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KrAyZy
03-15-2007, 01:13 AM
I might perfect later, but thiz it so far i did it to eminem'z bad influence instrumental, i think the structure'z fucked but read anyway'z, i will rep for good feed if i can


a hospital patient, said to have fried brain cells, in possible statements
no longer the same self, cuz of unstoppable changin
how can thiz be, my family no iz longer astounded wid me
i feel so uncrowded and free, my hearts pounding to beats
i feel so raged, feel i gotta go out and kill the stage
a growing a will to state, all my mind non stop untill i say
an urge to pick up a book, and to pick up a pen
and think like a crook, revealing it in with wats said
becomin a bad influence mixin pills then you had to do it
i do cuz im crazy mad and stupid
who express's thiz trash in music cuz im an ass abusive
go ahead take wats said in my raps and use it
it'z all part of my plan, that'z just adding to it

i run peeps over wid a caddilac, get out choppin them wid a battleaxe
then sit back and relex, screamin now lets see you battle rap
heres some info, first turn ur 2pac off and listen
do anything to eliminate competion, and stop the oppisition
without thinkin the concequenses of ya decision
like i could be bad at thiz, but still come out hazerdous
mad at pricks thinkin i do crack when fact iz they dun know wat a crack addict iz
my life im just bored im sick of being so poor
i do gotta whore but i just feel i can do alot more
i would smoke pot but unfortunatly i dont got
enough for wat dope costs one full joint cost 4 whole bucks

i get crack and i snap and get spazed and you gettin slapped
and whacked right smack on ur back and attacked
while trapped till i lack force of my acts
im not mean, im just easily pissed off
pissed off after drinkin that bottle wid the criss cross
alota my rap, iz space filler'z cuz it'z gotta be packed
wid all of it stacked, so you aughta be mad, man it'z just all in the act
i couldent give a, fuck less i made it to, success
all it iz iz, just stress, dealin wid, the press
havin to get a, drug test and gettin, some sex
getting aid'z from ,some ex who know'z wat they'll, bug next

OvaDose
03-15-2007, 05:37 AM
you've elevated a lot bro.. keep doing your thing

KrAyZy
03-15-2007, 06:53 PM
ehh that waz kind of feed, but i cant give you rep right now, i gotta 'spread it around'