Yo bitch im talkin to you! and other fucker'z im droppin them too!
im sick of all of you! not gettin my point now im fuckin stopping the fued!
you dont know wat'z botherin dude! my father? i dun care! if my father'z dead coo!
i dun know how to go on! shit just seem'z flow wrong!
nothin matter'z when i blow shot'z! buttin im tryin to stop shit i put up wid for so long!
and dont expect me by wat i said to be quitting soon!
till you hear me in ur head and u lay dead in ur living room!
all i just want iz you! hear me! and get my message thru! clearly!
bout ur shit that nearly steered me to suicide i dont mean for you to fear me!
i have so just had enough! already my early child hood waz haz been rough!
and it'z drove me mad enough! i cant take it and i just wanna bash these fuck'z!
Ok, i dont give fuck wat people think of me but listen up
bother me im givin a fuck and i just wont be caught spittin stuff!
that my my after hurt after i beat the shit out of you critict fuck'z!

i just felt like posting wat i've writ so far

Feed??

wow....tht is freat job...i mean good one dude....
keep it up..i liked it really!!

i don care wht the fuck ppl gon say...
wanted ya to know i liked ya way!!

Aight, thx, any more feed?

Good shit. Strong emotion. Good flow. Probably had the best flow compared to some of yur other shit. The vocab was kinda weak, not too complex, but it had style, and u stayed on topic.

you remind alot of myself about a year ago...only thing i can say is try to work on your wordplay and it'sll be straight...good job.