Passion

hook/chorus sampled from blackalicious






(hook/chorus)

Passion
The will to win, the spark within
Passion
The strength within the hearts of men
Passion
The drive to press, to strive for best, to rise
You've just arrived the quest is driven through
Passion
To play through pain and love the game
Passion
To break the chain and blaze the flame
Passion
The fight for rights to love your life, to rise
You've just arrived the quest is driven through
Passion


(Verse 1 - 1124)

Eleven 24 filled with passion, I’m still surpassing
Your expectations, now just feel the passing
Words turn into history, cause this to me
Is more than just rapping, aint no mystery
how I became this good, receive fame I should
and if I could take over the game I would
There’s no need for money, just give me the mic
Living free despite the hype of envy and spite
Rap’s an addiction that’s fact not fiction
I flow more often than the taps in your kitchen
Spitting for life no matter If its written or typed
Hitting the mic precise, always getting it right
My lines supply pain to my brain causing migraines
Apply flames to defy lames but still nothing I gain
Not one dash of respect or drip of praise
Sick spits I blaze rip shit for days till I get my way
Don’t do it for the money don’t do it for the fame
I do it for me and my love for this game



(hook/chorus)

Passion
The will to win, the spark within
Passion
The strength within the hearts of men
Passion
The drive to press, to strive for best, to rise
You've just arrived the quest is driven through
Passion
To play through pain and love the game
Passion
To break the chain and blaze the flame
Passion
The fight for rights to love your life, to rise
You've just arrived the quest is driven through
Passion


(verse 2 ~358~)

358, spittin dez bright flames like a flamethrowa’
as we rhyme krazed wit passion ‘till game’s ova’
Lead my game unlike Bush… Keep yer brains, soulja’
Peace I came not fo tho… Like photo I watch wars make mayne colda’
White boy from Finland showin ya’ll I’m true to this
Befo this game wasn’t even B-E-G- -N, so I put U to it
That’s how I got lead in my pen just like air in lungs,
‘coz that’s how I’m heatin myself tho I’m barely in guns
But boy’s a rebel now, can’t settle down, the mic’s callin
I feel hip-hop so deep in my head when the rhymes fall in
Rap’s like a poker match, I ain’t bluffin, I put my life all in
Play my cards right now, so I don’t regret five in the morning
Fuck the fame, ‘coz tomorrow all yer previous life is history
Come here now, look at the worst shit you ever did to me
Ignorance, stupid, ‘coz you thought I’d never gid to be
here, I’m loyal to the game ‘till I die, can you picture me?
This is strictly for passion, I ain’t livin “five cars, biiig house”
And this fo’ a lesson to ya’ll… Homie, nine bars, peace out


(hook/chorus)
Passion
The will to win, the spark within
Passion
The strength within the hearts of men
Passion
The drive to press, to strive for best, to rise
You've just arrived the quest is driven through
Passion
To play through pain and love the game
Passion
To break the chain and blaze the flame
Passion
The fight for rights to love your life, to rise
You've just arrived the quest is driven through
Passion

Uppin' for feed

This site is scary... All dark and quiet...

Passion

hook/chorus sampled from blackalicious






(hook/chorus)

Passion
The will to win, the spark within
Passion
The strength within the hearts of men
Passion
The drive to press, to strive for best, to rise
You've just arrived the quest is driven through
Passion
To play through pain and love the game
Passion
To break the chain and blaze the flame
Passion
The fight for rights to love your life, to rise
You've just arrived the quest is driven through
Passion


(Verse 1 - 1124)

Eleven 24 filled with passion, I’m still surpassing
Your expectations, now just feel the passing
Words turn into history, cause this to me
Is more than just rapping, aint no mystery
how I became this good, receive fame I should
and if I could take over the game I would
There’s no need for money, just give me the mic
Living free despite the hype of envy and spite
Rap’s an addiction that’s fact not fiction
I flow more often than the taps in your kitchen
Spitting for life no matter If its written or typed
Hitting the mic precise, always getting it right
My lines supply pain to my brain causing migraines
Apply flames to defy lames but still nothing I gain
Not one dash of respect or drip of praise
Sick spits I blaze rip shit for days till I get my way
Don’t do it for the money don’t do it for the fame
I do it for me and my love for this game



(hook/chorus)

Passion
The will to win, the spark within
Passion
The strength within the hearts of men
Passion
The drive to press, to strive for best, to rise
You've just arrived the quest is driven through
Passion
To play through pain and love the game
Passion
To break the chain and blaze the flame
Passion
The fight for rights to love your life, to rise
You've just arrived the quest is driven through
Passion


(verse 2 ~358~)

358, spittin dez bright flames like a flamethrowa’
as we rhyme krazed wit passion ‘till game’s ova’
Lead my game unlike Bush… Keep yer brains, soulja’
Peace I came not fo tho… Like photo I watch wars make mayne colda’
White boy from Finland showin ya’ll I’m true to this
Befo this game wasn’t even B-E-G- -N, so I put U to it
That’s how I got lead in my pen just like air in lungs,
‘coz that’s how I’m heatin myself tho I’m barely in guns
But boy’s a rebel now, can’t settle down, the mic’s callin
I feel hip-hop so deep in my head when the rhymes fall in
Rap’s like a poker match, I ain’t bluffin, I put my life all in
Play my cards right now, so I don’t regret five in the morning
Fuck the fame, ‘coz tomorrow all yer previous life is history
Come here now, look at the worst shit you ever did to me
Ignorance, stupid, ‘coz you thought I’d never gid to be
here, I’m loyal to the game ‘till I die, can you picture me?
This is strictly for passion, I ain’t livin “five cars, biiig house”
And this fo’ a lesson to ya’ll… Homie, nine bars, peace out


(hook/chorus)
Passion
The will to win, the spark within
Passion
The strength within the hearts of men
Passion
The drive to press, to strive for best, to rise
You've just arrived the quest is driven through
Passion
To play through pain and love the game
Passion
To break the chain and blaze the flame
Passion
The fight for rights to love your life, to rise
You've just arrived the quest is driven through
Passion

Eleven 24..

The only problem i had with your verse was the mid sentences, try and finish a sentence during that line instead of carrying it over to the next line. it's ok occcasionally but you did it to much

Words turn into history, cause this to me
Is more than just rapping, aint no mystery
how I became this good, receive fame I should

See what i mean?^

Everything else was right on the money, sick multies...


~358~


Only thing i liked about your verse was the last bar..

Everything else just seemed whack and pretty much boring, you wern't getting a message across

thats actually a poetic skill taking sentences into the next line

and smh@this site and its pathetic low activity ....

^Word

Thnx For Feed, OvaDose, Appreciated... *Reps*

Passion

hook/chorus sampled from blackalicious






(hook/chorus)

Passion
The will to win, the spark within
Passion
The strength within the hearts of men
Passion
The drive to press, to strive for best, to rise
You've just arrived the quest is driven through
Passion
To play through pain and love the game
Passion
To break the chain and blaze the flame
Passion
The fight for rights to love your life, to rise
You've just arrived the quest is driven through
Passion


(Verse 1 - 1124)

Eleven 24 filled with passion, I’m still surpassing
Your expectations, now just feel the passing
Words turn into history, cause this to me
Is more than just rapping, aint no mystery
how I became this good, receive fame I should
and if I could take over the game I would
There’s no need for money, just give me the mic
Living free despite the hype of envy and spite
Rap’s an addiction that’s fact not fiction
I flow more often than the taps in your kitchen
Spitting for life no matter If its written or typed
Hitting the mic precise, always getting it right
My lines supply pain to my brain causing migraines
Apply flames to defy lames but still nothing I gain
Not one dash of respect or drip of praise
Sick spits I blaze rip shit for days till I get my way
Don’t do it for the money don’t do it for the fame
I do it for me and my love for this game



(hook/chorus)

Passion
The will to win, the spark within
Passion
The strength within the hearts of men
Passion
The drive to press, to strive for best, to rise
You've just arrived the quest is driven through
Passion
To play through pain and love the game
Passion
To break the chain and blaze the flame
Passion
The fight for rights to love your life, to rise
You've just arrived the quest is driven through
Passion


(verse 2 ~358~)

358, spittin dez bright flames like a flamethrowa’
as we rhyme krazed wit passion ‘till game’s ova’
Lead my game unlike Bush… Keep yer brains, soulja’
Peace I came not fo tho… Like photo I watch wars make mayne colda’
White boy from Finland showin ya’ll I’m true to this
Befo this game wasn’t even B-E-G- -N, so I put U to it
That’s how I got lead in my pen just like air in lungs,
‘coz that’s how I’m heatin myself tho I’m barely in guns
But boy’s a rebel now, can’t settle down, the mic’s callin
I feel hip-hop so deep in my head when the rhymes fall in
Rap’s like a poker match, I ain’t bluffin, I put my life all in
Play my cards right now, so I don’t regret five in the morning
Fuck the fame, ‘coz tomorrow all yer previous life is history
Come here now, look at the worst shit you ever did to me
Ignorance, stupid, ‘coz you thought I’d never gid to be
here, I’m loyal to the game ‘till I die, can you picture me?
This is strictly for passion, I ain’t livin “five cars, biiig house”
And this fo’ a lesson to ya’ll… Homie, nine bars, peace out


(hook/chorus)
Passion
The will to win, the spark within
Passion
The strength within the hearts of men
Passion
The drive to press, to strive for best, to rise
You've just arrived the quest is driven through
Passion
To play through pain and love the game
Passion
To break the chain and blaze the flame
Passion
The fight for rights to love your life, to rise
You've just arrived the quest is driven through
Passion


eleven24, i liked the way you was doing inner rhyme (seemed to me) and liked the kitchen metaphor, ive seen better from you though


now for ~358~, i know im being picky, but the way you typed it kinda irritated me lol, but

Befo this game wasn’t even B-E-G- -N, so I put U to it - i found that pretty tight, i also think you gota be more clear, more detail. on some similies/multies.

but yeah. keep it up guys

Eleven simply killed it on this song.

The only problem i had with your verse was the mid sentences, try and finish a sentence during that line instead of carrying it over to the next line. it's ok occcasionally but you did it to much

Words turn into history, cause this to me
Is more than just rapping, aint no mystery
how I became this good, receive fame I should

See what i mean?^

Everything else was right on the money, sick multies...

OMG, you're stupid. If you can join the lines on to eachother, that means that you're not using irrelevant multies, and you're using the same rhyme scheme to explain something, and that takes skill. Even if he isn't using the same rhyme scheme, he's made it into a story, by joining it all up, instead of saying random things, that again takes skill.

..............

Anyway, Eleven 24, I liked your verse, you've elevated a lot. The multies were nice, but that tap punch, WTF? That's played as fuck. That's the only flaw I seen in your verse.

Words turn into history, cause this to me
Is more than just rapping, aint no mystery

I liked this part the best.

Your writing style is very poetic and stuffzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. I like it.

3587698498, or whatever your name is, I forgot - you could elevate a lot. It wasn't terrible, and it had some complexity, but in terms of actually saying something, it wasn't too good. English isn't your first language though, so with taking that into consideration, this wasn't too bad. But Eleven 24 outshined you on this, sry m8.

OMG, you're stupid. If you can join the lines on to eachother, that means that you're not using irrelevant multies, and you're using the same rhyme scheme to explain something, and that takes skill. Even if he isn't using the same rhyme scheme, he's made it into a story, by joining it all up, instead of saying random things, that again takes skill.

all i was saying was he used it to much, dude grow up, it's just my opinion..

If you listen to Tech N9ne he does that A LOT of the time.

but that tap punch, WTF? That's played as fuck. That's the only flaw I seen in your verse.
.

yeah i know...it sucked ass

1st off, make up ur own chorus, cuz if u sample blackilicious doing the chorus, it ain't gon match up wid yur vocals cuz they have way dif vocal styles than u. Just my opinion.




(hook/chorus)

Passion
The will to win, the spark within
Passion
The strength within the hearts of men
Passion
The drive to press, to strive for best, to rise
You've just arrived the quest is driven through
Passion
To play through pain and love the game
Passion
To break the chain and blaze the flame
Passion
The fight for rights to love your life, to rise
You've just arrived the quest is driven through
Passion


(Verse 1 - 1124)

Eleven 24 filled with passion, I’m still surpassing
Your expectations, now just feel the passing

don't put yur name, to start the verse. it sounds wack. yur names aight but it don't really fit in with the line. take it out cuz it flows better. Try to be more clever about droppin yur name in yur raps. Besides that it was aight.


Words turn into history, cause this to me
Is more than just rapping, aint no mystery

aight, it flows, but not too clever, vocab too simple

how I became this good, receive fame I should
and if I could take over the game I would

flows good, but nothin stands out

There’s no need for money, just give me the mic
Living free despite the hype of envy and spite

2nd line good, 1st line weak

Rap’s an addiction that’s fact not fiction
I flow more often than the taps in your kitchen

wack

Spitting for life no matter If its written or typed
Hitting the mic precise, always getting it right

1st line good, 1st part of 2nd line good, last part wack "always gettin it right" is wack

My lines supply pain to my brain causing migraines
Apply flames to defy lames but still nothing I gain

good

Not one dash of respect or drip of praise
Sick spits I blaze rip shit for days till I get my way

good

Don’t do it for the money don’t do it for the fame
I do it for me and my love for this game

sorta corny, but aight

(hook/chorus)

Passion
The will to win, the spark within
Passion
The strength within the hearts of men
Passion
The drive to press, to strive for best, to rise
You've just arrived the quest is driven through
Passion
To play through pain and love the game
Passion
To break the chain and blaze the flame
Passion
The fight for rights to love your life, to rise
You've just arrived the quest is driven through
Passion


(verse 2 ~358~)

358, spittin dez bright flames like a flamethrowa’
as we rhyme krazed wit passion ‘till game’s ova’

take out ya name, read what I said about 11's opener. good except change second line "till tha game's ova".

Lead my game unlike Bush… Keep yer brains, soulja’
Peace I came not fo tho… Like photo I watch wars make mayne colda’

wack, too abstract.

White boy from Finland showin ya’ll I’m true to this
Befo this game wasn’t even B-E-G- -N, so I put U to it

this an it don't rhyme, an it was wack

That’s how I got lead in my pen just like air in lungs,
‘coz that’s how I’m heatin myself tho I’m barely in guns

"barely in guns" WTF. wack

But boy’s a rebel now, can’t settle down, the mic’s callin
I feel hip-hop so deep in my head when the rhymes fall in

aight

Rap’s like a poker match, I ain’t bluffin, I put my life all in
Play my cards right now, so I don’t regret five in the morning

decent

Fuck the fame, ‘coz tomorrow all yer previous life is history
Come here now, look at the worst shit you ever did to me

wack

Ignorance, stupid, ‘coz you thought I’d never gid to be
here, I’m loyal to the game ‘till I die, can you picture me?

wack

This is strictly for passion, I ain’t livin “five cars, biiig house”
And this fo’ a lesson to ya’ll… Homie, nine bars, peace out

wack. Don't mention u did 9 bars cuz u sposed to do 16 bars. lol

I left feed. So leave rep if u can. Keep practicing. Elevate.

lol @ your feed...and incase you didn't notice it's a text piece...there is no vocals.....smh....

no vocals.......wtf? Dude, u wrote it to the beat, I'm assuming. Fuck remixes, there fuckin wack. WHy remix a song and not do it better than Blackalicious, cuz yur shit wasn't even close. U basically took a good song and made a weaker version of it. WTF?

no i never wrote it to the beat...i just liked the hook/topic so wrote my own version of it...i have no intentions of making this an audio piece...

1st off, make up ur own chorus, cuz if u sample blackilicious doing the chorus, it ain't gon match up wid yur vocals cuz they have way dif vocal styles than u. Just my opinion.

Because when mainstream/underground rappers rap they all of a sudden get the same style for the one song?? Lol

lol^^^^^