I wrote to eminem'z 'as the world turns', the structure might be fucked up but just read!

you know im soon to be famous by just usin my anus
just to get noticed az a fool and a favorite
a emcee pissed of by life, school and a gay kid
kid started to touch me, at first i thought that it'z funny
till things really got a bit ugly i started charging him money
now dont think im some gay kid, see az soon i waz paid shit
i would run away quick wid my money and hide in the basement
in a space that waz caved in that i would stay in
for days spent thinkin if i would die and be raped dead
im evil and the silent type, can be nice, then turned mad, by the mic
frighting lives while makin an even more violent life
see shady shouldent just do thiz im sure we all have been thru shit
so lets all get abusive and use it to encourage it in music
plus a bunch of crazy things kinda like the shit that shady thinks
to let you know thats not a diss even tho if i got him pissed
i wouldent try to not exist he can diss back not like i give a shit
plus he should know if he mentions my name
i'll prolly be one more step into fame
more noticed gettin everybody reppin my game
give me a fat chick and a couple of bad kids
that will rap sins while havin a horrible british accent
now i dont where that went guess im just fillin the gap in
till i happen,to think of something to be rappin
maybe cuz i just finished a joint
now im havin trouble spitting a point
im sick of livin off coins gettin disgraced and kicked in the groin
i cant wait till im rich and make a rap based on a bitch
my mom, so she really get a taste of my shit
plus being famous maybe i'll get to face some of the pricks
and punch them in the mouth
then wid a gat take each one of them out
then bury the gun in the ground while ur like headless chickens runnin around

haha the homosexual rapper

a emcee pissed of by life, school and a gay kid
kid started to touch me, at first i thought that it'z funny
till things really got a bit ugly i started charging him money
now dont think im some gay kid, see az soon i waz paid shit

well the point iz thiz kid tried to start touching me, not exactly in private place'z, and i thought he waz just jokin, then i found he waz really gay and then he started trying to touch in wrong way'z so i told him to pay me and i'd let him touch me, but i'd take the money and leave lol

so dont think the wrong thing

hmmm?

..wat dont you understand?

why the hell would anyone write about that

to be honest i dont like it that much (dont like the topic), but ill respect the things you write about..
and you should use more rhyming and shit, and split your bars up, make it neater..

keep it up though

more rhymning? Lol and why do you say that? i thought i had lot'z of rhymning, well thx for the feed anyway'z man

LMAO...you might be the first gay rapper on this site

you know im soon to be famous by just usin my anus


kid started to touch me, at first i thought that it'z funny
till things really got a bit ugly i started charging him money

LMAO...you might be the first gay rapper on this site

well you should try reading and understanding wat im actually meaning before assuming something :(

lol i re-read your shit
its pretty comical lol

yah, i waz gonna try to get really comical but i got fucked up and just quit the verse lol

i was just playing wit you man...don't take it seriously