these are form tracks that i either aint recorded or released yet

Track called "I dont need"

Chorus
i dont need anything else in this life
but the ryhmes and mic
i dont need no money no honey
i dont need anything else in this life
but the ryhmes and the mic
thats all i need to fight

Verse
a remember back then when i couldnt ryhme nor do a bar flow in time
now i go and shine this flow is mine, with all the might i can get
im like nas, all i need is one mic i could stand above the hype
understand i love the type of rapper that dont care about money or cars
they just spit hot bars like the shits hot tar, the do it for the music
i give them respect for staying on subject when the rest got wrecked
why live then detect your straying gone direct then he test spot reflect
that hip hop is infected real talent rejected im a gallant affected
with the poison the poise-on the people this is to steeple
i keep it real on every track cry deep spit heal gone carrie that
music is my life n i know that


next on is From a Track Called "retaliate the hate" excuse the structure sometimes i just type n forget bout structure but it flows in my head lol

Verse
im just tyrna do this to make a decent life
dim trust my raw grew through take recent strife
five times i been taking the hate
my ryhmes why when making he state
im fake, i dont lie on a track n i will die on track
if thats what it takes all your hate rakes the stentch of pussy bitches
and your pussy itches with lies
i despise the cries that ma crew is wack
i could kill everyone of you pussies if a put my mind to it you would see
nothing but me n UWC,
imma state now for the later date any hater state against kez you face me
n ill rip you so fast you wont know what your race be so just stay in your place see
im a lyrical titan and im tight-on the track so dont come fighten back
ill get the chain n fucken tighten that

This is from a Track called "keep the ryhme tight" again with the structure


Verse
hot like a playstation one nation when i step up ya'll pacing to leave
racing to please beggin on your knees Chargin gone sore ease,
its a high price to lie twice so you better lie nice
i put you to sleep like the sand man as my hand land cross ya face
i gloss with pace you loss the race
i call you the dictator coz you take tha dick
take the ryhme quick coz i ryhme slick
i cant ryhme tight coz my tight ryhme might make me go to the lime-light
but am up for the crime fight thats right
complex text next vexed deemed perplexed
checked wrecked the crew
but the crew just wrecked you
pecked the pecking order your below the wrecking border
dont make me cause another disorder


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the first verse really lost me with the rhyme scheme. i couldnt tell what was supposed to go with what. but i like a lot of the lyrics.

feedback he means yo

the first verse really lost me with the rhyme scheme. i couldnt tell what was supposed to go with what. but i like a lot of the lyrics.


ol prly coz its written to a beat...IDK lol

anwae, thx for reading man :D

even though the rhyme scheme was confusing in the first verse, it was probally my first verse.. i have no clue why it just pulled me in, the other ones i wasnt feeling so well..

http://www.eminemweb.com/board/showthread.php?t=30456

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a remember back then when i couldnt ryhme nor do a bar flow in time
now i go and shine this flow is mine, with all the might i can get
im like nas, all i need is one mic i could stand above the hype
understand i love the type of rapper that dont care about money or cars
they just spit hot bars like the shits hot tar, the do it for the music
i give them respect for staying on subject when the rest got wrecked
why live then detect your straying gone direct then he test spot reflect
that hip hop is infected real talent rejected im a gallant affected
with the poison the poise-on the people this is to steeple
i keep it real on every track
cry deep spit heal gone carrie that
music is my life n i know that


i bolded the main ryhmes, there other smaller ones there just to connect it

and thx man, ill check you stuff :D