Did a track wit my buddy Savior, and contributed a single verse.

1:
I got most emotions at the push of a button,
I activate it, demonstrate wit, and nothin,
can seem to bother me, but I strongly,
I grab cans, pop, and slam em, I'm damnin,

everything that gets close to me,
most of me, is tied down by controversey,
wanna curse me, It's been done before,
I end most my nights, screaming on the floor,

I can't seem to get it all right,
And I spend most my life,
fighting with forces that held me back,
Keepin a steady vision while I'm battlin back,

battlin wack, emcees that tempt me,
Make an attempt please, my brain is screamin,
I seek release from these demons,
I'm bleedin, and you're cloggin my breathin...

Feedback is appreciated.

I saw a multie or two but I dont no how to explain it it needs more substance like more detail to each line