well.. i've been working on my multies lately, and been fooling around, so this is my first attempt basically at a piece using multies and such, tell me what you think..

(oh youll also find some assonance)

not my best work, just practing at multies*****

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"To The Top"

*a-chiev-ing* your goals is something for yourself to *a-ccomp-lish*/
*be-liev-ing* is another thing, so just follow n' *not-wish*/
your trying so hard to avoid being another *pea-in-the-pod*/
so you have to be on top at the highest point to *see-all-the-odds*/
choose your friends closely and keep the enemies *in-your-eyes*/
start all the beef you want, you just got to *real-ize*/
this can turn into war, so chose the *right-side*/
people can get hurt but look on the *bright-side*/
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ahh im to lazy to right more now, but next time i right an actual verse ill use multies and you can tell me more, but is that a good start for using multies?

yeah a lot of forced multies in their but good start! keep at it yo..

yeah they are forced, agreed.
good looks tho.

*a-chiev-ing* your goals is something for yourself to *a-ccomp-lish*/
*be-liev-ing* is another thing, so just follow n' *not-wish*/

no multies in this bar


your trying so hard to avoid being another *pea-in-the-pod*/
so you have to be on top at the highest point to *see-all-the-odds*/

no mulites, they gotta be in the same word, or gotta be right next to each other

choose your friends closely and keep the enemies *in-your-eyes*/
start all the beef you want, you just got to *real-ize*/

no multies, if u spelt it in-ya-eyes, it woulda worked
like re-a-lize, an in-ya-eyes are multies.

this can turn into war, so chose the *right-side*/
people can get hurt but look on the *bright-side*/

no multies, u rymed side twice. multis meanin mulitple syllable. 2 or more.
I left feed, so leave rep if u can. Keep practicing. Elevate.

lol um.. every word doesnt have to rhyme i thought, but thanks for the feed...
ill find your shit and help.

feed on this wud be great
http://www.eminemweb.com/board/showthread.php?t=30067

if they ain't next to each other than its inner rhymin, not mulites. mulites are next to each other in the same words.

*sigh* ^^^^

Don't listen to matix, he is incorrect, those are multies...

whatever, I'm goin by the definition I saw on that website. if only 1 syllable rhymes and then the next word doesn't then the flow is disrupted.
Ex. u -a -bitch
who -tha -snitch thats a multie

suck- my -dick not a mulite, cuz it don't flow perfectly, this is inner rhymin
fuck- u- quick

isnt a multie is just rhyming with multiple syllable words? out of respect, it is i thought. i saw it on flocabulary to.

yah but the words next to each other.

oh nahh

the 'phrase' words got to rhyme

not multiple syllable words, just rhyming multiple syllables

ciggarette
-
big a threat
-
figure yet
-
nigga wet
-
wigga sweat


=multies


get it??

most consider "fuse or a lighter", "true i'm a fighter" to be multies aswell...ok the middle two syllables don't match "or a" & "im a" ...but that don't really matter

smh..Dumbass

Me!?!?!?!^^^^ :(

nahh mayne..Matix

nice drop.
i like that you kept it about somethin with substance.
multiples were aight. no doubt, good practice
"pee in the pod" was kinda wack. no offence.

multiples dont have to rhyme every syllable to be multiple.
if it does its jus a "perfect" multiple. Yours are regular.
same thing different degrees of complexity.

peace

thanks for all the feedback, im going to keep working at it. :]