I dropped these two bars as a tryout for a crew over on rap worlds.

Rip these rappers open, then leave them in the trash like unwanted gifts
Defeat me? They’re (h)armless, swinging punches like a man with no fists!
I’m before your time, coming to strangle you with your own umbilical cord
I’m ending fake gangsta boasts, the only time you bust CAPS is on a message board

wow sirius.... it's not AMAZING.... it's OK...




but it shows that your elevating ALOT...

Thank you Bank. You always said I can do alot better.

Yeah, what Frank said. You're elevating, try adding some multies now.

for sure add some multies... don't go crazy with them... but add some...





i aways said you could do better because i kno you can..


keep it up..

next time drop something dope...






hopefully it will be more than 2 bars also..

I'll drop new shit everyday and experiment with stuff.

Very Basic, Very Simple, Played Punches, Blah Wordplay, No Multies Whatsoever And What's With This I'm I'm Lines 1 After The Other? Don't Do That...Give The I'm I'm Some Gap.

If Trap Squad Is Somethin Like K.A.L, U'd Probably Get In. But If It Is A Dope Crew, I Doubt It. Sorry, If That Sounded Harsh. They'd Probably Tell Ya To Elevate And Then To Try Out. That's How Sometimes It Happened To Me 7-8 Months Ago.

You Need To Elevate ALOT, Son. And Remember 'Creativity' Is Everything In Text. Your Wordplay And Punches Should Be Crazy As Hell. They Should Be So Damn Twisted And Viciously Creative, That It Should Make The Readers Scratch They Heads And When They Finally Get It...They Should Go Like 'Ohhh, My God'. Just Think Of A Simple Punch, And Turn It Into A Masterpiece. And Please Use Multies, It Helps You With That Flow And Makes Ya Shit Readable. Use High End Wordplay, You Know'm Mean? Mix It With The Punches...Blend It Well And Then Pour That Bitch Into The Screen.

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I got in Trap Squad, and am trying to play the underestimation tactic.

'Creativity'

Pot. Plenty.