yo imma post first, im breakin my own rules/
i aint scarred, i know you just gonna use my verse as your tool/
to victory, dont scavenge off my lines, or else itll be your behind/
being blasted to bits by my, or anyone elses mine/
This field is very dangerous, so dont you fuck wit this/
cuz ull be pullin off a titanic, youll end up worse than a crack baby at a briss/
you not far into the game but u gonna sink quickly/
i am the murderous iceberg that plans on sinking thee/

-I use old language, prepy talk, or slang, no matter what, im on the road to victory/

aint nothin gonna stop me, cuz im in a monster truck/
i dont hit females, but watch out cuz u just got lyrically stuck/
u been torn battered and bruised, while im ridin high as i cruise/
lucky 13th, im tryin to extend my record to 2 and zero/
Im not tryin to be a hero, just tryin to prove i got flow/
i gotta way with words, unspoken lyrics/
you think its absurd, u just mentally sick/
i aint got no1 on ma dick, so these votes r gonna be fair and square/
u just gonna disintegrate, Nasir is always gonna be there/

My orchestration causes transmutation in the Earth's rotation
Now adjacent nation's mirror my vocabulation/
Your infatuation with this rap game is an abomination
Hurry get one last ejaculation from your daily masturbation/
Cause I'm causing castrations with my lyrical manifestations
You front like your hard but it's all a fabrication/
With no procrastination, I give you your termination
I'm all up in yo shit like the federal bureau of investigation/
I got inside information from one of your blood relations
Your cousin said your a product of artificial insemination/
Damn! I heard your Mom was in a state of desperation
She couldn't find a man because of her retardation/
So instead of having sex she opted for fertilization
Your upset, you have no father cause your a gene mutation/(freak)
Peep game youngsta, I just might throw you a ration
But first you'll have to give me an oral examination/
If it's good and your tongue causes hip gyrations
My gratification will make me give you a standing ovation/
Not for your rapping, I don't believe in exaggeration
Your name alone is a definite character assassination/
You like Nas...cool....I'm sure he'd appreciate the admiration
But using his name!!! Why the need for self-perpetration???/
Be your own man, stop with the misrepresentation
Cause there's no justification for your imagined association/
Your rhymes aren't up to par, its all a falsification
I'm not hating, simply stating you need a consultation/
This hallucination could have damaging ramifications



.....................one

Nasir - Not bad overall... Lacked personals but had some good lines...

to victory, dont scavenge off my lines, or else itll be your behind/
being blasted to bits by my, or anyone elses mine/
This field is very dangerous, so dont you fuck wit this/
cuz ull be pullin off a titanic, youll end up worse than a crack baby at a briss/
you not far into the game but u gonna sink quickly/
i am the murderous iceberg that plans on sinking thee/


I lil' off-flow but tight...

I don't get the one line by itself though...

Ms. Mack - Usually I frown upon using the same rhyme sceme through-out but it worked here...

Peep game youngsta, I just might throw you a ration
But first you'll have to give me an oral examination/


Doesn't really rhyme... Still yours had more personals and multlies soooo...

Vote = Ms. Mack

Now adjacent nation's mirror my vocabulation/? vocabulation? thast a new one. Ms mack ur spit was real real good. Much better than i expected i dunno why.

0-1 uppin for more votes

damn miss mack is ill, that use of vocab took this one, I like ya rhyme scheme, and Nasir, if you want votes, then go vote..

vote= Mrs. Mack

can we get a few more votes on this battle......thankx

vote = ms mack, although i must agree w/shady mack... the repetition of the endings gets kind of tiresome to read

nasir, pretty good rhymes, but the structure within the lines was a bit off to me, none of the lines seemed to flow together (in length i mean) good battle u 2

vote=ms. mack

i thought nashir would win this, but ms mack came out strong
i really like ur spit-some fuckin amazin lines
and u used the same rhyme the whole time,
which i dont think is usually a good idea-but worked here

peace

if either of u wanna battle again...but with me
;yo, im in...

can we get a few more votes on this thread before we close it...thankx

Ms Mack

5-0....nice battle Nasir.........thankx to all of you who took the time to vote

ye good job.