Quiet road..Middle of nowhere..You all by yourself..Driving along, not yet snatched from the perfect world you live in.So many have suffered because of you.You have no idea though, soon you will.You scream as your tire flattens..Car loses control, swerves into the ditch.Just as i plotted..I watch from the field with a smile on my face as you get out of your car..A little startled, more pissed than anything..I creep through the grass, silently inch my way closer.Routine so familar but it never gets old..I reach the opposite side of the car..Unknowingly sneak right behind, whisper your name in your ear ''erin'' scream suddenly before getting dropped with an elbow..Finally the moment ive been waiting for..Anxiously waiting to get you back for all youve done.No more practicing on random travelers.This is the real thing this time..At last i get to end the life of the one you has caused all this rage!..Pick you up over my shoulder, proceed back to the house of... ''dolls''...Call me strange but i I think that name suits it well..
Im slightly drained after the mile walk with the little princess on my shoulder..I dont usually carry my ''toys'' back to the house but i want to savor the joy of this one..This is the prize of my collection..Drop the bitch when i make it to the stairs of the front porch.Take a breath and wipe the sweat from my forhead..Grab her by her legs and pull violently up the stairs..Shes still out so im sure it didnt bother her much..Make my way into the kitchen..Grab some rope from the closet..Ducktape from the counter..Up the stairs.Step by step the floor boards creek..I feel her jerking slightly..Shes coming to..Its ok though its almost time..I reach the door..I get a weird feeling ever time i touch this handle, almost a feeljng of remorse comes over me..Not this time..The others may have been innocent but she deserves this..Turn the handle..Enter the room..Tie the bitch to the chair..Tape the mouth..Now i wait for her to fully regain consciousness..So i can tell her why she is about to die..Head down stairs to clean myself up first, then its time to add another doll to the collection..
She opens her eyes..''Hi princess''.. She immediatly begins to cry..I wipe a tear from her cheek..''Whats wrong?'' Dont you want to play with me and my friends''..She looks over to the table at my..''friends'' Six bodies are dressed nicely at my dinner table..Eyes and mouths sewn shut..Hands folded at there lap..Plates and silver wear in front of them..''Tonight you'll be joining us for dinner honey'' The fear in her eyes intensifies..''You remember me dont you?'' ''ANSWER ME!''.. She nods her head in terror..''good, i didnt think you thought about me anymore'' ''Im gonna take the tape off but if you scream im going to have to hurt you, understand?''..She nods again..I slowly peel the tape off '' ''shhh, stop crying''
''Why are you doing this?''
'' I told you, youd be sorry all them years ago, didnt i?'' ''This is the only way i can have you'' ''So this is what i must do''
'' for the last 8 years of my life ive been wanting to die, Lookin for a way out, I found it.I hurt others to keep me from hurting myself..The urges are too much..Ive been watching you for a while..Following you..Waiting for you''
The screams of fear take over her.. ''Looks like we need the tape again''
''Now listen to me carefully im going to untie you for a second but you see this knife?, yeah its big isnt it? So dont try anything.I want you to put this dress on. Look familar?..Its your prom dress..I told you ive been watching, i need my dolls to look pretty, especially you..Wait first let me put this on you..Its the necklace you gave back to me after we broke up..There..Perfect'' as i untie her she is shaking so bad it brings a kinda warm feeling to my heart..''Take your clothes off!''..''Put this on''
She grabs the dress, In a desprate attempt she throws the dress in my face and pushes me..Bitch always was a little hard ass.."Get back here! You'll never get away! Face it cunt youre going to die!!'' I hop to my feet, she really fucked up this time..I chase her down the stairs.Shes quick for a little girl..I reach my front door i hear her outside screaming at the top of her lungs..I must get to her before she goes too far..I see her trip up a head, i race to her..'' I got you now!'' I pick her up by her hair, raise the kitchen knife and stab the cunt in the lower back..She yelps in pain..Right before i end it she lets out a horrific scream..Loudest most disturbing scream ive heard and with my kind of work you hear a lot of them..Press the blade to her throat and rip my arm to the side..Body goes limp and drops to the ground..Its finally over..Maybe now my mind will get a break from the urges...

a mile or so down the road:

''You hear that?''
''What?''
''Sounded like a girl screaming''
''Wanna check it out?''
''No, it could of been a cyote or something''
''No it was a girl, im going you dont have to come''
'' son of a bitch!''

TO BE CONTINUED.........

sequel maybe?

wow Tommy your fucked up in the head man that was pretty detailed but that was good man

lol..Thanks bro..Just sat a started typin so ill prolly edit it, make it more detailed

pretty good man..i'm pissed you didn't finish it....you done this last time and i waited paitently for months and you never finished it :smh:

Thanks for the feed but i did finish it...Thats how it ends..There might be a sequel w/e for it but i did finish it..I wanted to leave it like this so i could write another part to it sometime

This was real good. I liked it. I think it ended a little quickly though, with the way you killed her. But I'm really looking forward to the next bit. I could picture everything in my head as I read it. Good read, keep it up.

thanks..I havent wrote the next part yet, soon,,Ill prolly write one about before this too like a prequel,lol

^ Looking forward to it.

thanks....Im oot..peace

:-O what do you have on your head??????omg!!
but it was fucking great, I could picture all that while I was reading, my lower back is now even hurting!! damn you do have a great imagination, hope you write the next part, I'll like to see that:)

Thank you...I guess im a little crazy..I would rep you but i did ten minutes ago

yeah, you are kinda of crazy........but that's cool lmao

thanks..Im crazy in a creative way

in a REALLY creative way.......that's for sure

ha the bitch diserevz it any ways, so when do u wana reanact this?.....jus play..im imprest i know youve told me to read this finaly got a chance....wow fuck rob zombie man..i bet you could make one of the best horror movies of all time yo....next steven king right here man

thanks man,lol

that was actually the most beautiful thing ive read all year:) and the most intresting. make a sequal...and did u ever finish the other??

thanks a lot..Yeah i finished the other just never posted it..Appreciate the feed

lol stephen king = horror god


F.Y.I darkness you said i was never on msn...everytime i speak to you i get ignored...stop sleeping and being high, fucker.

i just woke up from a weed nap and saw you tried gettin a hold of me..I replied but you must be off now...Sorry bro..

Kids this is the reason not to do drugs...

lol but serious Tom that was pretty nice ae, but like shadow said she dies to quickly, i wanted that part to draw out to be extra sick..

thanks man ill edit it soon, well try to..

Nice man, that was a lil sick, but yea..

thanks dude..Sick is my style

that wuz tight

thank you stranger

thank you stranger


HAHA pwned, you're a stranger shadow..

I liked this!! I have a demented mind as well tho, so I like reading shit like this. Wanna read more.
A few things tho that I'm just gonna say for your own editing purposes if you wish. Just telling you as the reader.


Six bodies are dressed nicely at my dinner table..Eyes and mouths sewn shut..Hands folded at there lap..Plates and silver wear in front of them..

This part reminded me of a movie I saw once...don't remember what, but when reading it, that scene came to mind.

''Why are you doing this?''

"Get back here! You'll never get away! Face it cunt youre going to die!!''

I see her trip up a head, i race to her..'' I got you now!''

When reading this, Eminem's song KIM came to mind. lol
Not exact quotes, but the jist...dunno, not sayin ur bitin him or anything bad at all, just sayin it came to mind when reading it.

I mean, when someone is reading your stuff, you want it to be as original as possible. Like when you see a movie that is like a movie you've already seen, it makes that movie appear as not as good as (whatever it's being compared to). You don't want your shit compared to anything, so maybe if you just made a few minor changes, it would make a huge difference.

Then again, maybe I'm the only one who feels this way, in that case, who cares. Who the hell am I? Fuck me. lol

thanks i appreciate it..I understand about the kim part,lol..Never seen a movie with dead bodies at the table with there mouth and eyes sewn tho...

Thanks heaps for the feedback

No problem...I can't remember what movie it is, but then again I don't usually remember the shitty horror movie names. lol
I've seen em all tho. haha

when the fook did i write this? Dont even remember,lol..Fuckin klonopin

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