to know about your filthy crime
Yet, that’s why jus leave me and go
You don’t have to know
What im feelin and what I don’t show
You became invaluable to me
You became invisible to see
I hate you i don’t want to breathe the air you inhale
Guess you are the reason dor me when every time I fail
Our story, friendship was once upon a time just like a fairy tale
I wonder what ever happened to you, you became blind
And I always thought you were the one of kind
I don’t even seem to understand whats goin thru your mind
Was it me … the bad friend?
Was it my fault that once I gav you my hand!?
Whatever I’ve done has gone with the air,
Think about it, see how it is unfair
Lets make it clear, when was the last time you were near?
Was it on my birthday? Did u even wipe up my tear?
Or did you even jus sit by my side,
And made me feel kind’f better kind’f alright? Huh?!
Im so disappointed from you, you cant even expect
Whatever happened to the love, care and respect?!
This is the friendship of ours, look it is sinkin’
Babe sinkin…
Friendship, what does this word mean?
Friendship, thanks for all the time that you’v been
Friendship, you got no idea how much I hate it,
Friendship, its jus nothing but a bullshi.t!
Do you have? Do you have? Any idea!!
Do you know? Do you know, what happened?
Jus leave, take your footprints with you
Leave! take your memories too
Leave I don’t want to see you
Leave! jus leave, jus leave!!
Now see, I’ve tried so hard to ignore,
I tried to dismiss from my mind this sore,
But every time I see you, I hit more the hatred score!
N to let you know this game become the reason of my bore
I don’t wana play it anymore, get outta my door!
You were the best friend sister always a faithful mate,
We used to be the best, and it felt great
Gues its too late, im gone already, I am dead
I don’t want these memories again in my head
My power is evaporating every second and hour
Dead flower, I got shots and still getting it like a shower
It’s happening all over again and I know
I’ll be suffering and won’t have place to go
Im dead, drowned under ground
Soon I’ll be pulled out’f ground and you’ll see how I will glow
See, you can do what you want to it im used
For me not a big deal anymore im not even confused
Im matured I won’t beg for you no more yeah I refused
Im stubborn yea, temper high all time never reduced
You’ll always be cursed with every line of my verse
And you should know im not afraid of you or anyone
You won’t take away my joy neither my fun
Just wait coz my power sooner or later would return
It’ll be the day where you’ll totally get burned
Go babe, go coz as the time goes it’ll be your turn
Im gona shut you down in your game in your place
You’ll see im giving you lil bit of space in this race
I’ll get of your brace and I’ll break your face
Imma do it all slowly, torture you and I wont leave any trace
My heart is right now so haunted
I gues it is what you always wanted
Remember from me it’s a promise
Im gona giv you the dead kiss
And then don’t beg and come to me crawling
Your empire your world and pride is falling
Your empire your world and pride is falling
Friendship, what does this word mean?
Friendship, thanks for all the time that you’v been
Friendship, you got no idea how much I hate it,
Friendship, its jus nothing but a bullshi.t!
Do you have? Do you have? Any idea!!
Do you know? Do you know, what happened?
Jus leave, take your footprints with you
Leave! take your memories too
Leave I don’t want to see you
Leave! jus leave, jus leave!!
Game is over!!
opinions?
its called "friendship" =
Friendship, what does this word mean?
Friendship, thanks for all the time that you’v been
Friendship, you got no idea how much I hate it,
Friendship, its jus nothing but a bullshi.t!
Do you have? Do you have? Any idea!!
Do you know? Do you know, what happened?
Jus leave, take your footprints with you
Leave! take your memories too
Leave I don’t want to see you
Leave! jus leave, jus leave!!
The word life is short but yet it is full of mystery
As the days go on, can’t go back it still remains in page of history
You find many things going on no meanings, it is so funny
Worse is that people these days spend most of time thinking of money
It is never the way human wants it to be
It is never letting you be as you want free
Sometimes you win sometimes you lose
It may get you get a bit confuse
Many things go on and make you wonder a lot
Some stuff get to you like a killing gun shot
Those days the rule the power is for the strong
You might sometimes wonder where do you belong
Nothing seems to work under the name of the law
But keep always in mind that what goes around come back around
So beware because when it come back it would happen with no sound
Life became so wicked everyone think of their own
Who you knew yesterday will today be to you unknown!
Life plays mean. nothing, no work is now clean
But it wont effect on me, coz im the queen
My words are the only things left for me now
To take revenge from all that once hurt me I took a vow
And for ya’ll info, I don’t need anything from anyone anyhow
I regret for trustin the people I trusted one day
Right now I don’t want them anymore to stay
I jus feel like goin far really far away
Let me tell you that Im free to diss you the way I want to
I don’t have to go on saying what you made me go thru
Even though I keep on repaetin everytime,
You don’t seem to know about your filthy crime
Yet, that’s why jus leave me and go
You don’t have to know
What im feelin and what I don’t show
You became invaluable to me
You became invisible to see
I hate you i don’t want to breathe the air you inhale
Guess you are the reason dor me when every time I fail
Our story, friendship was once upon a time just like a fairy tale
I wonder what ever happened to you, you became blind
And I always thought you were the one of kind
I don’t even seem to understand whats goin thru your mind
Was it me … the bad friend?
Was it my fault that once I gav you my hand!?
Whatever I’ve done has gone with the air,
Think about it, see how it is unfair
Lets make it clear, when was the last time you were near?
Was it on my birthday? Did u even wipe up my tear?
Or did you even jus sit by my side,
And made me feel kind’f better kind’f alright? Huh?!
Im so disappointed from you, you cant even expect
Whatever happened to the love, care and respect?!
This is the friendship of ours, look it is sinkin’
Babe sinkin…
Friendship, what does this word mean?
Friendship, thanks for all the time that you’v been
Friendship, you got no idea how much I hate it,
Friendship, its jus nothing but a bullshi.t!
Do you have? Do you have? Any idea!!
Do you know? Do you know, what happened?
Jus leave, take your footprints with you
Leave! take your memories too
Leave I don’t want to see you
Leave! jus leave, jus leave!!
Now see, I’ve tried so hard to ignore,
I tried to dismiss from my mind this sore,
But every time I see you, I hit more the hatred score!
N to let you know this game become the reason of my bore
I don’t wana play it anymore, get outta my door!
You were the best friend sister always a faithful mate,
We used to be the best, and it felt great
Gues its too late, im gone already, I am dead
I don’t want these memories again in my head
My power is evaporating every second and hour
Dead flower, I got shots and still getting it like a shower
It’s happening all over again and I know
I’ll be suffering and won’t have place to go
Im dead, drowned under ground
Soon I’ll be pulled out’f ground and you’ll see how I will glow
See, you can do what you want to it im used
For me not a big deal anymore im not even confused
Im matured I won’t beg for you no more yeah I refused
Im stubborn yea, temper high all time never reduced
You’ll always be cursed with every line of my verse
And you should know im not afraid of you or anyone
You won’t take away my joy neither my fun
Just wait coz my power sooner or later would return
It’ll be the day where you’ll totally get burned
Go babe, go coz as the time goes it’ll be your turn
Im gona shut you down in your game in your place
You’ll see im giving you lil bit of space in this race
I’ll get of your brace and I’ll break your face
Imma do it all slowly, torture you and I wont leave any trace
My heart is right now so haunted
I gues it is what you always wanted
Remember from me it’s a promise
Im gona giv you the dead kiss
And then don’t beg and come to me crawling
Your empire your world and pride is falling
Your empire your world and pride is falling
Friendship, what does this word mean?
Friendship, thanks for all the time that you’v been
Friendship, you got no idea how much I hate it,
Friendship, its jus nothing but a bullshi.t!
Do you have? Do you have? Any idea!!
Do you know? Do you know, what happened?
Jus leave, take your footprints with you
Leave! take your memories too
Leave I don’t want to see you
Leave! jus leave, jus leave!!
Game is over!!
opinions?