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I don't give a shit about the rules




hay dude is confused like old peeps in parking garages
put him in his place, and give em' tire tread massages
sweethart can't rap only chirps and sings like canarys
I heard that wordplay to him is gay sex on dictionarys
you got a bad case of the runs, it might be dysentery
fleeing with your tale tucked, take off fo you get buried
you’re a pest like horse flies, ingest this insecticide
now shoo, go away, before I swat you until you cry
keep thread whoring me, like I’m going to take notice
your diss’s soft like cotton, your aim is out of focus
you want for me to tease you, your in need of some attention
mommy didn’t give it, daddy gave it to you hard and then some
you think lumber jacks are handsome, I’m givin you the axe
what hurts aren’t my opinions, but my clearly stated facts
find some other emcee, when you wanto go provoke
Cause Tyke only plays with toys, before they get broke

i'm a murder this man...

good for you!:D

Originally posted by haydude
i'm a murder this man...

put up, or shut up fuckface.

wheres haydude?...

i wrote a fuckin reply, but my comp crashed and lost it...
whatever...peep dis

yo, im blind shootin, miss hittin/
maybe im slippin? nope, im just spittin/
well...let me tell u a very interenting story/
this little tyke got chewed up and chirped out by a canary/
thanks hunny...but notice doesnt rhyme with focus, try "hocus-pocus"/
ooops, my bad-last time u heard that, i turned ur lines into somethin structured more
stupidly than a ford focus/
here take my dictionary-look the fuckin word up/
his content's lackin-its his vocabulary that he forgot to build up/
im flyin above ur message-i wont be buried "bird up"/
keep swattin-u clearly werent prepared-ur skill, u forgot/
this battle's like david vs. goliath, only u no aim to ur sling shot/
ur just a little tyke, the only fact u know is one plus one equals two/
here's a "better" one, im always gonna be a "better" emcee than you/
u said u leave shit broke-that reminds me of me and ur mommy/
i played with that pussy-u should've seen what i did to her cherry/
u've been pecked as much as ur mom-theres reminants the color of-oh yeah, a canary/

peace

notice and focus don't rhyme ehh, figures yuo'd think that

canary=story

cherry=mommy

do rhyme, you have no structure, and even though I only spent 10 min on your rhyme, I'm sad I wasted even a short portion of my life on your unrhyming, punchless, wordplayless, unstructered, un flowable piece of flop.

canary and story definately rhyme boy
mommy and cherry was kinda weak-the 16 limited me...
i dunno though-i think i ripped pretty well on u
ur spit didnt impress me at all...

cuh-nare-ee
store-ee

Wheres the rhymin that

no-tis
fo-kis

I see that though

LOL @ tyke....

my votes for tyke, who had much better content
and beyond that, haydude's rhyme had no real structure to me

My vote is definitely for Tyke on this one....Haydude you had all that extra time and that's all you could come up with?????

extra time?-whatever...this was the second one i wrote
my first one was deleted, cuz my comp crashed,
but i like this one...i dunno, i still think i picked him apart...

peace

uppin

whatever guy, looks like u win this one
doesnt look like n e one else is votin...

rematch?-that was wack...