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Xem
03-03-2007, 04:09 PM
It's a little erratic but i like it and i wrote it along time ago:
[Verse 1]
once upon a time there was a kid named mark
lived somewhere in the city, never close to a park
a weird-ass kid who can't really think straight
he talked to some hot bitch and thought it was a mate
one day he was walking to school
sittin' in a classroom looking cool
then this kid said:"What's the quadratic formula dude?"
"thats an easy one, all you need is some wrenches and tools"
"Dude, who the fuck are you? are you a dumbass?"
"No, why won't you shut the fuck up before I beat you fast"
the other kid's name was Morco and he's dumb too
but he thinks Mark's ass should be in the "Retarded Crew"
now, they just arguing in class
but the teacher said: "Why won't you take it outside with a pass?"
then they got pressured up and said "fuck you teacher"
now they want to heat her, beat her like her baby sita
her baby sister was in a world of pain
she was cooking food last time n accidently burned her self with flames
class is done and the teacher wanted to talk those boys
she said:"I'll kill yo ass like the people in the movie Troy"
they didn't give a fuck, they wanted to fight
Morco started the fight with a strike
and said:"I'm going to kill you, you dumb bread"
and then Mark said:"Bizitch, I'm going to knock ya head"
"haha, you can't say bitch right, Morco said
BAM! right at Mark's head and that was the teacher's punch
now she's berserk like she had no lunch
"Morco's next and this isn't funny"
"please,please,please, don't hurt me I'll be your sonny"
"fuck no, you made fun of my baby now i need to hurt you
"so can i go ahead and flirt you?"
"nah, i'll just grab my stick and ill murk you
2 hours later, Morco and Mark was getting tortured
they both sat in their seats and felt they were cursed
and found out their teacher sniffing coke out of her purse
so they thought a plan to escape out
but they couldn't think anything but they were stout
after the thinking they were going to beat their teacher
give a her a fist at the face and teach her
that's right, teach her a lesson of child abuse
won their victory but they left school because she puked
now they happy and ready to chill at home
suddenly, Mark found out Morco jumped on him at his zone
Morco said:"I love another hot guy like you and I'm gay"
then Mark said:"get the fuck away"
"away where?let me put my dick in ya butt"
"you stupid bizitch, I'mma kill you, you mutt"
he punched him and grabbed his nuts
and grabbed a twig and gave him a cut
that's all ladies and gentlements
love it? read it again
hate it? suck my fucking dick you fucking bitch, the end

OvaDose
03-03-2007, 05:04 PM
i read like half of it, damn that was whack...

Boston
03-03-2007, 05:10 PM
^^^

lol, try posting some of your newer shit.

JeFF
03-03-2007, 06:03 PM
hopefully its better than that was

.......
03-04-2007, 07:49 PM
Ya hopefully your new shit is better.

Xem
03-05-2007, 06:53 PM
I really did mess around on this 1, just try to think of somethign weird and not normal, guess it not ur type of daily stuff

OPIV
03-06-2007, 01:24 PM
try to mix up yur rhymes, don't make yur rhymes so predictable like doctor Suess an shit cuz thats what it sounds like.

MCD
03-08-2007, 05:38 AM
yeah...didnt feel this at all.