I don’t need any money, when I have my gold mine of rhymes
I aint got to resort to armed robbery or brag about crimes
All I need is a pencil or a pen and a pad and a rubber
My day job? I make a living as a public toilet scrubber
But I don’t care, I love rapping but I don’t want to sell crack
To sell records I don’t wanna take shots and die on my back
I’m safely at home, not in the streets, I’m just a guy with a mic
With no thug image, wanna kill me? Go ahead, I won’t strike
But neither will you, you’re all talk yapping about actions
You’re as hood as a tractor, it aint adding up like subtractions
You don’t wanna approach me, I’m hungry like its early days
About to spit flames like kids messing with aerosol sprays
I sleep rap, drink schnapps and eat chicken chilli wraps
You caused the relapse of rap, I’m hitting you silly ‘til you collapse
Sirius rids Gang Green of its curse like finding a full purse
Just when you thought we were the worst my verse drops to reimburse
Renew the Krazy-ness, restart Abusing like peadophiles on parole
How can we be losing when I have the game console’s control?

Feed bastards

Krazed Abused Lyrics is comin' back, ya'll...

Feeeeeed?

i didnt like passion for rap
cuz i dont have a passion for crap

Any real feedback?

its str8
i think you need shorter bars though

I like the topic, same shit I'm on right now to, Hell, I don't even listen to the radio anymore. Good shit, work on getting some inner rhymes in your lines, just cuz your lines are so long. That would be easyer than shortening them, cuz in audio it don't matter how long or short your rhymes actually are, its how you make them flow. Keep working on it, an leave reep.
Peace

hellion, your some what right with the bar length with audio
but if its long bars without inner rhyme its no good.

but keep it up.

I don’t need any money, when I have my gold mine of rhymes
I aint got to resort to armed robbery or brag about crimes

change to

"Who needs money" it flows better in my opinion.


All I need is a pencil or a pen and a pad and a rubber
My day job? I make a living as a public toilet scrubber

wack

But I don’t care, I love rapping but I don’t want to sell crack
To sell records I don’t wanna take shots and die on my back

take out "i love rapping" u sound 2 white. lol
2nd line aight

I’m safely at home, not in the streets, I’m just a guy with a mic
With no thug image, wanna kill me? Go ahead, I won’t strike

wack, try to come harder

But neither will you, you’re all talk yapping about actions
You’re as hood as a tractor, it aint adding up like subtractions

1st line aight, 2nd line wack

You don’t wanna approach me, I’m hungry like its early days
About to spit flames like kids messing with aerosol sprays

nice, 2nd line is dope

I sleep rap, drink schnapps and eat chicken chilli wraps
You caused the relapse of rap, I’m hitting you silly ‘til you collapse

1st line is wack, U sound 2 white. lol
2nd line aight

Sirius rids Gang Green of its curse like finding a full purse
Just when you thought we were the worst my verse drops to reimburse

wack

Renew the Krazy-ness, restart Abusing like peadophiles on parole
How can we be losing when I have the game console’s control?

2nd line coud have been worded better, 1st line wack.

Keep practicing. Elevate.

Thank you Duece Bigalow. Come and clean my fish tank some time. I would rep you if I could, but I need to spread it before I can.

take out "i love rapping" u sound 2 white. lol


by far the most retarded thing i have EVER read

I am white, so there's no way I can be too white.

i thought it was creative yo...keep on dropin like this mahn an it will be the take over

I meant "sound" 2 white. It sounds like sumthin a white dude rappin would say "I love rappin". U can be a white rapper, an not sound like a white dude. I mean u don't gotta say "nigga" and shit, but don't sound corny. lol

*sigh* ...you are retarded...what is wrong with saying i love rapping....people who say shit like "oh i kick theze rhymes fo sheezy on tha real tip cuz am gangsta!!! beyatch" ...are the people who sound fake,phoney,pathetic,useless and wack....


there is nothing wrong with saying i love rap....i have heard many black people saying it...it didn't make them "sound white".... you're either a hardcore racist or just plain stupid...

there is nothing wrong with declaring your love for something

I think it sounds wack. Thats my opinion. IF the whole piece was about how u love rappin, the maybe, but the way SB wrote it, or the context used, I wasn't feelin it. Thats my opinion.

I'd rather sound so white it hurts than be a wigger.

White tryin to act like black is like a fat bitch talkin bout losin weight...