Just uploaded it, Any feedback is appreciated.

www.soundclick.com/dynastyproductionz

the melody was dope, but the drums sounded wack. the bass drum sounded okay, but the snare was wack. It stands out too much and doesn't flow with the beat. try samplin some live drum samples and then adjust the pitch so its in key wid the melody. I left feed, so leave rep if u can. Keep practicing. Elevate.

Oh boy, I wish it was that easy. Due to the poor equipment used to make these beats in my music tech. class, I cannot sample shit since my school is so damn fucking poor and cannot afford the full version of reason. Elevation will come no matter what, but quality will remain at a disadvantage for all listeners. If I could, I would be sampling the fuck out of anything I could get my hands on, however, that happens to not be the case. Thank you for your feed, and yes the snare was whack, but I do it the welfare way and make my snares my claps, hahaha. And for future notice please dont ask me to rep anyone for feed. I appreciate every word of feedback I get, and I also try to give back as much feed as I get in return to anyone on this site.

where r u from?

holdin' down boston baby ;]
Mattapan (Murdapan) / Roslindale ahh

but yo good shit man, ill see if i can get you the key for a full version