OK, apparently I don't have enough punchlines, or they're not that impressive or whatever, so here's some for you real g'z hu dew dat str8 punchline shit. That style is wack, generic and played out, but here anyway:

Follow me quick, people calling me sick with all of my scripts
Tightest rapping, not Michael Jackson but I'll swallow you kids
Damn it I'm fresher, you're wack trash, this cat won't respect ya
Only time I give a guy head, is if I've severed one of his family members!
This kid won't respect you, your shit ain't the best dude
The whole damn Universe expands into my bedroom (the universe is expanding, no-one knows where to, you do now)
Pretend you're just sick, we know that many men are just pricks
Punches are so over the top, can see where space ends when I spit
You roll with wack crews, when you flow you're wack too
Fuck throwing guns up, I stole your mag dude and decided to throw it AT you
I'm crazy as fuck and blazing it up when saying this stuff
I'm taking my slut, making her suck my dick with AIDS in my nuts
Tightest rhymer, you hide behind a mic in cyphers
Got ninety nine million more brain cells times the bikes in China
So you know I've got the tightest flow, cause my rhymes are dope
Yeah, I'm Scottish, take a thistle and slice your throat, mindless hoe!!!
Fuck illiterate hypocrites, hit them quick with viscious scripts
When I was a little kid I was fucking sucking on a missple tip
Get socked with a right fist, love Hip-Hop and I'm tight bitch
I'm so ahead of my time, I'm standing back watching me type this

str8 key 4 all u muhfukkin g'z on dat real punchline gangst00000r shyt, ayo, dat direct shyt b wack, ya'll nead 2 b talm bout shyt u c00d say 2 ne1, iight? PEEZ!!!!!

p.s. stop watching Smack DVD.

lmao..dam some of those were sick...

i loved the closer!

pretty sick stuff tho..only one i didn't like much was the giving a guy head line..the rest were pretty sick...shit hot multies aswell...

Thanks, appreciated.

Upping.

Tightest rhymer, you hide behind a mic in cyphers
Got ninety nine million more brain cells times the bikes in China
Daym!


Loved It, Benny Boi...Keep Dat Punchline Shyt On Da Tracks And Run Em All, Na Mean? -Peas-

WOOOOOAAAHHHH, somebody is a bit fucking good! I loved this. Parts that stood out for me:

Tightest rapping, not Michael Jackson but I'll swallow you kids

Punches are so over the top, can see where space ends when I spit

I'm so ahead of my time, I'm standing back watching me type this

HOOOTT:).

fankz u pplz, ima b on dat str8 g punch line shyt 4 lyf, PEEZ!

i thought this was tight man. the only thing i didnt like was the so ahead of your time thing that shit is being so damn played out. but ya besides that it was ill

i thought this was tight man. the only thing i didnt like was the so ahead of your time thing that shit is being so damn played out. but ya besides that it was ill

Thanks for the feed back, it's appreciated.

About the ahead of my time thing - it's not really played out. It depends how you word it, if you said "I'm so ahead of my time that I open up a time capsule the same day you close it" that would be amazingly ill. But if you said "I'm so ahead of my time that my parents don't know me" or something, then that would be played out.

thats true

But just so you know, I wasn't saying MINE wasn't, because that's down to opinion, but just that that concept as a whole never gets old if you come with it right.

That closer was fucking fire.

yeah styles played as fuck but still pretty good lines

Do you guys reakon that " im so far ahead of my time im about to start another life's" played out?

anyway there were some tight punches in their and same with multies!

"I stole your mag dude and decided to throw it AT you"

^ the only line that didnt hit hard in my opinion..

I've never seen that line before, but you could get a little more creative with it, probably.

Anyway, thanks for the feed back, it's appreciated.

^That's It??? You Ain't Gon Rep None Of Us For Our Hardwork? Shit..

LOL, I've repped most of you recently anyway!!! I can't rep anyone in this thread. I already tried to rep you yesterday and it said I need to spread it.

nice multies..peace...HHS