bust this rhyme, don't give a fuck what u think-bout-it,
my styles like quicksand, I'll sink-yur-shit, u can fuckin bank-on-it,

I'll break-ur-shit, use microphones like wreck-in-balls, break-in-through-brick-walls,
I'm bust flows like "Clerks", leave u dead like prostitutes in pub-lic-bathroom- stalls,

My crews larger than tha Verizon Wireless network,
infinite is my net worth, I'm like a Tazmanian Devil, goin bizerk,

spin-nin like tor-na-does, u ain't in Kan-sas no more, u fuckin Candy- ass bitch,
when u start spit-tin, they throw to-ma-toes, ur like a pig, squeelin to the cops, cuz yur a snitch,

bea-tin -u-is-a -cinch, u ain't neva gonna see no action, cuz yur ri-din-tha- bench,
Watchin me, I'm the MVP, more valuable than solid gold, diamond studded jewelry, bitch,

I throw harder pitches, than the MLB, strike u out with 2 strikes,
cuz I'm payin off the umpire, emperor of tha rap empire, illuminate the night like street lights,

Givin chicks love bites, I'm scratchin harder than Deejays wid head lice,
ur blind like mice, I'll crush yur rhymes, like I put yur fuckin head in a vice,

Feedback.

im sorry but how is "bank on it" and "think bout it " a multie??

and why you bite big l man?

You need some actual multie'z in there.. or have some inner rhymne'z, and work on ur flow and content

bust this rhyme, don't give a fuck what u think-bout-it,
my styles like quicksand, I'll sink-yur-shit, u can fuckin bank-on-it,

i dont know why you put the dash'z in there, their not multie'z, multie'z are somethin like:

rap,? you can leave-it-to-me you try and you gettin beat-ed-wid-ease
fore im the man who'z been thru shit , now im who'z fuckin feed-in-em-cee'z

You need some actual multie'z in there.. or have some inner rhymne'z, and work on ur flow and content

bust this rhyme, don't give a fuck what u think-bout-it,
my styles like quicksand, I'll sink-yur-shit, u can fuckin bank-on-it,

i dont know why you put the dash'z in there, their not multie'z, multie'z are somethin like:

rap,? you can leave-it-to-me you try and you gettin beat-ed-wid-ease
fore im the man who'z been thru shit , now im who'z fuckin feed-in-em-cee'z

think bout it , and sink yur shit ( sink rhymes wid think, it rhymes wid shit, also bank on it, rhymes wid sink yur shit. Those are multies. An I didn't bite Big L. If he wrote that, than its a coincidence. He bit me. Lol I did have some multies in there. The second bar has good multies, in my opinion.

Big L owns you..

didn't read this.. i noticed all the words that were strung together with -'s weren't multi's and didn't bother because you're obviously an idiot :)

An I didn't bite Big L. If he wrote that, than its a coincidence. He bit me.

well no they might sorta rhyme..but theyre not multies

and saying big l bit you is just gnna make us wanna kill you..

Thanks for the feed. I'm never using fuckin "-" in my shit again, unless they are sum fuckin perfect, bad ass mulities cuz everyone ignores the rhyme, and content and just focuses on the damn "-" and talks shit.

nah, I just focus on the fact that they're not Multi's and you're a retard for thinking they are :)

this bar had 1 multie. Tor -na-dos, an To-ma-toes.

spin-nin like tor-na-dos, u ain't in Kan-sas no more, u fuckin Candy- ass bitch,
when u start spit-tin, they throw to-ma-toes, ur like a pig, squeelin to the cops, cuz yur a snitch,

but kansas and candy ass arnt and spit-ten was hyphenated why?

this bar had 1 multie. Tor -na-dos, an To-ma-toes.

Dude a multie needs at least 2 words fool.

lego my eggo !

Multie is slang for multiple and multiple means more than one. So, multiple rhymes must mean more than one rhyme, and thats by the word, not by the syllabol. Heres one

Help-me-out

twelve-seeds-sprout

..if it helps break it up into sylables and muthafucking clap bitch! lol but seriously that works..lol

Dude a multie needs at least 2 words fool.

no it don't. Its multiple syllable rhyming (meaning 2 or more syllables).
But they got match up perfect. Thats the minimum. But more is better cuz it picks up the flow.

legend and fiberawptic are you retarded??

multies= multiple syllable rhyming not multiple word rhyming

you don't need more than one word to be a multie...

ciggarette : big a threat

cig-a-rette
big-a-threat



ciggarette is all one word...it doesn't need to be more than one word (it can be but it doesn't need to be), as long as the syllables rhyme...to be honest you dont need every single syllable rhyming either

bad-im-pressions
ad-o-lescence


the "o" and "im" dont rhyme but the rest does so it gives the same effect


multies are overrated anyway..there important but this site rides the multie dick constantly


but matix don't put "-" where there isn't multies...shit just dont use "-" people who know what multies are can spot them without having "-" inbetween each syllable

concentrate on other things aswell as multies, flow,structure,emotion,good topics, sick concepts for lines, inner rhyming, all that shit

Exactly!^

i think you got the right idea.
there jus not in the right places.
i would consintrate on puttin them at the end of the lines.
most of them werent multiples imo except this one...


bust this rhyme, don't give a fuck what u thank-bout-it,
my styles like quicksand, I'll sink-yur-shit, u can fuckin bank-on-it


and thats only if you tweak "think" to "thank"


heres a link explaining it all...

http://shadyarchive.suddenlaunch2.com/index.cgi?board=library&action=display&num=1163583389



peace

Exactly!^

word^