my weapon iz ma brain in thiz game to flame wid action'z
cuz of wat you say nothing'll be the same wid my insane reaction'z
ur the fag'z dissin gay'z cuz it'z all like u fall for gay'z attraction'z
plus the way'z you actin, but i'ma be eliminating you real fag'z to fraction'z
think ur all good cuz ur all brother'z, the same, who just lag fan satisfaction'z
and in day'z i still keep askin, why no labal'z az you said ur makin rap beef'z smashin
my rhymning'z hell that shock'z you in ur head and loud like siren bell'z
im like shotgun'z, like a mic wid shell'z beef wid me ya might az well fight ya selve'z
cuz it'z suicide and by the time i fully form ya couldent bite if ya idol fell
so dont get excited well if you get any label'z i highly doubt ya title sell'z
and if it sell'z i'll bust you crooked az hell az if you werent born wid spinal cell'z

nice flow, some decent wordplay, but some bars were weaker than others. But you do understnad how to use multiple syllables...very simalar to my old stuff...your doing well for your age...P.E.A.C.E.

Thx for the feed man


Fuck, i realized i screwed up the title of the thread

your doing well for your age...P.E.A.C.E.


You kidding?

I'm the same age as him and lyrically slaughter him, cullisions a year younger and would murder him in a battle, i could name at least 5 textcee's on this site that could rip him to shreads and are the same age as him....

but you and them are above average for your age^^..where as this guy is average..this is what you expect from someone his age ..what you guys spit is above the expectations

Lmao..

yeah, it was alright. some parts werent so great but others were good. dont listen to that guy who's like, yeah, its like my older stuff. as if he's far beyond everything. in fact he doesn't even have to rap anymore he just thinks perfect flow and everyone just feels it.

youre alright. maybe no. #32 of all time. maybe