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30 lines/bars max
15 min
no riding off ones verse!..
3-0 tko or 5 to win
no ghost votes / hate votes

due nov. 20 no later


i'll spit soon..

who's this 'messed up feline' other known as 'wack cat'/
that the only 'hot single' he has is 'buring his tracks'/
even at that, the only CD he sold was to his mom and dad/
at best his 'ratings' are a 'one', wit a 'negative in front'/
shows you battlen me, means you'll get SONNED/
but i'm guessing, your a 'porn star', always 'getting fucked'/
see in this battle 'Im all selfish' cuz it's 'ALL ABOUT ME'/
i rip more emcees then peeps thinking 'selfishly'/
see if i could, set a 'hot flow' then the 'volcanos wont explode'/
but yo',..it's nuff of ALL ABOUT ME, just dont speak/
cuz you be 'LOSING' more 'blood' then 'slutty bitches' in 'heat'/
see i already won the battle wit no beat/
to add the fact i quit being a textcee/
but my punchlines are basic but direct/
unlike you cuz you always getting hit wit them/
already half the max gone makes you dead wrong/
to battle me, but see lets switch name cuz its really all about me/
or is it by some odd chance you love 'BRITNEY'/
even more then 'MCD', cuz maybe you feel 'LUCKY'/*
but lets stop at the chance, doin' home work online aint the best/
I remember the thread, about poems in french/
askin' if there where 'any frenchies' now you sound dumb to me/*
I guess 'WhiteBoy' being smart is very miss-leading/
but then agian your 'Canadian', or part French?/
asking for help with your natural tounge it's JUST DUMB/
It's like sayin' Mexicans talking spainsh, is their 'second tounge'/
but in this final bar, imma sum it up YOU JUST GOT SONNED/

*lucky and "any frenchies" are thread's that all about me posted
lucky is a sog from britney, in wich we know Mcd loves her

and any frenchies, he was asking to see if any one would help him on his home work, a poem in french..

and WhiteBoy, is his title under his name*

yay! mentol way to point it out fer all of us dumb people bro! ;) LOL

s'all good nice verse.. waitin fer all about me to drop- to see how badly he got ripped... j/k man

drop it like its hot!

Laced out by numbers reacting to this bolt of thunder
Switched his style now he lives as an outsider
Get ready for this match it’s a one hit doubleheader
All about me takes on this desperate moderator
Lets start with the name mentol it sounds like a toothpaste flavor
As a dedication to your death ill put you as my screen savor
Dreaded events by scandalous threats lead to many deaths
Just read your battle text ayo I must be in the wrong thread
Must have had this confused with the forum you called momma’s bed
I was there just last night yo the bitch was openly spread
Mister pedophile, mentol is looking for boys
All of y’all watch out cuz the dick is his favorite toy
So you think you know everything all about me
Had nothing to diss so you filled your verse with useless shit
Its funny how you were the first to notice Britney
I know she’s in your mind 24/7 you worthless phony
Too bad you had to use SONNED two times in your rhyme
Alive im feeling great as im about to show you mine
Hiding my emotions as Im taking care of this business
The three second kill in this battle has left you toothless
mentol’s been benched
for once its not because of his rhyme its cuz he can find a way to maintain his awful stench
been waiting for this chance to take a crack at this little pussy
in my state of trance mentol could never even come close to me
incase you haven’t even noticed as im here to spit game
mentol takes no capitals cuz it aint even a real name

gotta vote for mentol

his wordplay was better, had a little better vocab, and i caught a decent flow

all about me had a nice structure, but in pretty much every other ctagory mentol took this one

good battle folks

vote - Helm

All about me had a REAL good run but Mentol still wiped his ass with AAMs shit. aight.. no beefs jus tellin it like it is.

thanks' uppity 2-0

i forgot my quotables and when i edit it messes it up lol...

All About Me
"incase you haven’t even noticed as im here to spit game
mentol takes no capitals cuz it aint even a real name"

^gotta work on it.. that was a good line tho.

Mentol
"who's this 'messed up feline' other known as 'wack cat'/
that the only 'hot single' he has is 'buring his tracks'/
even at that, the only CD he sold was to his mom and dad/
at best his 'ratings' are a 'one', wit a 'negative in front'/
shows you battlen me, means you'll get SONNED/"

^Sweet!

"to battle me, but see lets switch name cuz its really all about me/
or is it by some odd chance you love 'BRITNEY'/
even more then 'MCD', cuz maybe you feel 'LUCKY'/*
but lets stop at the chance, doin' home work online aint the best/
I remember the thread, about poems in french/
askin' if there where 'any frenchies' now you sound dumb to me/*
I guess 'WhiteBoy' being smart is very miss-leading/"

^Sweeter! lol.

MENTOL - check the lounge if you still wanna battle cuz i wanna go audio wit you :D. C'mon bro rep back.

gotta go w/mentol, although both rhymed just as good, i think mentols punches were a bit harder and his rhyme was just a bit more personal which is the point of a battle to me

vote - mentol

an all around better verse from Mentol

he had better disses, better wordplay, flow, structure, lol i could keep goin but I'll stop

Mentol was much better, his whole verse dissed, where aam used a lot of filler. Mentols flow was better, his rhymes were better.

Vote= Helm

iigth cool tko