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Hellion
03-15-2007, 03:25 AM
This is just the first verse an da hook, I'll post da rest when I'm done with it

Verse 1
I quit my job, cuz I was sick of waiting on a raise,
A minimum wage, in this day an age, thats got me enraged,
But I majored my way through diss bullshit game,
An became more than justa gimick an a name,
That you can mimick for fame,
I became da heart of a hard working artist,
An carved this image on a carcus,
That grew to a person, that was soon working da circut,
Looking like a circus, an still worthless to the world,
A girl, juss swirling in da middle, about to hurl,
An I live in a morge, thats why I'm more morbid then ever before,
But I still can get my mind straight from all of this gore,
See my mind is the morge, the words are the gore,
An I'm more morbid cuz my minds twiztid from the core,
An I can't change, I'm deranged, what can I say?,
God made me this way, an the devils swayed me to say the things that I say,
An I may be crazed, an I may be insane,
But I'm human, an that fact still remains,
Cuz I've gone through some things, an my ways may of changed,
But I've gained, and changed my aim, an my name,
But still ain't seeing no fame,
It's the same old day over an over again, (read again as if it rhymed wit pain)
An this pen only works to a certain extent,
Cuz I try to vent but I'm twiztid an bent,
Thats why my whole verse sounds like non-sense,
On a clean-x, wit no content,
The false profet, uncaged, an released on a mosh pit,
Cuz I'm contantly fighting wit the context,
An this conflict wit everthing that wrong wit, da world today,
Ain't gon change, less we change our ways,
An a change ain't easily done, but it's easy to say,
Thats why I'm constantly changing, never staying the same!

Chorus
This is me, music is my energy,
My entity, yet my enemy,
This is me, the heart of an mc,
This is my world, my identity,
This is me, this is everthing I never,
And ever ment to be!
X2

Hellion
03-15-2007, 03:27 AM
This is the first song I've written in a while that I actually think is fairly good, let me know what you think! You leave feed, I'll leave rep.
Peace

Filly
03-15-2007, 03:39 AM
i liked it alot....good job..:) better thn mine XD

Hellion
03-15-2007, 09:32 PM
Thanks, uppin

robrathburn
03-16-2007, 03:41 PM
you got some spell mistakes that confused me but i like it other than that. nice and uplifting ish

Hellion
03-16-2007, 06:40 PM
My bad on the spelling thing, I'm not all that skilled in that department, an typing fast don't help either. Anyways thanks, uppin
PEACE