Fuck You

Reality and dreams can’t be compared to each other,
‘coz reality is wrong, dreams are for real, brother
Rest in peace ‘Pac who came up with that first
And fuck reality, ‘coz wakin back up is what hurts


great way to open it i liked the reference to pac, that last line i quote there was sick worded well and had quite a lot of emotion in it



And worse is not to dream when world still turns
When sun don’t shine, I hope my words still burn
in flames of wisdom that I tryna carry on in my lyrics
If it ain’t demon or angel it gotta be rebel in my spirit
Or whatever you wanna call it when I break the rules
Every man’s different and I don’t escape the truth
I rather serve it like I do just in my own way
Old days gone, cold days ahead of my route, mayne…



i liked all of this except the end i just hate eople on the net using the word "mayne" lol..but yeah the part about your lyrics burning in a flame of wisdom was sick. great imagery. the line "Every man’s different and I don’t escape the truth" was pretty nice too, liked the way it was worded


overall this wasn't amazing with the "skills" of poetry but it was drowned in emotion and had a lot of truth in it which in the end is a skill on its own



pretty nice drop, could tell it came from the heart, keep writing

-peace

Thnx For The Feed And Yeah, It Came From The Heart

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i thought the shit was ill mahn keep up the good work

Thnx for feed, man
I'd rep both of you, but I can't right now, sry lol

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pretty good. i liked the first 4 lines most. could tell it was from deep down

word, thnx *reps*

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I'd rep both of you, but I can't right now, sry lol



:@ lol

lol

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