A masochist
bringing the world an ass to kiss
along with a wond to perform these fuckin magic tricks
Grasp my fist, cuz half these kids dont know what rappin is
Thats why i use your mom when i need to fucking slap a bitch
I'm so fucking crazy, you think 'fiberawptic' is an adjective
wrappin gifts for christmas cuz i shop at the last minute
Put them under ya tree, walk away like the laughin grinch
You Open em' up, a bomb explodes like my ass on too much laxitives
See, im a serial killer who locks up his own viticims
Make them commit suicide, so i dont have to go to prison
In fact, i wanna die to see if god exists
Thats why if you see my wriste, it has a lot of slits

Yah it waz good, seemed like lil eminem thing, try to make a piece all like thiz and it would be sick (in my oppinion)

i like it too...but i'd havet o hear how you'd flip this in a live cipher, or audio to get what your style is...

lol this would be decent for a freestyle... enough said..

Ok, i added on to it! Please feed!

ur gettin better. Good flow. I like the ending and the into was dope. Take this part out, i wasn't feelin it, or rewrite it.

wrappin gifts for christmas cuz i shop at the last minute
Put them under ya tree, walk away like the laughin grinch
You Open em' up, a bomb explodes like my ass on too much laxitives

I left feed, so leave rep if u can. Keep practicing. Elevate.

it wasnt bad..Bitin ems style a bit?

^ its not his style.............anymore
But yes, i am copying his old style but its ok since im not trying to become a professional emcee.

would be better for you if you developed your own tho...ask people on this site...for the majority of us its just a hobby but we still have our own styles..