View Full Version : My first rap song XD


Filly
03-14-2007, 09:29 AM
well this is my first rap song....its called Stop the war

*Verse1:
You Can’t Jus Change This Fact, It’s Real It’s True Not an Act, People around Don’t Care for Anyone , They Think Of Themselves and how to have fun, War war war….al what I can see around, People dying…children dying is all wht I find, When will all these things stop
World peace is jus what I hope, Think of it and open your eyes, Open your mind try to be wise!

- Chorus:
Try to stop it for god’s sake
All what we’re living is jus fake
Open your eyes look around you
Feel what the others are going through
Scream out loud “stop the war stop the war”
we want peace! No more war no more war

* Verse2:
What’s the use of this war? We want peace! Don’t go far Is it really hard to be united and help each other? Lets be together live like sisters and brothers, We don’t want blood we don’t want crimes, These things jus cause to others hard times , Where is the justice in the world, in here? All what I see is people living big a fear!, No one knows the meaning of love anymore, But they will once the war is over, yeah for sure

- Chorus:
Try to stop it for god’s sake
All what we’re living is jus fake
Open your eyes look around you
Feel what the others are going through
Scream out loud “stop the war stop the war”
we want peace! No more war no more war

** why do people like killing each other? Why cant we live in peace, look around you is it fair what is happening? Is it fair….people dying, children crying! I cant look at all of these, can you? Answer me can you??

MCD
03-15-2007, 05:08 AM
do it in audio :D

OvaDose
03-15-2007, 05:25 AM
lol^..

Filly
03-15-2007, 08:01 AM
i will...... but there is a proB..
i get shy...thts y i duno whether i'll do it or no....

MCD
03-16-2007, 05:06 AM
being shy is a silly problem to have...just record a few audio's//then once you feel comfortable..share them with people....nobody on here would be outrightly horrible or anything...just give you feedback to help improve:)

OvaDose
03-16-2007, 07:26 AM
word^

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03-17-2007, 04:14 AM
i will...... but there is a proB..
i get shy...thts y i duno whether i'll do it or no....

Lol you act as if we know you in school or something.