* = multies

im tryna break writers block ppl, so yeah.. all feed would be good (good or bad)

friends or foe?/
you gotta pick how you roll/
choose your enemies wisely, but you gotta control/
your *actions*-, so people wont get the *satisfaction*/
of your initial *reaction* before you break down like *fractions*/
to much pressure, wait until the asystole goes *flat line*/
if i dont pull through, this could very well be my *last rhyme*/
but i'll never stop, ima *strive to my inspiration*/
whatever it takes, ill even *dive through my perspiration*/
to influence the *nation* with such a *sensation*/
that'll even get an artificial heart to start *racing*/
but fuck it im done, you already know that i quit/
my last spit, burying the rest of my problems ina pit/

fractions;actions;satisfaction;reaction = not multies

nation;sensation;racing = not multies

these are just words that rhyme^^

e.g

touch my face
i love your place


not multies..just single words that rhyme....


flat and last dont really rhyme so that cancel outs that "multie"(maybe i pronounce it differently tho)



but i'll never stop, ima *strive to my inspiration*/
whatever it takes, ill even *dive through my perspiration*

that is a multie but seemed kind of forced on first look^^....i'm actually quite feeling it now tho..



because you had words rhyming quite a bit(weither they were multies or not) that helped the flow so your flow was fine...


i can't remember how good you were so i can't tell if you're worse or not..therefore i can't say if you have broken your block but keep at it anyway man, goodluck with it,

yeah thanks.
i only called those multies because i think Cullison, not sure though, said multies are also rhyming multi-syllable words. but yeah thanks for your feed.
i got some other shit thats mine right below this.

(just look fro the ones that i start the topic)


and flat/last slant rhyme basically

multie syllable words? lmao^

like.. more than a one syllable word ;o

better than all my shit. had a pretty nice flow

like.. more than a one syllable word ;o

just sounded stupid lol

lol iight thanks tho.

stop tryin so hard to point out tha multies. Just spit ya rhyme, an if it has multies, than cool, if not, who gives a fuck.

LMFAO coming from you^^^

hes banned^^...fuck em

flow was good, you had a nice range of vocab, but the multis if you were confused by sylybiles i think the person who tried to tell you about it explained wrong he was probly referen to breaking down a bigger word into a multi

ill example a simple one

torment = tor-ment

so ryhme with tor and ment

for-sent - tor ment

thats maybe what he was tryna explain im not sure lol it is sorta a multi

anywae wae nice stuff keep it up :D