this iz a rap to Bank, he told me to, and i will. not really a dis..i dont know what it iz lol

dont know why bank want'z me ta diss him
unless he'z lookin to steal a new rythmn
and well i accepted,
no reason ta be rejected
im not bein disrespective,
cuz bank iz someone who should be respected
that'z why i accepted
no need fo bank ta feel neglected
i see no reason fo him ta be dissed
im not meanin fo him ta be pissed
so he wont be feelin ma fist
cuz people'z are needin him ta exist
i hope to not seein him tryin ta resist
i dont know what the fuck im doin
whatever it iz i suck like people from the union
im sick of spittin shit
and kicking script'z
and spinnin disk'z
on ya frickin prick'z
when im rappin and my foe is'nt bein dissed
it like it aint got no action like it'z the main point that ya missed
so bank respect ya self like ya supppose to
dont neglect ya self and keep up the good post'z dude


I dont know what fuck that iz Lol..i just wrote somthin.

lmao..

LMAO i laugh at my self lol

Can you quit shane?

either that or write shit worth feed..

How come everyone gotta be an Ass hole...Just give the fool tipz or some shit, everyone alwayz gotta smart comment or a rude one, chill the fuck out ey

Anywayz....

Your 1st line Should ALWAYZ be shorter then you 2nd line. ALWAYS.
And you dont have to Skip a line every single time you have an ending rhyme.... For Example..

im sick of spittin shit
and kicking script'z
and spinnin disk'z
on ya frickin prick'z

^^^Thoes are cool multiez but u should have put them like this

im sick of spittin shit, and kicking script'z
and spinnin disk'z on ya frickin prick'z

^And add'd an extra word in there to make the 2nd line pass the 1st and make it flow better

And when ever ur coming up on a personal or punch/wordplay, Alwayz put it in the second line...it workz better that way, cuz the 1st line getz the set up and then 2nd one deliverz...get it, and dont be So unconfident in ur rhymez, Be cocky, Let em know whatz up, even if u think or they think ur wack...

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I'll Tell Ya What That Is,...That's Garbage.